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Text Quality
Text Quality & Complexity and Alignment to Standards ComponentsGateway 1 - Meets Expectations | 87% |
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Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality | 16 / 16 |
Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence | 12 / 16 |
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for text quality and complexity and alignment to the standards. Text are of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading and consider a range of student interests. Materials meet the criteria for materials reflecting the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level. Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis. Students encounter a wide variety of texts with a range of length and difficulty throughout each unit and throughout the year. Materials meet the criteria that anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency. Materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria that most questions, tasks, and assignments are text-dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly. Materials provide opportunities and some protocols for evidence-based discussions. Materials partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports. Materials provide ample opportunities for students to practice a mix of both on-demand and process writing along with opportunities to engage in writing activities over the course of the year in a variety of modes, including argumentative, informative, narrative, and descriptive writing, as well as research writing and writing to sources. Materials partially meet the criteria for materials including instruction and practice of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application in context.
Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality
Texts are worthy of students' time and attention: texts are of quality and are rigorous, meeting the text complexity criteria for each grade. Materials support students' advancing toward independent reading.
Materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria that texts are worthy of students’ time and attention. Materials meet the criteria for anchor texts being of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading and consider a range of student interests. Materials meet the criteria for materials reflecting the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level. Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis. Students encounter a wide variety of texts with a range of length and difficulty throughout each unit and throughout the year. The texts are quantitatively supported by a Lexile level and qualitatively supported by purpose and rationale; this is provided for every unit and found within The Scope and Sequence Guide located in the Annotated Teacher’s Edition. Materials meet the criteria that anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.
Indicator 1a
Anchor/core texts are of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading.
The materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for anchor texts being of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading.
The materials reviewed for the American Tradition 11th grade curriculum meet the criteria as many of the anchor texts are widely read works of literature. Within the Grade 11 textbook, which focuses on American literature, students are presented with multiple texts worthy of reading, including selections from the Common Core Exemplars, that are worthy of reading, discussion, and analysis.
Examples of publishable and worthy texts include, but are not limited to, the following:
In Unit 1, students read “The Iroquois Constitution,” a government document. This document was first told as oral tradition, an important part of the worlds’ cultural history. The Lexile level is 1500, moderate for an 11th grade class, is age appropriate. This short piece also contains symbolism.
In Unit 2, students read Self Reliance by Ralph Waldo Emerson. This essay is written by a well-known American author and is worthy of students’ time and attention.
In Unit 3, students read The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave by Frederick Douglass. This engaging true story is grade appropriate due to its historical and cultural value.
In Unit 4, students read the short story, “To Build a Fire,” by Jack London. Students should find this suspenseful story engaging, and the moderate Lexile level is appropriate for 11th grade.
In Unit 5, students read “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” by T. S. Elliot. The dramatic dialogue is written at a moderate Lexile appropriate for 11th graders.
In Unit 6, students read “A Rose for Emily” by William Faulkner. This short story is engaging and worthy of students’ attention. It is written at a challenging Lexile level that is grade appropriate.
In Unit 7, the anchor text is an excerpt from On the Road by Jack Kerouac. This is a defining work of the Post War time frame.
In Unit 8, students read “Ambush” by Tim O’Brien. Students should find this realistic short story engaging with its climatic ending.
In Unit 9, the anchor text is “Dream” by Alice Walker. Ms. Walker is an African American writer whose perspective is worthy of reading.
Indicator 1b
*Indicator 1b is non-scored (in grades 9-12) and provides information about text types and genres in the program.
Indicator 1c
Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade level (according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis).
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for texts having the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis.
The majority of texts are at the appropriate quantitative level. Within the series, quantitative texts levels range from 320L-1550L, with some texts above and below the current grade level Lexile and stretch bands. Texts that are above or below grade level quantitative bands have qualitative features and/or tasks that bring them to the appropriate grade level. Along with Lexiles, each text is labeled as moderate, easy, or advanced. Texts are scaffolded with Units 1-5 as Guided, Directed, and Independent Reading, and Unit 6 is centered on Independent Reading. Supports are provided in the additional resource materials, particularly the Meeting the Standards Resource Guide that has guided reading activities with graphic organizers, vocabulary development, and practice quizzes. The Program Planning Guide contains lesson plans that provide student tasks and multiple reading strategies to support student learning.
Examples of texts that have the appropriate level of complexity include, but are not limited to:
In Unit 1, students read “The Navajo Creation Myth,” Lexile 1150. Considering this text is on grade level, some struggling readers might have difficulty; however, an ease factor considered with this creation myth is the shorter text length. Difficulty considerations consist of unfamiliar cultural references, challenging names, and abstract concepts.
In Unit 6, students read an excerpt from Let Us Now Praise Famous Men by James Agee, Lexile 1210. The difficulty considerations consist of long sentences, figurative language, and vocabulary. The ease factor for this text is subject matter. This text is a representation of the conditions that white sharecroppers experienced in the rural South during the depression era.
Examples of texts that are above the quantitative measure, but are at the appropriate level based on qualitative analysis and associated tasks include, but are not limited to:
In Unit 1, students read “A Journey Through Texas,” Lexile 1400. While the Lexile for this text is above grade level, the length is one of the ease factors. Difficulty considerations include the following: background information needed, unfamiliar setting, more description than action, and complex relationships. This text is a recount of the “sole survivors of a large party of Spanish explorers...in the summer of 1528.” This text is necessary in understanding America’s early history considering explorers traveled “on foot from present-day Louisiana through Texas, New Mexico, and Arizona to Sinaloa, Mexico, in colonized New Spain.”
Example of texts that are below the quantitative measure, but are at the appropriate level based on qualitative analysis and associated tasks include, but are not limited to:
In Unit 1, students read “The Osage Creation Account,” Lexile 850. While the Lexile level is below grade level, a difficulty consideration consists of unrealistic setting. The text focuses on the relationship between people and nature; the creation myth is “a piece of traditional literature that explores the interweaving of these elements and their role in the origin of the universe.”
In Unit 8, students read “The Rockpile” by James Baldwin. His canonical work of literature has a 820L. “The characters, members of an African American family in Depression-era Harlem, confront the issues that appear in various other Baldwin works: poverty, violence between African American males, and the importance of religion in the African American community.
Indicator 1d
Materials support students' literacy skills (understanding and comprehension) over the course of the school year through increasingly complex text to develop independence of grade level skills (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels).
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ literacy skills (understanding and comprehension) over the course of the school year through increasingly complex text to develop independence of grade level skills (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels).
The materials increase in rigor and complexity from month to month to the end of the year, growing students’ literacy skills. Units cover a range of reading skills, such as compare and contrast, drawing conclusions, clarifying information, asking questions, cause and effect, main idea, predicting, author’s purpose, sequencing, summarizing, and organizing text. For each text, students are presented with at least two skills that are refined throughout the reading. Units include differentiated instruction and reading skills for developing readers. The Program Planning Guide provides opportunities for students to practice reading skills and strategies in order to become College and Career Ready. As students use the skill of inferring throughout these units, the reading selections range from easy to challenging, with text complexity increasing students knowledge and understanding of what they are reading becomes critical. Within the Annotated Teacher’s Edition, instructors are presented with a variety of questions to pose to students as reading is taking place. Questions are typically formatted as discussions, so that students are required to refer to the text, analyze, and discuss the various concepts that are studied throughout. Texts contain a broad range of Lexile levels.
In the beginning of the year, the students are establishing routines for reading the selections in each unit. They are guided through the process of building background knowledge about a text, setting a purpose for reading, and taking note of reading skills that will benefit them when they start reading the text. Students are also guided through the process of using reading strategies and making connections while reading. Lastly, they are guided through the process of remembering details about the text and interpreting, analyzing, and evaluating the text after they have read it. In the middle of the year students are more practiced at before, during, and after reading strategies.Their ability to access and interact with the text is increasing, and student answers to questions and classroom discussions are likely increasing in depth. By the end of the year students are able to read, comprehend, and examine texts independently through established routines for thinking about the text before reading it, asking self-generated questions of the text while reading it, and answering provided questions that ask them to refer to the text and reason with the text after reading it. Examples include:
In Unit 4, students read Mark Twain’s short story, “The Notorious Jumping Frog of Calaveras County.” Not only is this anchor text complex in terms of Lexile (1440L), students are practicing analyzing specifics of dialect while also analyzing the short story as a frame tale. Within the Annotated Teacher’s Text, instructors must discuss frame tale with students: “Discuss the situation set up in the first paragraphs of the selection that allows Jim Smiley to tell his tall tale. Ask students to watch for a return to this frame situation at the end of the selection.” Instructors also remind students of the definition of dialect and then ask students to “find examples of the narrator’s word choice that offer clues as to his character and background.” Within this section where dialect is discussed, students must respond to the following questions: “How does the narrator’s word usage contrast with that of Simon Wheeler? What does Wheeler’s dialect reveal about him?”
In Unit 5, students read an excerpt from F. Scott Fitzgerald’s novel, The Great Gatsby. At the close of the text, students are presented with a collaborative learning task where they must evaluate the literature: “With a small group, discuss the value of The Great Gatsby as a literary work. Explore these questions: What gives a piece of writing literary value? Is this judgment purely subjective, or do universal traits characterize good literature? Why might The Great Gatsby have been unpopular with readers in the 1920s and 1930s? Encourage members to present and support a range of positions. Conclude by listing points on which the group agrees, explaining points on which it disagrees, and identifying points on which its response is ambiguous (unclear or neutral).”
In Unit 9, students read three anchor texts, both by Alice Walker: “Though We May Feel Alone,” a poem; “Dream,” a poem; and “My Mother’s Blue Bowl,” an essay. Students practice two skills throughout all three readings: Style and free verse. Within the Annotated Teacher’s Edition, instructors are presented with questions regarding style and free verse for each poem and the essay. For example, “Have students identify the characteristics of free verse in this poem.” There is a possible answer included along with this task. Instructors also do the following: “Ask students to identify diction and other elements of style that explain how, to the speaker, her mother and Lady Day are ‘as close as twins.’” Teachers are also given possible answers. At the close of the anchor text readings, students are presented with the following writing option: “Review the characteristics of free verse and other qualities of Walker’s style. Then write a poem imitating that style on a subject of interest to you. Share your work with one or more classmates.”
Indicator 1e
Anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria that anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.
The texts are quantitatively supported by Lexile level and qualitatively supported by purpose and rationale; this is provided for every unit and found within The Scope and Sequence Guide located in the Annotated Teacher's Edition. Each selection in the Teacher’s Edition also has a Preview the Model or Selection section that has notes on text complexity, difficulty considerations, and ease factor. In every Before Reading section, teachers are presented with objectives that students should master by the end of the text selection, and a Launch the Lesson section that gears students toward questions that reflect the theme(s) and issues present within the text selection. All of the texts chosen are connected and appropriate for Grade 11, while allowing for differentiation and flexibility for students and teachers.
Examples of instructional and text notes found in Grade 11 materials include the following:
In Unit 3, students read Abraham Lincoln’s speech “The Gettysburg Address.” The Lexile level identified in The Scope and Sequence is 1410L, a Moderate level. This speech is also paired with “The Second Inaugural Address,” another speech by Lincoln, identified as 1150L, Moderate level. The difficulty considerations for “The Gettysburg Address,” are context of speech and complicated sentences; the ease factors are length. The difficulty considerations for “The Second Inaugural Address” are style and background information needed; the ease factors are length. The rationale for reading these texts is supported in the Build Background, Meet the Author, Analyze Literature, and Purpose sections. Students practice parallelism and antithesis for the reading selections; the Set Purpose stands as “Both the Gettysburg Address and Second Inaugural Address were delivered on somber, even sorrowful occasions. Think about how President Lincoln recognized Americans’ solemn mood in preparing his remarks. Consider why he decided to use parallelism and antithesis to express his sentiments. As you read, note examples of each literary technique.”
In Unit 7, students read ”Daughter of Invention,” a short story by Julia Alvarez. In the Annotated Teacher's Edition, the Preview the Selection section provides teachers with guidelines for Text Complexity Reading level: Moderate, 930L. Difficulty Considerations include Spanish terms and political context; ease factors include vivid images. Analyze Literature includes, “Point out that the story has both serious and amusing features. The author refers to the brutality of Dominican dictator Trujillo and, briefly, to the Vietnam War, but she describes a characters with humor and writes mostly in a light-hearted style. Ask students to consider how the story would differ if the style and tone were more serious.”
Indicator 1f
Anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria that anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.
The materials are organized into nine chronological units based on time periods. Texts are not organized by Guided Reading, Directed Reading, and Independent Reading. Instead, the textbook--aside from the differentiated textbook--releases all responsibility to students. The units are broken up into two-three subsections, further dividing the time period covered by the unit. Each unit begins with a timeline and an introduction to the time period, and each subsection contains relevant period selections, some including Before and After reading activities to support students in their understanding and comprehension. Anchor texts include extra reading support and are spread out over the course of the unit. Each unit subsection culminates in at least one Independent Reading selection with activities such as questions about the text and writing options. Within each unit text types vary widely in genre, content, and length.
During the course of Unit 1, Origins of the American Tradition to 1800, students read multiple texts, each with a suggested pacing of one to two days. Students encounter a variety of texts including creation myth, tribal song, lyric poem, trickster tale, government document, travel narrative, nonfiction account, sermon autobiography, almanac, biography, speech, essay, pamphlet, and letter. The selections vary in genre, length, and content. Unit 1 begins with the Anchor Text, “The Osage Creation Account,” a creation myth by Osage, followed by another anchor text, an excerpt from The Navajo Creation Myth by the Navajo. Three other anchor texts are spread through the unit: “A Journey Through Texas,” a travel narrative by Alvar Nunez Cabeza de Vaca, an excerpt from The Autobiography of Benjamin Franklin and an excerpt from Poor Richard’s Almanac, both by Benjamin Franklin.
Unit 3, Slavery and Civil War (1850-1865), is divided into two parts. In Part 1: A Nation divided, students read the Anchor Text, from Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave. They also read two autobiographies, lyric poems, speeches, a spiritual, a short story, and a letter. In Part 2: Lyric Poems, students read two Anchor Texts, from “preface to Leaves of Grass,” and from “I Hear America Singing,” both by Walt Whitman. In this section, they also read multiple lyric poems, a ballad, a biography, an ode, and an online article.
During the course of Unit 7, which is divided into three parts, the focus is on the Post War Era (1945 - 1960). Part 1 is Real Life, Part 2 is Conflict and Conformity, and Part 3 is The Beat Movement. Within Unit 7, students are presented with three Anchor texts: a short story, a play, and a novel excerpt. Students are presented with poems, short stories, autobiographies, government documents, essays, and an elegy. The pacing for each text ranges between one and seven days. Each selection varies in genre, length, and content. Examples of the various texts include Flannery O’Connor’s short story, “The Life You Save May Be Your Own,” “Theodore Roethke’s elegy, “Elegy for Jane,” Arthur Miller’s play, The Crucible, Rosa Parks autobiography, Quiet Strength, and Gary Snyder’s poem, “Pine Tree Tops.”
Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence
Materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts to build strong literacy skills.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria that materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts. Some questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly. Materials provide opportunities and some protocols for evidence-based discussions. Materials partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports. Materials provide ample opportunities for students to practice a mix of both on-demand and process writing along with opportunities to engage in writing activities over the course of the year in a variety of modes, including argumentative, informative, narrative, and descriptive writing, as well as research writing and writing to sources. Materials provide opportunities across the school year for students to learn, practice, and apply research-based and evidence-based writing to support analyses, arguments and synthesis. Materials partially meet the criteria for materials including instruction and practice of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application in context.
Indicator 1g
Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text).
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria that most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text).
The materials provide a consistent format for students to engage with text-dependent questions and/or tasks. However, text-dependent/specific questions, tasks and assignments do not consistently support students’ literacy growth over the course of the school year. Many questions have students recall key details within texts and do not build to questions that ask students to analyze or infer based on what they have read. Questions do not grow in complexity across the course of the year.
Questions, tasks, and assignments can be found in Before and After Reading sections. The Before Reading section includes four subsections with questions embedded within the margins of the textbook: Build Background, Analyze Literature, Set Purpose, and Use Reading Skills. The After Reading section includes four subsections: Refer to Text, Reason with Text, Analyze Literature, and Extend the Text. The American Tradition curriculum also includes Differentiated Instruction, Common Core Assessment Practice, Meeting the Standards, and Exceeding the Standards guides that also provide text-specific questions. Each unit provides a variety of supports to text-dependent and text-specific questioning. Many questions that ask for student opinion require students to engage with the text directly as inferences are made, and students are required to provide support from the text in most of the work they complete within the unit.
In Unit 1, students read “The Osage Creation Account” and “The Navjo Creation Myth.” Within the Annotated Teacher Edition, teachers are assisted in posing questions that are text-dependent, text-specific in the Apply Reading Strategies section, such as: “Have students visualize what they are reading. Ask questions such as ‘What do you think the third world looked like?’ and ‘How do you picture the elk rolling around in the soft earth?’ Students can draw pictures to go with the stories.” Students must also answer questions in an After Reading Refer to Text and Reason With Text section, such as: “In ‘The Osage Creation Account,’ what problems did the Wazha’zhe encounter once they left their home? What effect might this myth have on the young Osage who listened to it? Support your answer with details from the myth.”
In Unit 2, students focus on Transcendentalism and read an excerpt from “Nature,” an essay, and the poem, “The Rhodora,” both by Ralph Waldo Emerson. Within the Annotated Teacher Edition, teachers are prompted to pose questions to students within the Apply Reading Skills section: “For the excerpt from 'Nature,' ask students to determine the main idea of each paragraph or section. To do so, have them locate the topic sentence and supporting details and then restate this information in their own words and record it on a chart.” Students then complete the After Reading, Refer to Text and Reason With Text section. Text-dependent questions within this section include: “According to Emerson, where does the power to delight in nature dwell (paragraph 3 of the essay)? Determine whether the speaker agrees with the sages that the flower’s charm is wasted because of its isolated spot.”
In Unit 3, students read the poem, “Ode to Walt Whitman” by Pablo Neruda, and answer questions in the Refer to Text and Reason with Text section, which include the following: “According to Neruda, what did Whitman send to the stroker? Why would this gift be unusual? Infer what Neruda is conveying about Whitman. Neruda begins his poem by speaking about Whitman. Look for the spot in the poem where Neruda begins speaking to Whitman. Suggest the reason for this shift in focus. How does Neruda describe his first encounter with Whitman’s poetry? Where did he often read the poet?”
In Unit 4, students read from “Song of Gold Mountain” by Marlon K. Hom. In the After Reading, Refer to Text and Reason With Text section, students are asked the following questions: “Recall what the first two speakers do as soon as they arrive in the United States. How do they feel about what happens to them shortly after they arrive? How does the third speaker refer to his captors? Judge what effect these poems had on the other detainees who read them.” In the Analyze Literature section, students are asked text-dependent questions, such as: “What did you infer about each speaker? For which one do you feel the most sympathy? Which do you feel has the most powerful way of expressing his situation? How is that achieved?”
In Unit 5, after reading an excerpt from The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, in the After Reading, Refer to Text and Reason With Text section, students are asked to answer questions, such as: “What happens at Gatsby’s house on the weekends? Describe how Fitzgerald viewed the lifestyle described in this selection. Did he admire it or disapprove of it? Explain.” Students are also asked to respond to questions in the Analyze Literature section that focuses on setting and narration. Questions include: “Identify the time and place in which the novel is set. What details convey the setting? Why is the setting important to the story?Who is the narrator? What is his relationship to Gatsby? Why did Fitzgerald choose this person to narrate the story? Would Gatsby or another character have been a more effective narrator? Explain.”
In Unit 6, students read literary nonfiction by James Agee from Let us Now Praise Famous Men. In the After Reading, Refer to the Text and Reason with Text section, students are asked the following: “Who are the inhabitants of Cudger House and where are they going? Explain what Agee means when he writes that ‘this house itself, in each of its objects, it, too, is one lens.’ What details in the limited descriptions of the landscape confirm that the location is rural?” In the Informative Writing section, students are asked to “Go through the selection, paragraph by paragraph evaluating the order in which Agee describes specific aspects of the Cudger house and the people who live in it. What does he describe first, next and so on? Write a paragraph evaluating the organization of this excerpt. Is it effective in creating vivid images of the people and the house?”
In Unit 7, after reading the short story, “The Life You Save May Be Your Own” by Flannery O’Connor, students take a reading assessment. For the constructed response portion of the assessment, students are asked to respond to this prompt: “Explain the meaning ot the title ‘The Life You Save May be Your Own.’ It is featured in the story as a sign Mr. Shiftlet sees as he drives away, but why did O’Connor likely choose it for the title of the story? Use evidence from the text to support your ideas.”
In Unit 8, students read “A Letter from Birmington Jail,” by Martin Luther King, Jr., and “Dr. King Arrested at Birmingham,” by Foster Hailey. Students are asked in After Reading, Refer to Text and Reason With Text section the following questions: “Under what conditions might a protester be called an “outside agitator? Suggest why 'outside agitator' became a popular insult used by critics of the Civil Rights movement to common protesters. Identify the four basic steps in a nonviolent campaign. How does one step lead to the next?” In the Extend the Text, Argumentative Writing section, students are given the following prompt: “A friend has asked for your views on King’s Birmingham letter. Write a brief analysis of King’s arguments, identifying their strengths and weaknesses and explaining why you agree or disagree. Include and defend inferences and conclusions drawn from King’s ideas and the way he organized them.”
In Unit 9, students read Naomi Shihab Nye’s poem, “What Is Supposed to Happen.” Students then respond to the Analyze Literature section: “Who is the speaker in ‘What Is Supposed to Happen’? What feelings is she expressing about being a parent? What does the title indicate about her feelings?”
Indicator 1h
Materials contain sets of sequences of text-dependent/ text-specific questions with activities that build to a culminating task which integrates skills to demonstrate understanding
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials containing sets of sequences of text-dependent/text-specific questions with activities that build to a culminating task which integrates skills to demonstrate understanding.
After every text selection in the After Reading, Refer to Text and Reason with Text section, there are text-dependent questions, and throughout each reading, there are strategies and activities that build students’ skills to complete the end of unit activities. Each unit includes three types of culminating activities: a Speaking and Listening Workshop, Writing Workshop, and Test Practice Workshop. The performance tasks that the students are asked to complete in these culminating activities correspond to the questions, discussions, and writing prompts that students have completed throughout the unit as they read the various selections.The lessons are detailed, follow a step-by-step process, have checklists to support students, and the Language Arts Handbook and the Exceeding the Standards Speaking and Listening Resource Guides support students by providing additional lessons on the skills necessary to complete each task. However, skills are often not integrated. Students complete each workshop independently of one another. Some tasks are loosely connected to unit texts, while others are not connected to texts. Students are often demonstrating mastery of the unit skills rather than demonstrating understanding or knowledge.
At the end of Unit 1: Origins of the American Tradition to 1800, there are three culminating tasks for the unit:
For the Speaking and Listening Workshop, students deliver an oral interpretation of a literary work. Activities throughout the unit that build to this culminating task include delivering a presentation on the Puritan lifestyle after reading “Huswifery” and conducting a talk-show interview with a partner after reading “Ben Franklin: Scientist and Inventor.” This task builds students’ presentation skills, but does not integrate skills to demonstrate understanding.
For the Writing Workshop, students write an argument defending a viewpoint. Students select their topic; gather information; organize their ideas into an argument chart; write their thesis statement; draft their introduction, body, and conclusion; evaluate their drafts; revise their drafts for content, organization, and style; proofread for errors; publish and present their work; and reflect on their work. Activities throughout the unit that build to this culminating task include:
completing a piece of argument writing after reading “A Journey Through Texas”: “Write a letter to the King of Spain recommending or opposing appointment of Cabeza de Vaca to a governorship in South America. Consider what Spain stands to gain or lose from the appointment.”
completing a piece of argument writing after reading an excerpt from The Crisis No. 1: “Imagine you are Paine’s publisher. Write a paragraph supporting his decision to write anonymously or encouraging him to use his own name.”
For the Test Practice Workshop, the first section asks students to practice using context clues through reading an excerpt from A Brief Account of the Devastation of the West Indies by Bartolome de las Casas; answer reading comprehension questions on the text; respond to a constructed response prompt on the text: “Using your own words (not quotations from the passage), write a detailed description of the ship owners;” and complete an extended writing prompt on an issue presented in this prompt: “In your opinion, is it better to read the book first and then watch the movie or to watch the movie first and then read the book?” This task asks students to write a description and an opinion. The task does not meet the requirements of grade-level standards.
At the end of Unit 3, in the Writing Workshop, students are asked to Solve a Problem: “In this assignment, you will explain and then solve the problem you are dealing with in your own life, proposing one or more reasonable solutions.” This task is not text-dependent and does not integrate skills to demonstrate understanding. Activities leading up to this task include:
Students read “from Incidents in the Life of a Slave Girl, Seven Years Concealed” by Harriet Jacobs (Linda Brent). In Writing Options, question two, asks students, “Write one paragraph explaining why Jacobs did not know she was a slave until she was six years old. How might that have shaped her personality and outlook on life? Use evidence from the text to support your answer.”
Students read "from Preface to Leaves of Grass” and “from I Hear America Singing”by Walt Whitman. In Extend the Text, Writing Options, Descriptive Writing: “Write an essay describing how you feel about living in your country. Include what you like about living in this country and what you do not like. Use real life experience to support your opinions.”
In Unit 6, Annotated Teacher’s Edition, the culminating activity is a Writing Workshop, Write a Personal Essay, Narrative Writing. The assignment states: "Write a personal essay that captures an essential aspect of your character. Purpose: To preserve a picture of who you are now and to share your thoughts with others. Audience: A new friend who does not know much about you or perhaps a potential employer or college admissions officer.” This task is not text-dependent and does not integrate skills to demonstrate understanding.
Indicator 1i
Materials provide frequent opportunities and protocols to engage students in speaking and listening activities and discussions (small group, peer-to-peer, whole class) which encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials providing frequent opportunities and protocols to engage students in speaking and listening activities and discussions (small group, peer-to-peer, whole class) which encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.
The materials provide opportunities and protocols for evidence-based discussions. There are opportunities for classroom discussion throughout the materials.The Program Planning Guide provides several evaluation forms for communication, such as: Communicating in a Pair Group (Self-Evaluation), Communicating in a Pair Group (Peer-Evaluation), Communicating in a Small Group, and Communicating in a Large Group. The Exceeding the Standards resource for speaking and listening includes rubrics for individual presentations. The Speaking & Listening rubric found in the Workshops gives explicit instruction on how students should share thoughts.
The EMC Passport Share feature gives students access to a digital tool that allows collaborative video discussions. Also in Passport, the Perform section allows for more formal video presentation opportunities. Using the Mirrors & Windows discussion prompts or the prompts in Extend the Text activities and projects makes for an engaging and efficient way for students to collaborate and analyze.
In Unit 1, Critical Thinking Discussion Guides are embedded at the text level throughout the American Tradition text, asking students to discuss with peers, groups, or the whole class details from the text, encouraging the use of text-specific vocabulary and evidence.
In Unit 4, students read “We Wear the Mask,” a poem by Paul Laurence Dunbar. One of the extension activities for the text asks students to Enact a Role-Play: “With a partner, identify a character from film, literature, or television who 'wears a mask.' Discuss these questions: From whom is the character trying to hide his or her feelings? How successful is he or she? What would happen if the character revealed his or her true feelings? Then have a dialogue with your partner. One of you should take on the persona of a character wearing a mask, and the other should try to get the character to disclose his or her true feelings and explain the reason for wearing the mask.”
In Unit 6, in the Annotated Teacher Edition, students read an excerpt from Let Us Now Praise Famous Men, a literary nonfiction by James Agee. The photography added to this section is by Walker Evans. Teachers are instructed: “To introduce the selection, ask students to examine Evans’s photographs. Then have the class discuss the subjects and settings of the pictures, and students’ responses to the photographs. Students should keep these images in mind as they read Agee’s text.” Also, within this same section of the Annotated Teacher Edition, instructors are presented with a Differentiated Instruction section: “Have students take turns reading passages aloud and then, as a group, discuss their meaning. This activity will give students practice in summarizing.”
In Unit 8, Speaking & Listening Workshop: Evaluate a Well-Known Speech or Speaker, students research and evaluate a well-known speech or speaker, demonstrating understanding of the message, rhetorical devices, memorable passages or phrases, and how the speech is similar to or different from other speeches of the same type.
Indicator 1j
Materials support students' listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports.
The materials provide the teacher with ample questions to engage students in thinking about and responding to the text; however, no explanation is given on how the students will share this thinking - be it verbal or written, individual, or in groups. There are few supports or follow up questions to support students' listening and speaking to deeper their understanding about what they are reading and researching.
Throughout the Annotated Teacher Edition there are many places that prompt teachers to have students discuss in the context of pre-reading. Since these discussion opportunities occur prior to actually reading the text, discussions aren’t evidence-based. For example, in The Launch the Unit section, questions for a whole-class discussion on the text type being studied in the unit are provided. The Speaking and Listening portion of the Exceeding the Standards resource provides opportunities for students to prepare projects, and to present information orally to the class through narratives, speeches, poems, dramatic scenes, and interviews, but these activities are not tied to the texts that are studied in the unit. In the Exceeding the Standards resource for speaking and listening, the majority of tasks are presentations--these supports tie to the speaking and listening requirements, but there are very few shared projects. Also, there are some relevant follow-up questions and supports, but the supports and follow-up questions are designed for students to respond to individually, rather than practicing through the Speaking and Listening standards with one another or in small and large groups.
Each unit includes a Speaking and Listening Workshop, but the emphasis is on the individual preparing for a particular presentation. There are collaborative research and discussion activities that can be found in the Teacher Edition, most notably as Teaching Note(s) that suggest activities for students to process the text they are reading through pair and small group work, often focused on generating questions about the text. Students may also take part in Collaborative Learning, which usually occurs in the After Reading section where students practice speaking and listening skills--this includes student planning for group activities, group skit presentations, short discussions, etc. There are other frequent questions and activities that are designed to have students speaking and listening, but they do not require the student to have interacted with the text being studied. Rather, they are based on personal thoughts and experiences and connections to themes.
The speaking and listening opportunities require students to provide evidence from what they are reading and researching. Examples include, but are not limited to, the following:
In Unit 3, students read “The Gettysburg Address” and “The Second Inaugural Address,” both speeches by Abraham Lincoln. In the Extend the Text, Collaborative Learning section, students research the Battle of Gettysburg, “With two or three classmates, give a formal presentation to the class about one aspect of the Battle of Gettysburg, such as events during the battle, or the significance of the battle. Use rhetorical devices effectively to communicate your ideas.”
In Unit 6, students read a selection from “No Ordinary Time” by Doris Kearns Goodwin. The Extend the Text Critical Literacy section prompts students to “Compare War Time Speeches. Find a famous World War II Speech in the library or on the internet. Write two paragraphs comparing and contrasting the themes and rhetorical techniques of that speech to Roosevelt’s speech. Present the speech and your findings to the class, making sure to use proper speaking rate and volume, as well as eye contact and gestures where appropriate."
Frequently, questions and activities provide speaking and listening opportunities about what students are reading and researching, but do not require students to have interacted with the text being studied. Discussions are based more on personal thoughts and experiences and connections to the themes. Examples include, but are not limited to, the following:
In Unit 1, in the Speaking and Listening Workshop, Present a Literary Work, students give an oral presentation. “Many people enjoy listening to readings of poems or brief works of prose, such as stories and essays. Presenting a poem or brief work of prose to an audience can be enjoyable, as well. Reciting a work of literature is known as oral interpretation. Following the steps outlined here will help you make the most of an opportunity to present a favorite work of literature to an audience.” Students are given five steps to guide them with their oral presentation:
Select a work
Familiarize Yourself with the Work
Practice Reading the Work Aloud
Memorize the Work, If You are Asked To
Present the Oral Interpretation. Students are evaluated with a Speaking and Listening Rubric on Content, Delivery and Presentation.
In Unit 9, Speaking and Listening Workshop, Present an Argument, students are preparing to present an argument. “A common reason for giving a speech is to present an argument. In doing so, the speaker makes a case to the audience to accept or reject a proposition or course of action. For example, when political candidates give speeches, their goal is to convince voters to agree with their positions and elect them.” For your own persuasive speech, select a topic such as school or community issue. Then develop an argument on the topic, gather details in support of the argument, and deliver a convincing speech. Your purpose in delivering a persuasive speech is the same as that in writing an argumentative essay: to convince others of your point of view. Keep that similarity in mind as you complete this workshop.” Students are given three steps to guide them in preparing them to present an argument:
Prepare an argument on a School or Community Issue
Gather information and Organize Your Presentation
Practice Your Delivery. Students are evaluated with a Speaking and Listening Rubric on Content, Delivery and Presentation.
Indicator 1k
Materials include a mix of on-demand and process writing grade-appropriate writing (e.g. grade-appropriate revision and editing) and short, focused projects.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials including a mix of on-demand and process writing (e.g. grade-appropriate revision and editing) and short, focused projects.
The materials provide ample opportunities for students to practice a mix of both on-demand and process writing. At the end of every reading selection, students are presented with an After Reading section that includes an Extended Text section. Within this section, students are presented with two on-demand writing options. At the close of every unit, students are presented with a Writing Workshop opportunity, which is a process writing where students prewrite, draft, and revise over time. Students are given both examples and steps to follow to ensure success. There are focused projects that incorporate digital resources where appropriate, as explained in the Introduction to Media Text and Visual Media resource.
Examples of on-demand and process writing that meet the criteria for this indicator include, but are not limited to, the following:
In the Unit 1 Writing Workshop, Argumentative Writing section, students are given a process writing opportunity with the following prompts:
“Whether it’s John F. Kennedy’s 'Ask not what your country can do for you' or, as you read in this unit, Patrick Henry’s fervent 'Give me liberty or give me death!' passionate addresses inspire audiences, persuading them to change their viewpoint or rise to action.”
“While few of us will be called on to deliver a speech that will affect national change, we still use words to persuade others, perhaps by convincing a friend to watch a certain movie or challenging our community to change a policy. Writing an argumentative essay is, then, merely an extension of what we do naturally in everyday life.”
“In this assignment, you will write an argumentative essay, defending a viewpoint that expresses an informed opinion about a topic that interests you. Support your opinion with information gathered from research on the topic.”
In Unit 2 of the the Annotated Teacher's Edition, students read “from Walden” by Henry David Thoreau. In Extend the Text, Writing Options section, students have an on-demand argumentative writing opportunity: “You are a local judge, and a citizen appears before your court to explain why he or she refuses to pay for a parking ticket. The individual says the car was parked illegally but that he or she needed the spot to keep an appointment to donate blood. Issue a decision in this case, explaining in a paragraph whether the individual should have to pay the parking ticket.”
In Unit 4, after reading the text, “How to Tell a Story” by Mark Twain, students:
Extend the Text, Creative Writing: Imagine that you are Jim Smiley, writing a memoir for fellow gamblers about your experiences. Write the last chapter in which you relate your worst gambling failure. Include the reason for your downfall.
Extend the Text, Narrative Writing: Write a one paragraph summary about the tall tale about a cow that Wheeler mentions at the end of the story. Imagine you are Mark Twain submitting an idea for a follow up story in The Saturday Press; your reader is the magazine’s editor.
After reading a passage from “Life on the Mississippi” by Mark Twain, Extend the Text, Writing Options, Creative Writing: Look at a map and identify towns along the Mississippi River that Twain might have visited in his days as a riverboat pilot. Write a postcard that Twain might have sent to his brother, Orion, from a town along the river.
At the beginning of Unit 7, students read an introduction to the time period, including information about “Postwar Challenges,” “The Cold War,” “The Red Scare at Home,” “The Domestic Scene,” and “The Civil Rights Movement.” The Teacher Edition includes on-demand writing options to go along with this introduction: “1. If you had been a public school student in the early days of the Cold War, what would you have thought about the periodically required ‘duck-and-cover’ drills? 2. When Senator Joseph McCarthy, a Republican form WIsconsin, conducted his anti-Communist crusade, he was not acting alone. What public attitudes gave credibility to the Red Scare? From what private-sector groups or government agencies did he likely draw support?”
At the end of Unit 9, students complete a process writing workshop where they compose a research paper: “Assignment: Plan, write, and revise a research paper that presents an argument about immigration. Purpose: To convince readers of your viewpoint. Audience: Someone who disagrees with your viewpoint or has no opinion on the topic.” This a multi-step process that takes them through the entire process of prewriting, writing, and revising.
Indicator 1l
Materials provide opportunities for students to address different types/modes/genres of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. Writing opportunities incorporate digital resources/multimodal literacy materials where appropriate. Opportunities may include blended writing styles that reflect the distribution required by the standards.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the the criteria that materials provide opportunities for students to address different text types of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. (Writing opportunities incorporate digital resources/multimodal literacy materials where appropriate. Opportunities may include blended writing styles that reflect the distribution required by the standards.)
The materials provide students ample opportunities to engage in writing activities over the course of the year in a variety of modes, including argumentative, informative, narrative, and descriptive writing as well as research writing and writing to sources. Within these general categories, there is also a wide variety of specific writing tasks. Each of the reading selections is followed by two writing activities in two different modes, and the writing workshop at the end of each unit gives an in-depth exploration and practice of a specific mode as well. Where appropriate, writing opportunities are connected to texts and/or text sets (either as prompts, models, anchors, or supports). Each lesson offers a purpose for the writing, a teaching and modeling section, examples to help guide students, and independent writing time.
In Unit 1, Annotated Teacher Edition, students read “Song of the Sky Loom,” Tribal Song of the Tewa. In the After Reading, Extend the Text, Writing Options section, students practice informative writing with the following prompt: “'Song of the Sky Loom' is a traditional literary work that deals with the interaction between the Tewa and the natural world. Find a twenty-first century American novel, film, or play that focuses on the interaction between human beings and nature. Write an essay comparing and contrasting the characters and text structure of the traditional 'Song' with those of the contemporary work. Use examples and evidence from the works to support inferences and conclusions about the way those literary elements are handled in the two periods.”
In Unit 5, students read two poems by Ezra Pound, “In a Station of the Metro,” and “The River-Merchant’s Wife: A Letter.” Students also read “A Few Don’ts by an Imagiste,” a literary criticism by Ezra Pound. Once students complete both poem reads and the literary criticism, students are presented with two writing options in the Extend the Text section within After Reading.
Creative Writing: “Write a poem in which you describe a scene that made an impression on you. Try to recreate Ezra Pound’s style by describing the scene using an image or images from nature, instead of directly stating how the scene affected you.”
Argumentative Writing: “Write a letter to the editor of Poetry magazine in which you express your opinion about the advice Pound offers in ‘A Few Don’ts by an Imagiste.’ Does he offer sound advice that all writers can use to improve their writing? Explain, using examples from the poem to support your argument.”
In Unit 6, students read a poem by Randall Jarrell, “The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner,” and students view various World War II recruitment posters. Once students read Jarrell’s poem and view the various posters, they are presented with two writing options in the Extend the Text section within After Reading:
Creative Writing: “In the role of the ball turret gunner, write a letter to a family member or friend back home that describes what you do. Include your feelings about your job, the war, and so on.”
Informative Writing: “Write a paragraph to introduce ‘The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner’ in a collection of poems written during wartime. Explain to readers what you perceive Jarnell says about war in this poem.”
In Unit 7, after reading “The Magic Barrel” by Bernard Malamud, students complete a text extension activity where they compose a piece of creative writing: “Write an epilogue to 'The Magic Barrel' in which you let readers know the fates of Leo, Stella, and Salzman. Your epilogue might include short-term events (for example, the rest of the story’s last scene), long-term events (what happens months or years later), or both.”
In Unit 8, after reading the short story, “Ambush,” by Tim O’Brien and the poems, “Camouflaging the Chimera” and “Monsoon Season,” by Yusef Komunyakaa, students complete a text extension activity where they compose a piece of informative writing: “Both Tim O’Brien and Yusef Komunyakaa are Vietnam veterans. How are O’Brien’s story ‘Ambush’ and Komunyakaa’s poems alike and how are they different? Write a comparison-and-contrast essay in which you discuss the story and the poems.”
Indicator 1m
Materials include frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support sophisticated analysis, argumentation, and synthesis.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials including frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support sophisticated analysis, argumentation, and synthesis.
The materials provide opportunities across the school year for students to learn, practice, and apply research-based and evidence-based writing to support analyses, arguments, and synthesis. At the end of every reading selection, in the After Reading/Extend the Text section, students are presented with two on-demand writing options that prompt students to complete short, research-based writing using the texts within the section. The writing prompts that require students to interact with the text explicitly state that the students need to cite evidence. Students experience research-based and evidence-based writing within every Writing Workshop section that occurs at the close of each unit. Many writing opportunities are focused around each student’s analyses and claims developed from reading closely and working with sources.
In Unit 1 students read “from The General History of Virginia” by John Smith and “from Of Plymouth Plantation” by William Bradford. In the After the Reading, Writing Options, Extend the Text, Creative Writing section, students are given the following prompt: “Both Smith and Bradford were successful leaders, but Smith left Virginia and Bradford stayed in Plymouth. For each man, write a paragraph that explains how his choice relates to his character and the motivation that drew him to the New World. Then write a paragraph making logical connections between the two situations. Support your ideas with examples from the text.”
In Unit 1 students read “from The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano, or Gustavus Vassa, the African, Written by Himself” by Olaudah Equiano. In Writing Options, students are given the following prompt: “This autobiographical narrative asks a number of rhetorical questions. Write a literary essay explaining how a Equiano uses these questions to create meaning, influence the reader, and evoke emotions. Include examples from the text and discuss inferences and conclusions that can be drawn from them.”
In Unit 2 students read “from Nature,” an essay by Ralph Waldo Emerson, and “The Rhodora,” a lyric poem by Ralph Waldo Emerson. After the Reading Writing Options, Extend the Text, Informative Writing section, students are given the following prompt: “Write a comparison-and-contrast essay in which you point out the differences and similarities between 'Nature,' and 'The Rhodora.' Use examples from each selection to support your ideas.”
In Unit Four, in the Exceeding the Standards Guide, Expository Writing, Explain the Process section, using How to Build a Campfire by USDA Fire Service students do the following:
Identify the major steps.
Identify what supplementary information is included in step 4.
Identify the active verbs used in each step.
Select a subject, identify purpose and audience, gather information, complete a process planning chart, organize information, draft, and revise.
In Unit 5, students read two novel excerpts by Ernest Hemingway: from The Sun Also Rises and from For Whom the Bell Tolls. Students also read Dorothy Parker’s essay, “The Artist’s Reward,” as a Literature Connection with the texts just read by Hemingway. Once students complete all readings, they are presented with two writing options:
The informative writing option requires students to go back to the text to support their claims regarding text structure; this informative writing task also requires students to research an outside story or recall a previous reading: “Read about the origin of Hemingway’s title The Sun Also Rises, on page 544. Now identify a character from mythic, traditional, or classical literature and write an essay explaining how that character’s confrontations with morality compare and contrast with Romero’s in the twentieth-century story The Sun Also Rises. Discuss whether the structure of Hemingway’s story draws attention to the theme of morality and whether it is effective compared with the structure of the related myth, traditional work, or classical work.”
The descriptive writing option requires students to reference all texts read in this selection: “Imagine that you met Jake Barnes or Robert Jordan and are writing a letter to a friend telling about the meeting. Based on the background information provided for the selections and what you have gleaned from reading them, write a one paragraph character sketch of either Barnes or Jordan.”
In Unit 5, students read “Petals,” a poem by Amy Lowell, and “Mid-Day,” a poem Hilda Doolittle. Once students read both poems, they are presented with two writing options at the end of the text selection in After Reading within Extend the Text; the second writing option requires students to compose a short comparison-and-contrast essay: "Informative Writing: Write a short comparison-and-contrast essay in which you discuss how nature imagery is used to create mood in ‘Petals’ and ‘Mid-Day.’ Compare the imagery, mood, and ideas each author wants to convey in her poem.”
In Unit 6, students read an excerpt from the novel, The Grapes of Wrath, and the short story, “The Chrysanthemums,” both by John Steinbeck. Once students read both text selections, they are presented with two writing options at the end of the text selection in After Reading within Extend the Text. The second writing option requires students to compose an analysis essay: "Informative Writing: Write an essay analyzing the importance of setting in both The Grapes of Wrath and ‘The Chrysanthemums.’ Use examples from the novel and the story to support your opinion.”
In Unit 7, after reading “Riprap” and “Pine Tree Tops,” both by Gary Snyder, students complete a Text Extension activity which requires them to use evidence from the text: “Write a comparison-and-contrast essay in which you compare ‘Riprap’ or ‘Pine Tree Tops’ with another poem by a Beat writer featured in this unit. Focus on form, style, language, and imagery, explaining how each poet uses these elements to convey his intended message.”
In Unit 8, after reading “Game” by Donald Barthelme, students complete a text extension activity which requires them to use evidence from the text: “Write a one-page character analysis of the narrator. Base your analysis on details from the story and what you can infer about his life before going underground.”
In Unit 9, after reading “What is Supposed to Happen” by Naomi Shihab Nye, students complete a Text Extension activity which requires them to use evidence from the text: “Stanza 2 uses striking images to portray its setting without actually naming it. Write a one-paragraph explication, or careful analysis of the text, that discusses the effectiveness of the images in stanza 2.”
Indicator 1n
The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials including instruction and practice of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application in context.
The materials contain several workshops in grammar and style, as well as vocabulary and spelling. Within each unit, students experience between two and six Grammar and Style Workshops; all workshops have students practice various grammatical and syntactical tasks that apply directly to the texts they read within the unit. However, there is inconsistent support for students to practice in increasingly sophisticated contexts. The skills instruction does not include opportunities for application both in and out of context. Additionally, the materials do not promote and build students’ ability to apply conventions and other aspects of language within their own writing. There are minimal opportunities to practice skills taught in the unit with the selected readings in the Teacher’s Edition, therefore limiting opportunities for increased sophistication of the addressed standards. While the resource workbook, Exceeding the Standards, includes “comprehensive skills development lessons," the same language standards are not necessarily addressed during the Writer’s Workshop task or other possible places within the unit of study. Therefore, students are not consistently given opportunities to apply the lessons on grammar and conventions in context.
In Unit 1, students experience two Grammar and Style Workshops. Within each Grammar and Style Workshop, students practice Understand the Concept and Apply the Skill sections.
Within this particular Grammar & Style workshop, students are focusing on verb tenses; however, within the Grade 11 text, many supports are removed considering the material is more condensed within the Understand the Concept section. Students practice the skill within the Apply the Skill section: Identify the Correct Tense and Revise to Create Agreement. For example, when students practice identifying the correct skill they must do the following: “In each of the following sentences, identify the correct tense from the choices in parentheses.” An example of this is as follows: “5. Edwards’s style as a speaker (will be studied/is studied) by generations to come.”
Subject-Verb Agreement: Within the Grade 11 text, many supports are removed considering the material is more condensed within the Understand the Concept section. Students practice the skill within the Apply the Skill section: Identify Agreement and Revise to Create Agreement. For example, within Revise to Create Agreement, students must “Revise the following paragraph to create agreement between subject and verb.” The paragraph that students see is as follows: “Modern-day readers of John Smith’s work probably responds according to their cultural background. For instance, either a deep faith or an interest in Native American history influence some readers. Neither the teacher nor students uneasy with a word like savages is likely to accept Smith’s account without some reflection. What has scholars learned, over the generations, about the impact of language on education?”
In Unit 2, Exceeding the Standards Resource, students practice five different lessons. Within Lesson 8, which has four exercises, students practice Pronoun Cases: The Nominative Case, the Objective Case, and the Possessive Case.” Students, within Exercise 3 practice the following exercise: “For the ‘Local Humor’ column in your student newspaper, write a brief description of an amusing event in which you and your friends were involved. Correctly use at least two examples of pronouns in each of the cases: nominative, objective, and possessive.”
Unit 4, Expanding Frontiers 1865-1910, includes three Grammar and Style Workshops: Irregular Verbs, Modifiers, and Verbal Phrases. It does not contain any vocabulary and spelling workshops.
In the Irregular Verbs Workshop, students read about how to use regular and irregular verbs correctly. They then complete practice exercises such as replacing the irregular verb in parentheses with the correct form of the verb: “1. The dog Andrew Jackson (bite) the hind legs of the other dog last week.”
In the Modifiers Workshop students read about using adjectives and adverbs effectively. They then complete practice exercises such as looking at a sentence and underlining the adjectives once and the adverbs twice: “1. Two or three men, conversing earnestly together, ceased as he approached, and exchanged significant glances.”
The Vocabulary and Spelling section of The Exceeding the Standards booklet includes practice exercises to support the determining meaning workshop: detonation and connotation, literal vs. figurative language, and homophones.
In Unit 5 ,Grammar and Style, Understand the Concept, students learn the concept of coordination. In Applying the Skill, students "Identify Coordinating Conjunctions" in sentences. Students "Correct Coordinating Conjunctions" by correcting sentences with the appropriate subordinating conjunction. Students also "Use Coordination in Your Writing" by writing a summary and identifying the coordinating clauses used.
In Unit 6. Grammar and Style, Understand the Concept, students learn the concept of Possessive Nouns and Pronouns. In Applying the Skill, students "Identify Possessive Nouns and Pronouns" that function as modifiers in a sentence. Students "Improve the Use of Possessive Nouns and Pronouns" by correcting mistaken uses of possessive nouns and pronouns in a paragraph. Students also "Use Possessive Nouns and Pronouns" by writing a paragraph describing your favorite hobbies.
In Unit 7, Exceeding the Standards Resource, Grammar & Style, students are taught Punctuation and Capitalization. There are four lessons on Punctuation and three on Capitalization.
Lesson 45: Semicolons and Colons. A semicolon joins two closely related independent clauses. Examples are provided, and then “Use a semicolon between independent clauses joined by a conjunctive adverb or a transitional phrase.” Examples are given and there are two charts provided for students: Common Conjunctive Adverbs and Common Transitional Phrases. Exercise 1, Understanding Semicolons asks students to “Combine each pair of independent clauses by correctly placing a semicolon between them."
In Unit 8, Exceeding the Standards Resource, Grammar & Style, Lesson 52, reviews Sentence Fragments. “A sentence contains a subject and a predicate and expresses a complete thought. A sentence fragment is a word or word group that does not express a complete thought but that has been punctuated as though it does. Examples are provided, Exercise 1, “Identifying Sentence Fragments in Literature, Identify each of the following items as either a sentence or a sentence fragment.”
In Unit 9, Grammar & Style, Quotations, Understand the Concept, an explanation is provided for when to use quotations. “Whether writing an essay or a research paper, you should use information from other sources to lend credibility to your ideas.” Examples are provided, and then students Apply the Skill, Improve the Use of Quotations, “Rewrite each of the following sentences to correctly use the quoted text, which is underlined. Consider “the capitalization and use of punctuation (commas and quotation marks) in quoting either a fragment or an entire sentence, as indicated.”