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Comprehension
Comprehension Through Texts, Questions, and TasksGateway 2 - Meets Expectations | 89% |
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Criterion 2.1: Text Quality and Text Complexity | 14 / 14 |
Criterion 2.2: Knowledge Building Through Reading, Writing, and Language Comprehension | 36 / 42 |
Criterion 2.1: Text Quality and Text Complexity
Information on Multilingual Learner (MLL) Supports in This Criterion
For some indicators in this criterion, we also display evidence and scores for pair MLL indicators.
While MLL indicators are scored, these scores are reported separately from core content scores. MLL scores do not currently impact core content scores at any level—whether indicator, criterion, gateway, or series.
To view all MLL evidence and scores for this grade band or grade level, select the "Multilingual Learner Supports" view from the left navigation panel.
Materials include content-rich, engaging texts that meet the text complexity criteria for the grade level. Texts and text sets cohesively work together to build knowledge of specific topics and/or content themes.
The Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for Criterion 2.1: Text Quality and Complexity. The program provides a wide range of high-quality, engaging texts across genres that are thematically rich and appropriate for high school students; however, the balance of informational to literary texts falls short of the recommended 70/30 ratio, and the absence of long-form works limits opportunities for sustained reading and stamina development. Comprehensive text complexity analyses, including quantitative and qualitative measures, ensure that texts are well-matched to grade-level expectations and instructional purposes. Scaffolding is robust and adaptive, providing multiple levels of support that maintain rigor while increasing accessibility for diverse learners. Text sets are cohesively structured within each unit to deepen understanding of central themes through interconnected reading, discussion, and writing tasks. While the materials include a range of perspectives and varied voices, teacher guidance for navigating sensitive topics and supporting related discussions remains general rather than text-specific. Overall, the program provides strong text quality, complexity, and organization, with opportunities to improve in text balance, extended reading opportunities, and targeted instructional support.
Indicator 2a
Materials provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading through content-rich and engaging texts.
The text quality and volume of reading in Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for indicator 2a. The program includes a wide variety of literary and informational texts across genres, such as poetry, short stories, essays, memoirs, speeches, articles, dramas, and multimedia sources; however, the materials do not reflect the required 70/30 balance of informational to literary texts as per the grade-level standards. Across all high school grades, informational texts make up only about 39–54% of the total, falling short of expectations. The program features only short-form works, comprising a mix of full texts and excerpts, all carefully selected for their literary quality, thematic relevance, and potential for analysis. However, the complete absence of long-form works—such as full novels or book-length nonfiction texts—limits students’ sustained reading experiences and opportunities to build stamina, comprehension, and deep analytical skills essential for college and career readiness. Texts are content-rich, well-crafted, and developmentally appropriate, featuring varied voices and engaging topics such as identity, freedom, heroism, and morality. The program supports independent reading through structured resources, including an Independent Reading Guide, Independent Reading Log, and Individualized Teacher/Student Conferences materials, which help teachers monitor progress and foster student reflection. These tools encourage autonomy, goal setting, and comprehension through flexible scheduling, reading conferences, and connections between independent reading and unit themes.
Materials include core/anchor texts that are well-crafted, content-rich, and engaging for students at their grade level.
The Lenses on Literature curriculum for Grades 9-12 includes well-crafted, content-rich texts that provide a mix of literary and informational works across various subgenres. Literary texts include short stories, poetry, dramas, and excerpts from graphic novels, while informational texts encompass articles, legal documents, memoirs, essays, book excerpts, and speeches, with a focus on the arts, history, science, and social studies. The program features works by widely respected authors and presents age-appropriate themes that engage students at each grade level. Texts are selected for their connections to each unit’s Driving Task Prompt, cultural representation, connection to unit themes, strong themes, connection to the unit’s genre focus, and noteworthy elements of author’s craft, such as rich sensory language, symbolism, plot structure, use of irony, use of satire, layered multi-dimensional characters, and organizational structure. These factors make texts worthy of student study, enhancing students’ comprehension and analytical skills.
Grade 9 materials include texts on heroism, society, perception, persuasion, villainhood, perspective, and morality, which will engage 12th-grade students.
Grade 10 materials include texts on identity, love, existential questions, beauty, war, humanity, and origin stories, which will engage 10th-grade students.
Grade 11 materials include texts on protest, freedom, environmental impact, voice, assimilation, and being American, which will engage 11th-grade students.
Grade 12 materials include texts on beauty, pain, humor, storytelling, advocacy, tragedy, art, and the relationship between science fiction and reality, which will engage 12th-grade students.
Throughout the materials, texts are content-rich, well-crafted, and worthy of student analysis.
In Grade 12, Unit 5, students read The Tragedy of Macbeth by William Shakespeare, which includes complex language with archaic or unfamiliar syntax, shifts in point of view, and figurative language to express multiple complex themes.
Note: As part of this review, the publisher submitted documentation detailing text characteristics, including genre and subgenre classifications and counts of full texts, excerpts, long-form texts, and short-form texts. The information below is presented as contextual evidence only and is not factored into the overall score or rating.
Materials do not reflect the balance of informational and literary texts required by the grade-level standards (70/30 in 9-12), including various subgenres. Materials include a range of full texts and excerpts, depending on their stated purpose. The materials do not include both long and short form texts. (The information below is presented as contextual evidence only and is not factored into the overall score or rating.)
In Grade 9, materials reflect a balance of 52/48, informational to literary texts, which does not reflect the 70/30 balance required by the grade-level standards.
Materials include 46 core texts, 24 of which are informational texts and 22 of which are literary texts. Five additional videos, a painting, and two sets of images serve as additional “texts.”
Texts include the following subgenres: article, graphic novel excerpt, short story, poetry, speech, essay, book excerpt, painting, images, and video.
In Grade 9, materials include 40 full texts and six excerpts.
In Grade 9, materials include 46 short-form texts and zero long-form texts.
In Grade 10, materials reflect a balance of 43/57, informational to literary texts, which does not reflect the 70/30 balance required by the grade-level standards.
Materials include 65 core texts, 28 of which are informational texts and 37 of which are literary texts. A video serves as an additional “text.”
Texts include the following subgenres: memoir, article, short story, poetry, essay, book excerpt, speech, and video.
In Grade 10, materials include 53 full texts and eight excerpts.
In Grade 10, materials include 65 short-form texts and zero long-form texts.
In Grade 11, materials reflect a balance of 54/43, informational to literary texts, which does not reflect the 70/30 balance required by the grade-level standards.
Materials include 61 core texts, 33 of which are informational texts and 28 of which are literary texts. A set of images and four videos are used as additional core “texts.”
Texts include the following subgenres: speech, essay, article, poetry, short story, memoir, legal document, drama, video, and images.
In Grade 11, materials include 51 full texts and 10 excerpts.
In Grade 11, materials include 61 short-form texts and zero long-form texts.
In Grade 12, materials reflect a balance of 39/61, informational to literary texts, which does not reflect the 70/30 balance required by the grade-level standards.
Materials include 49 core texts, 19 of which are informational texts and 30 of which are literary texts. A video and four audio clips serve as additional core “texts.”
Texts include the following subgenres: poetry, essay, article, drama, speech, short story, novel excerpt, and video.
In Grade 12, materials include 36 full texts and 13 excerpts.
In Grade 12, materials include 49 short-form texts and zero long-form texts.
The publisher provides a clear rationale for why each excerpted text was selected for each unit; however, there is no clear explanation for why each text was excerpted instead of taught in its entirety.
Note: As part of this review, the publisher submitted documentation outlining text characteristics, including genre and subgenre designations and counts of full texts, excerpts, long-form texts, and short-form texts.
Materials include sufficient teacher guidance (including monitoring and feedback) and student accountability structures for independent reading (e.g., independent reading procedures, proposed schedule, tracking system for independent reading). (The information below is presented as contextual evidence only and is not factored into the overall score or rating.)
The Carnegie Learning portal includes an Independent Reading Guide in the Supplemental Resources section, under the Independent Reading heading. The guide outlines how independent reading supports student autonomy, reinforces reading and thinking skills, and fosters lifelong reading habits. The guide offers flexible scheduling models (45- and 90-minute blocks) that demonstrate how teachers can integrate daily independent reading into the literacy block alongside unit lessons. It recommends using the Adapt & Extend resource—particularly the READ MORE section—to connect independent reading to unit themes through suggested texts and novel studies. Students are encouraged to track their progress using an Independent Reading Log and to record reflections by applying the Pause-Notice-Question-React Anchor Strategy. Teachers can hold individual reading conferences during this time, using the Teacher Log to monitor progress, provide feedback, and support fluency and comprehension. The document also includes suggestions for accessing diverse, high-interest texts in multiple formats, such as print, digital, and audiobooks, to ensure all students have meaningful and engaging reading experiences.
A blank Independent Reading Log is provided in this section of the portal. The log is a student tool designed to help learners set reading goals, monitor their progress, and reflect on their reading experiences. Students record their weekly reading goals, track the book titles, authors, and page numbers they read, and document their observations, questions, and reactions to texts. This log encourages students to engage actively with their independent reading, develop metacognitive awareness, and take ownership of their growth as readers. It supports goal-setting, accountability, and reflection throughout the independent reading process.
An Individualized Teacher/Student Conferences document is also provided in this section of the portal. This document provides teachers with tools and prompts to conduct one-on-one reading conferences with students throughout each unit. It includes a Teacher Log for tracking conference details, such as student name, book title, date, and observations, which supports consistent documentation of student progress. The guide organizes suggested prompts according to the six sections of the program’s “journey tracker,” aligning conferences with unit goals. During the Unit Launch, teachers use the Pause–Notice–Question–React framework to help students reflect on initial impressions and questions about a text. In Reading for Comprehension and Building Knowledge, prompts guide students to identify central ideas, make inferences, use context clues, and connect ideas across texts. In Genre Study, students analyze language, structure, and author choices, comparing features across texts to understand genre conventions.
Indicator 2b
Core/Anchor texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to documented quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, and relationship to their associated student task.
The text complexity analysis in the Lenses on Literature materials meets expectations for indicator 2b. The materials include comprehensive text complexity analyses and rationales for all core and anchor texts, as well as Text Info Sheets located in the Teacher Resources section of the Carnegie Learning portal. These sheets provide bibliographic information, quantitative and qualitative measures, text summaries, instructional rationales, and content considerations. Quantitative data include Lexile levels and word counts, while qualitative analyses address levels of meaning or purpose, text structure, language clarity, and knowledge demands. The difficulty and ease factors of each text are outlined to help teachers anticipate potential challenges for students. The analyses confirm that texts are appropriately complex for their respective grade levels, considering both the text itself and the associated tasks. Additionally, Context Companion documents for each unit offer teachers relevant literary, historical, and cultural background to support student comprehension. Across grades 9–12, the materials include texts that are appropriately complex for their respective grade levels, with most falling within or near the recommended Lexile bands and classified as moderately complex. Very few texts are labeled very complex, and none are exceedingly complex. Overall, the materials provide clear, research-based rationales for text selection and placement, ensuring that each text’s complexity and purpose align with instructional goals.
Accurate text complexity analysis and a rationale for educational purpose and placement in the grade level accompany core/Anchor texts and a series of texts connected to them.
The materials include Text Info Sheets in the Teacher Resources section of the Carnegie Learning portal, specifically in the Text and Media Selection section, for all core and anchor texts in the program. This guidance includes bibliographic details, text type, genre, quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, a text summary, an instructional rationale, and content information on considerations relevant to the text. The quantitative measures include Lexile and word count. The qualitative measures include a summary of the levels of meaning/purpose, text structure, language conventionality and clarity, and knowledge demands. The document also explains the difficulty and ease factors that students may encounter when accessing each text, based on its qualitative complexity.
According to quantitative and qualitative analysis and their relationship to the associated student task, core/anchor texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade.
Anchor texts have the appropriate level of complexity based on their text complexity analysis and the associated reader and task. For each core/anchor text in the program, Text Info Sheets present the quantitative complexity and summarize the qualitative complexity of each text, as well as the unique difficulty factors and ease factors for each core and anchor text. The document also explains the difficulty and ease factors that students may encounter when accessing each text, based on its qualitative complexity. For each unit, the materials include a Context Companion, which can be found on the Carnegie Learning portal under Unit Overview, Teacher Planning Tools for each unit. These documents include “literary, philosophical, historical, cultural, or other information related to the unit topics. This guide provides additional background not found in the lesson plans or Text Information Selection Sheets.” Teachers are to use this resource to prepare to support students with the unit’s reading. Throughout the program, tasks are appropriate for each grade level.
Note: For this review and norming to other reviews, the publisher submitted qualitative information on levels of meaning/purpose, text structure, language conventionality and clarity, and knowledge demands for each text.
Grade 9
Quantitatively: Texts range from 650L-1430L
19 texts are below the Lexile range for the grade band
17 texts are in the Lexile range for the grade band
4 texts are above the Lexile range for the grade band
6 texts are Non-Prose (NP) or do not have a Lexile, given their format
Qualitatively: Four texts are slightly complex, 39 texts are moderately complex, three texts are very complex, and zero texts are exceedingly complex.
Grade 10
Quantitatively: Texts range from 560L-1510L
14 texts are below the Lexile range for the grade band
27 texts are in the Lexile range for the grade band
Five texts are above the Lexile range for the grade band
19 texts are Non-Prose (NP) or do not have a Lexile, given their format
Qualitatively: Three texts are slightly complex, 61 texts are moderately complex, one text is very complex, and zero texts are exceedingly complex.
Grade 11
Quantitatively: Texts range from 720 -1590L
21 texts are below the Lexile range for the grade band
12 texts are in the Lexile range for the grade band
Seven texts are above the Lexile range for the grade band
21 texts are Non-Prose (NP) or do not have a Lexile, given their format
Qualitatively: Nine texts are slightly complex, 48 texts are moderately complex, four texts are very complex, and zero texts are exceedingly complex.
Grade 12
Quantitatively: Texts range from 600L-1530L
15 texts are below the Lexile range for the grade band
13 texts are in the Lexile range for the grade band
Three texts are above the Lexile range for the grade band
18 texts are Non-Prose (NP) or do not have a Lexile, given their format
Qualitatively: Four texts are slightly complex, 40 texts are moderately complex, five texts are very complex, and zero texts are exceedingly complex.
Indicator 2c
Materials provide appropriate scaffolds for core/anchor texts that ensure all students can access the text and make meaning. Scaffolds align with the text’s qualitative analysis.
The scaffolding in Lenses on Literature materials meets expectations for indicator 2c. The materials provide scaffolds that align with the qualitative complexity of texts, supporting students before, during, and after reading. Teachers can assign one of four levels of support—Core (baseline), Light, Moderate, or Intensive Multilingual—which offer increasing layers of assistance, such as vocabulary aids, sentence starters, annotation cues, and simplified instructions. These scaffolds are automatically embedded within digital assignments once support levels are set at the start of each unit. Before reading, supports include front-loading activities such as text summaries and vocabulary previews. During reading, students have access to tools like audio options, glossed terms, and guided annotation questions. After reading, they engage with structured graphic organizers, sentence frames, and comprehension activities to consolidate their understanding. Teacher guidance for implementing these supports is provided in the How to Support Varied Learning Needs with Lenses on Literature document, which outlines how to use both internal data (e.g., formative and summative assessments) and external data (e.g., IEPs, state or district assessments) to determine appropriate support levels. Additional guidance is provided in each the Teacher Edition on each Lesson at a Glance page. The system ensures that scaffolds align with students’ current performance and linguistic needs, providing access to complex texts without diminishing cognitive rigor.
Scaffolds align with the qualitative complexity of the program’s texts to support students in making meaning of each text. Materials include scaffolds for before, during, and after engaging with a complex text.
The Lenses on Literature Carnegie Learning portal provides scaffolds for texts and tasks based on student needs. Supports are intended for use by both MLL and non-MLL students. Teachers can set student scaffolds at four different levels of support at the beginning of each unit:
Core/Multilingual: “Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.” This is the baseline default support set for all students.
Light/Multilingual: “Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.”
Moderate/Multilingual: “Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.”
Intensive/Multilingual: “Offers modifications to the content to streamline student thinking and prioritize focus skills.”
Supports within these levels include:
Before Reading: Frontloading: text summaries and text summaries in students ' home language
During Reading: Accessibility Measures: audio support for all texts
During Reading: Text Support: embedded annotation cues and leveled versions of informational texts (in the Building Knowledge Section of units), where possible
During Reading: Vocabulary Support: additional glossed terms, synonyms, translated definitions, and cognates in the home language
After Reading: Graphic Organizer Support and Constructed Response Support: editable sentence frames and partial response included
After Reading: Activity instruction support: rephrased/simplified instructions, additional substeps, comprehension support activities
In Grade 11, Unit 2, Section 2: Comprehension, students read “How it Feels to be Colored Me” by Zora Neale Hurston. This text serves as the anchor text of the unit, which students read several times throughout the unit’s “journey tracker.” This text’s quantitative complexity places it below the grade band’s Lexile range, and it is qualitatively moderately complex. The Text Info sheet available to teachers on the portal states that the difficulty factors for students reading this text may be: “There are a number of compound and complex sentences, along with a few instances of archaic and high-level vocabulary. The latter are either discernible through context clues or defined in the Selection Vocabulary that follows the article.”
Before reading: Students complete a vocabulary activity in which they review and sort key vocabulary to determine the meaning of words in the text. Students sort the following vocabulary words: aristocratic, abrupt, circumlocutions, daring, disembarked, ebb, exultingly, heathen, narcotic, primitive, proscenium, raiment, rambunctious, saunter, sea change, skirmish, spectators, tragically, and venturesome. Students complete the graphic organizer, and the materials provide scaffolds tailored to each student’s set level of support on the portal. For example, at the Moderate-Multilingual level, students receive a list of examples of labels so they may consider how to label the words they’ve grouped. Before reading, teachers also review the concept of “figure of speech” with students to prepare them for the task they will complete during reading.
During reading: Students annotate the text, “marking and responding to details that help [them] answer these questions: “What is the central idea of the text? What figures of speech does the author use? What interactions and experiences does the author describe? How do these interactions and experiences make the author feel?” They may also listen to the text read aloud.
At the Core-Multilingual Level: 21 words and phrases are included as glossed terms, including some of the words that students grouped and labeled in the previous vocabulary activity. These words support all students who have a difficulty factor identified in the Text Info Sheet, high-level vocabulary.
At the Light-Multilingual Level: Additional words and phrases are included as glossed terms, and there are stopping points after every three to five paragraphs with questions to guide student annotations—these questions narrow students’ focus to help them make meaning of the text. Students may also listen to these questions read aloud.
At the Moderate-Multilingual Level: Additional words and phrases are included as glossed terms, and there are stopping points after every one to four paragraphs with questions to guide student annotations—these questions narrow students’ focus to help them make meaning of the text. Students may also listen to these questions read aloud.
At the Intensive-Multilingual Level: Additional words and phrases are included as glossed terms, and there are stopping points after every one to four paragraphs with questions to guide student annotations—these questions narrow students’ focus to help them make meaning of the text. Students may also listen to these questions read aloud.
After reading: Students complete several activities, including determining the central idea of the text. First, they review the concept of central idea. Then, students complete a graphic organizer in which they apply the “escalating summary” strategy to draft a summary of the text. This strategy prompts students to summarize different sections of the text with quantitative word constraints. The graphic organizer includes additional scaffolds tailored to each student’s set level of support on the portal. For example, at the Moderate-Multilingual level, students receive sentence starters for each part of the escalating summary to help them begin formulating their ideas and structuring their responses.
Materials include teacher guidance on how to enact each scaffold based on student needs.
In the Teacher Edition, each Lesson Plan includes a Planning for Varied Learning Needs section on the Lesson at a Glance page. This section provides general guidance for modifying the lesson for Multilingual Learners, Learners Needing Targeted Support, and occasionally Learners Needing Extension.
In Grade 10, Unit 6, Section 3: Background Knowledge, students read “Origin Myths” by Robert Carneiro. The Lesson at a Glance page provides the following information for modifying the lesson to meet the needs of Multilingual Learners, Learners Needing Extension, and Learners Needing Targeted Support:
“Learners Needing Targeted Support
If you anticipate that students will need support with the text, pause the recording or your reading aloud at key points in the narrative and guide students to summarize what they just heard with you.
Learners Needing Extension
If students are exceeding expectations, pair them before reading and then have them conduct a silent written conversation as they read, passing notes back and forth. Encourage students to make and respond to predictions, ask and answer questions, and ask each other for clarification if they are confused.
Multilingual Learners
If students’ limited English vocabularies may affect their ability to carry out the activities, introduce key terms like myth and central idea before starting the lesson.
MLL Language Goal: Model the process for choosing a word to define by providing students with a think aloud using an exemplar word from ‘Origin Myths’:
The word Chaos stands out to me in paragraph 1 of ‘Origin Myths.’ I notice that it is capitalized like a proper noun, but I know this word is a common noun too. I’m going to explore its meaning in my Vocabulary Map and see how this word sets the tone for the text.”
The How to Support Varied Learning Needs with Lenses on Literature found in the Teacher Resources, Using the Lenses Program section of the platform, explains how teachers implement the support levels available on the platform for students. Levels must be set to student profiles before a unit starts. If a student progresses, the teacher can change the level of support before they start assignments on the next unit. Teachers cannot change the level of support during a unit. The document also explains the levels of support available and provides teacher guidance on how to use student data to determine each student’s current level. Teachers should use data to determine program supports by interpreting both internal and external data sources.
Internal Data:
Teachers use formative and summative assessments—such as SCALE rubric tasks, Skills Checks, Comprehension Checks, and End-of-Unit Writing Products—to monitor progress toward grade-level expectations. A provided chart helps teachers match assessment results to levels of support and instructional strategies:
Emerging: Intensive/MLL support focused on foundational skills and structured scaffolds.
Approaches Expectations: Moderate/MLL support with targeted scaffolds (e.g., annotation cues, graphic organizers).
Meets Expectations: Core/MLL support to sustain performance through ongoing feedback.
Exceeds Expectations: Core/MLL support with enrichment and leadership opportunities.
External Data:
Teachers also use IEPs, state assessments, and district data to set supports aligned to learner profiles. The guidance matches learner needs to support levels:
Learners Needing Targeted Support → Intensive/MLL
Learners Needing Extension → Core/MLL
Entering or Emerging Multilingual Learners → Intensive/MLL
Developing Multilingual Learners → Moderate/MLL
Expanding Multilingual Learners → Light/MLL
It should be noted that the portal provides scaffolding for independent work in each unit, once teachers have set each student’s support level. Teachers do not need to enact scaffolds for individual lessons of texts.
Indicator 2c.MLL
The materials amplify rather than simplify texts while maintaining complexity to provide access for MLLs without watering down texts.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature meet the expectations for consistently amplifying rather than simplifying texts while maintaining their original complexity to provide access for MLLs without watering down content. Across the program, the design intentionally preserves the rigor, structure, and linguistic richness of complex literary and informational texts. Instead of reducing text demands, the materials layer linguistic, syntactic, and discourse-level supports that expand students’ access to meaning and strengthen their ability to navigate grade-level English.
Across the grade band, the materials strategically embed differentiated supports, which can be applied on the digital platform: Core, Light-Multilingual, Moderate-Multilingual, and Intensive-Multilingual. These supports are available before, during, and after reading. These supports highlight high-level vocabulary, model academic and rhetorical language, guide annotation, and provide structured opportunities for oral and written meaning-making. Because the scaffolds are layered onto the original text rather than replacing it, MLLs participate in the same rigorous reading experiences as their peers while receiving the linguistic tools needed to make meaning.
The program overview explains that all levels of multilingual support include “front-loading activities such as text summaries and vocabulary previews; audio support for all texts; embedded annotation cues; glossed terms, synonyms, translated definitions, and cognates; and graphic organizer support with editable sentence frames.” These scaffolds highlight, expand, and model complex language features in ways that amplify access without altering text rigor.
This amplification approach is evident in Grade 11, Unit 2, Section 2, Comprehension, where students read Zora Neale Hurston’s “How It Feels to Be Colored Me.” The materials identify the text as “qualitatively moderately complex” and containing “compound and complex sentences” as well as “instances of archaic and high-level vocabulary.” Scaffolds vary by multilingual support level:
At the Core-Multilingual level, 21 terms in the text are linked to glossary definitions, which are available written in 11 different languages. Additionally, the English definition is available in audio. Audio is also available in eight of the other languages.
At the Light-Multilingual level, students receive an additional two glossed terms, as well as four prompts to stop and annotate, such as “Describe the relationship between Zora and the white people who pass through her town. Highlight phrases that show this relationship.”
At the Moderate-Multilingual level, students receive 38 glossed terms and an additional three prompts to stop and annotate.
At the Intensive-Multilingual level, the same 38 terms are linked to the multilingual and multimodal glossary, and there are eight prompts to stop and annotate.
These supports expand the linguistic and cognitive resources available to MLLs, enabling them to decode and analyze an argument at an above-grade level while engaging fully in the text's rigor.
At each stage of reading, the program continues to amplify rather than simplify text demands. For example, in the Grade 11 reading of “How it Feels to be Colored Me” detailed above, before reading, students complete a vocabulary sort that includes challenging academic and literary words such as aristocratic, circumlocutions, disembarked, heathen, narcotic, primitive, skirmish, raiment, proscenium, saunter, sea change, and venturesome. Scaffolds are differentiated. For example, at the Moderate-Multilingual level, students receive “a list of examples of labels so they may consider how to label the words they’ve grouped,” amplifying metalinguistic awareness without altering the text. During reading, students annotate the full text and respond to guiding questions such as: “What is the central idea of the text? What figures of speech does the author use?” Students may also listen to the text read aloud to support oral processing of complex syntax. After reading, students complete an “escalating summary” in which they summarize different sections of the text within explicit word constraints. Differentiated supports are available. For example, at the Moderate-Multilingual level, students receive “sentence starters for each part of the escalating summary,” enabling them to practice increasingly concise academic expression while maintaining full access to the interpretive task. Together, these supports strengthen students' ability to understand and produce academic language across genres. MLLs engage deeply with literary style, rhetorical choices, syntactic patterns, and conceptual structures while reading the same rigorous texts as their peers.
While the materials consistently amplify texts, there is limited explicit guidance on fading scaffolds over time. There is a missed opportunity here to provide guidance for teachers for the gradual removal of supports, which could further strengthen MLLs’ independence with complex texts.
Overall, the materials for Grades 9–12 consistently amplify text complexity through targeted linguistic supports, including glossed vocabulary, guided annotation questions, sentence frames for academic responses, explicit modeling of analytical thinking, structured post-reading tasks, and multimodal access options. These scaffolds highlight and expand the linguistic and rhetorical features of complex texts while preserving their full rigor and complexity. As a result, MLLs are provided meaningful access to grade-level content without simplification, enabling them to develop strong academic English and literary reasoning skills.
Indicator 2d
Text sets (e.g., unit, module) are organized around topic(s) or theme(s) to cohesively build student knowledge.
The text set organization in Lenses on Literature materials meets expectations for indicator 2d. Each unit in Lenses on Literature is organized around a clear, grade-appropriate topic or theme, supported by essential questions and a Driving Task Prompt that guide instruction and assessment. Text sets within each unit are intentionally curated to build knowledge and deepen understanding of the unit’s theme through literary analysis, contextual inquiry, and writing tasks. Units follow one of two structures—Analytical Units, which emphasize interpretation and explanatory or argumentative writing, and Creative Units, which focus on studying mentor texts and author craft to produce narrative or argumentative pieces. Texts are organized into four purposeful categories: Launch Texts to spark curiosity, Anchor Texts to drive central learning, Knowledge Building Texts to expand context, and Genre Study Texts to explore structure and craft. Text sets are organized in a logical way that builds student knowledge. Throughout each unit’s “journey tracker,” students engage in interconnected tasks that move from comprehension to analysis, synthesis, and writing, enabling them to explore complex themes across multiple genres and formats. This cohesive organization ensures that reading, discussion, and writing activities reinforce one another, allowing students to develop conceptual understanding and apply literacy skills in meaningful and authentic ways.
Text sets are organized around a grade-appropriate, tightly-connected topic or theme.
Each Lenses on Literature unit is organized by a grade-appropriate topic or theme. Throughout each unit, students engage in practices such as literary analysis, rhetorical and discourse analysis, historical and contextual inquiry, comparative and genre-based studies, and mentor text study. The materials include two unit structures—Analytical Units and Creative Units—that offer different pathways to literary thinking. Analytical Units focus on interpreting and analyzing multiple texts, culminating in informational, explanatory, or argumentative writing. Creative Units focus on mentor texts and author craft, culminating in narrative or argumentative writing. Each Lenses on Literature unit is structured to provide students with opportunities to engage with key disciplinary practices of literary study—formulating questions, building arguments, analyzing author craft, and expressing ideas. These practices vary by unit, with some emphasizing interpretation and others focusing on argument, narrative, or multimodal expression. In every case, students are encouraged to think critically, use evidence to support their reasoning, and develop academic skills that transfer beyond the classroom. Throughout the program, students’ disciplinary thinking is guided by each unit’s Driving Task Prompt. Lastly, each unit is also driven by essential question(s) that narrow the unit’s thematic or topical focus.
Grade 9:
Unit 1 Focus: Anatomy of a Hero
Essential Question(s): What makes a hero? Is being a hero an action or an identity?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “The Future of Work: Compulsory” by Martha Wells and studying the hero’s journey narrative structure, write a short story in which you develop a complex hero through their actions, motivations, and interactions with others. Use a clear sequence of events to show how your hero responds to challenges and changes over time.
Unit 2 Focus: Visions of the Future
Essential Question(s): What sacrifices are we willing to make to improve society? What is the relationship between utopia and dystopia?
Driving Task Prompt: After researching the dystopian genre and historical context of “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut, write a literary analysis in which you analyze how Vonnegut’s structural choices (such as the use of parallel plots and contrasting character experiences) develop social commentary on how societies pursue equality or improvement. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.
Unit 3 Focus: Peers: The Rhetoric of Justice
Essential Question: What is the role of perspective in persuasion? What are the best ways to pursue justice?
Driving Task Prompt: After evaluating argumentative texts on the Civil Rights Movement, read “Letter from Birmingham Jail” by Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr., and write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Dr. King uses rhetoric to justify civil disobedience. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.
Unit 4 Focus: Definition Paper
Essential Question(s): What makes a villain? Who decides who the villain is?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “Lather and Nothing Else” by Hernando Téllez and researching the concept of “villain” in literature, write a definition paper in which you define “villain” by drawing from implicit and explicit definitions in the unit texts. Support your response with evidence from at least two texts. Share your work through a multimodal presentation.
Unit 5 Focus: Mirrors, Windows, and Wallpaper
Essential Question(s): What shapes our perspectives? How do lenses help us see different perspectives?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “The Yellow Wallpaper” by Charlotte Perkins Gilman and applying historical, biographical, and psychoanalytic lenses to informational and literary texts, write a literary analysis in which you select and apply one lens to analyze how Gilman uses specific word choices to develop a theme in the story. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.
Unit 6 Focus: Opposing Opinions
Essential Question(s): How do we determine what is right and wrong? How can we treat opposing perspectives fairly?
Driving Task Prompt: After studying the ethical dialogue in “Crito” by Plato, other related texts, and ethical decision-making frameworks, choose a contemporary ethical issue and write a scripted dialogue in which two characters each represent a contrasting position on the issue. Support each side of the conversation with relevant evidence and reasoning drawn from your research and ethical framework lens.
Grade 10:
Unit 1 Focus: Global Perspectives on Food
Essential Question(s): How does food shape identity, place, or community? What does food represent in the world?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “Why We Cook When the World Doesn’t Make Sense” by Reem Kassis, write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Kassis uses descriptions of food as a rhetorical technique to advance her perspective. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.
Unit 2 Focus: Global Perspectives on Love
Essential Question(s): Is the definition of love universal? What accounts for the differences in how people experience love?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “One Hundred Love Sonnets: XVII” by Pablo Neruda and a wide range of love poems, write a literary analysis about one poem in which you analyze how the author uses specific details, such as word choice and figurative language, to develop a theme about love.
Unit 3 Focus: Global Perspectives on the Good Life
Essential Question(s): What makes for a good or meaningful life? Who decides what is a “good” life?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “The Three Questions” by Leo Tolstoy and researching multiple texts on the concept of a meaningful life, write an argumentative essay in which you argue what you think qualifies as a “good” life. Support your position with evidence from the texts. Include counterclaims and rebuttals in your response.
Unit 4 Focus: Global Perspectives on Beauty
Essential Question(s): What makes something beautiful? How do we develop our perceptions of beauty?
Driving Task Prompt: What makes something beautiful? After studying how the concept of beauty is portrayed in public spaces, art, and personal stories, research your own question about beauty. Then, write a multimodal research presentation in which you answer your research question and explain how your understanding of beauty was shaped by ideas and arguments from different sources. Support your explanation with evidence from unit texts and your independent research.
Unit 5 Focus: Global Perspectives on Warfare
Essential Question(s): How does war dehumanize people? How do people reclaim their humanity in the face of war?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “The Dog of Titwal” by Saadat Hasan Manto and multiple texts on living during wartime, write a synthesis essay in which you analyze how characters develop and interact to demonstrate the impacts of war on the human experience.
Unit 6 Focus: Global Perspectives on Origin Stories
Essential Question(s): What is the importance of origin stories? What do origin stories tell us about time, location, culture, and ourselves?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “Rangi and Papa: The Separation of Heaven and Earth” by Maui Pomare and James Cowan and researching structure, order of events, and use of time in origin stories, write an origin story in which you provide a mythical explanation for something in the real world. Include a variety of structural and narrative techniques in your story.
Grade 11:
Unit 1 Focus: War and Protest
Essential Question(s): What is the purpose of protest? What motivates people to fight?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading Patrick Henry’s “Give Me Liberty, or Give Me Death” speech, write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Henry’s rhetorical appeals advance his argument within the historical context of pre-Revolutionary America. Support your position with evidence from the text.
Unit 2 Focus: Freedom and Oppression
Essential Question(s): What is the cost of freedom? How do we obtain freedom in the face of oppression?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “How it Feels to Be Colored Me” by Zora Neale Hurston, write a literary analysis in which you analyze how Hurston uses her interactions with others and experiences in different settings to develop her ideas on freedom and oppression within the context of the Harlem Renaissance. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.
Unit 3 Focus: The Natural and the Urban World
Essential Question(s): How do our environments shape up? Where is the line between progress and destruction?
Driving Task Prompt: After studying “Of Man and the Stream of Time” by Rachel Carson and a selection of texts by American Transcendentalists and contemporary writers, write an argumentative essay in which you analyze how at least two authors develop their arguments about humanity’s relationship with the natural and urban worlds. Support your analysis with evidence from the texts. Include information from at least one literary text in your response.
Unit 4 Focus: Voices of the Past and Present
Essential Question(s): How do writers use language and story to reconcile the past, present, and future? What is the relationship between a writer’s identity, persona, and voice?
Driving Task Prompt: After researching Cheyenne and Arapaho author Tommy Orange and an Indigenous author of your choice, create a multimodal author study in which you explain how your researched author’s point of view and purpose are shaped by their personal history, tribal affiliation, and the key themes and topics they explore in their work. Support your explanation with evidence from your research. Incorporate elements such as images, quotes, video/audio clips, and/or design features in your presentation.
Unit 5 Focus: Assimilation and Individuality
Essential Question(s): How much should you assimilate? How do you create an individual identity?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “Lingua Franca” by Carole McDonnell and personal narratives on belonging in America, write a comparative literary analysis in which you analyze how two authors use narrative elements and techniques to develop compelling accounts of the tension between assimilation and individuality. Support your analysis with evidence from both texts.
Unit 6 Focus: American Myth and Reality
Essential Question(s): What myths do we tell ourselves? What is the myth of being American? What is the reality?
Driving Task Prompt: After researching a range of seminal informational and literary texts that examine the myths and realities of the “American Dream,” craft an original literary work in which you use a controlling literary device to explore a complex aspect of the American experience. Include a writer’s memo in which you explain how your literary choices convey your central theme. Include evidence from multiple texts in your writer’s memo.
Grade 12:
Unit 1 Focus: Beauty and Pain
Essential Question(s): How does poetry simplify and communicate the world? What is the relationship between beauty and pain?
Driving Task Prompt: After reading “Sonnet 18: Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer’s Day” by William Shakespeare and multiple lyric poems, choose one poem and write a literary analysis in which you analyze how the author uses or manipulates poetic structure to develop two or more themes. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.
Unit 2 Focus: Ridicule and Critique
Essential Question(s): When is it valuable to use humor as a means to critique? When is it dangerous? What kind of power does humor have?
Driving Task Prompt: After researching “A Modest Proposal” by Jonathan Swift and other satirical texts, select one text and write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how the author uses satirical techniques to develop a critique of individuals, ideas, or events. Support your response with evidence from the texts.
Unit 3 Focus: Adventure and Heroism
Essential Question(s): What makes a story survive? How has storytelling evolved? How has it remained the same?
Driving Task Prompt: After researching and comparing ancient Western epics, rewrite an epic scene from Beowulf in which you use rich literary language to convey your interpretation of the event, setting, and/or character(s).
Unit 4 Focus: Advocacy and Argument
Essential Question(s): What does it mean to be an advocate? What does it take for words to become action?
Driving Task Prompt: After analyzing the use of rhetoric in “Address to Parliament” by Idris Elba, “Politics and the English Language” by George Orwell, and other texts, write a rhetorical essay in which you advocate for or against an issue, action, or idea presented in one or more of the texts. Use rhetorical techniques modeled in the texts you study to build your argument. Support your position with evidence from the texts and include multimodal components to strengthen your argument.
Unit 5 Focus: Human Conflict: Drama
Essential Question(s): What is the importance of tragedy as a genre? What human experiences stand the test of time?
Driving Task Prompt: After analyzing The Tragedy of Macbeth by William Shakespeare, audio interpretations of the play, and informational texts about Shakespeare’s historical context and modern relevance, write an expository essay in which you answer your own research question on a topic related to Shakespeare’s creative choices, his historical context, or modern adaptations and interpretations of his work. Support your discussion with evidence from Macbeth and your research sources.
Unit 6 Focus: Speculation: Dystopia and Science Fiction
Essential Question(s): What is the relationship between science fiction and reality? Who determines the meaning of art?
Driving Task Prompt: After studying “The Machine Stops” by E.M. Forster and a selection of dystopian and science fiction texts and articles, write an argumentative essay in which you evaluate the extent to which a reader’s interpretation of a science fiction or dystopian story should be influenced by the author’s original intent. Support your evaluation by analyzing how character development, structure, and/or word choice shape theme or meaning in multiple unit texts. Incorporate insights from critical articles or historical context to strengthen your position.
Text set organization provides opportunities for students to address facets of the same topic or theme over an extended period (e.g., a unit, module), enabling the development of deeper knowledge. Text sets cohesively build knowledge across various topics in social studies (including history), science, the arts, and literature, exposing students to academic vocabulary, content knowledge, and complex syntax.
Texts in the Lenses on Literature program were intentionally selected to engage students with varied, contemporary voices and to support their development as analytical and reflective readers and writers. Each unit’s text set is chosen to align with the Driving Task Prompt and to promote skills such as analysis, evaluation, and synthesis. Texts are organized into four categories: Launch Texts (to spark curiosity), Anchor Texts (central to the unit’s purpose and culminating task), Knowledge Building Texts (to deepen context and understanding), and Genre Study Texts (to explore structure and craft). This text organization is logical, allowing students to read for different purposes and build knowledge throughout the unit.
In Grade 11, Unit 1, students study the unit War and Protest with the essential questions, “What is the purpose of protest? What motivates people to fight?” Throughout this unit, student learning supports them in completing a response to the Driving Task Prompt: “After reading Patrick Henry’s 'Give Me Liberty, or Give Me Death' speech, write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Henry’s rhetorical appeals advance his argument within the historical context of pre-Revolutionary America. Support your position with evidence from the text.” Throughout each section of the unit’s “journey tracker,” students learn more about the unit’s theme, which deepens their understanding.
In Section 1: Unit Launch, students are introduced to the key themes and ideas they will explore throughout the unit. In this section, students read “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death” for the first time to gain an overall understanding of the text and reflect on their initial reactions. At the end of the section, they analyze the unit’s Driving Task Prompt, which will guide their focus and learning through the following sections.
In Section 2: Comprehension, students strengthen their understanding of the literary Anchor Text, “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death” by Patrick Henry. They group and label the vocabulary words: sentiments, proportion, magnitude, offence, revere, indulge, siren, arduous, liberty, disposed, temporal, salvation, anguish, solace, insidious, reconciliation, deceive, implements, subjugation, martial, array, rivet, entreaty, supplication, beseech, avert, remonstrated, prostrated, implored, interposition, tyrannical, ministry, Parliament, remonstrances, spurned, inviolate, inestimable, formidable, irresolution, supinely, extenuate, and resounding; they also learn about morphology and how a word’s individual parts can help them determine its meaning in context. Henry’s speech is studied as a significant historical text that inspired colonial resistance and contributed to the ignition of the American Revolution. In this section, students also analyze word choice and use context clues to determine meaning. They explore sentence structure by breaking complex sentences into simpler parts to clarify understanding. By examining Henry’s language and syntax, students strengthen their comprehension of the text’s message and tone.
In Section 3: Building Knowledge, students develop an understanding of differing viewpoints on the American Revolution to deepen comprehension of the unit’s Anchor Text. Students read informational texts about the Revolution, exploring the contrasting arguments of Patriots who supported the war and Loyalists who opposed it. They practice identifying and analyzing central ideas, comparing arguments, and examining how ideas connect within and across texts. By the end of the section, students revisit “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death” with an enhanced perspective informed by their new knowledge.
In Section 4: Genre Study, students learn about the characteristics of speeches. Students read multiple speeches to identify and define important rhetorical elements. They examine how these elements interact and how authors use them to convey central ideas. Additionally, students analyze how language, rhetoric, and style reveal each author’s unique perspective. By the end of the section, students draft a mini-rhetorical analysis to the prompt “Write a mini-rhetorical analysis arguing how the speaker of either 'Address to the Nation on the War in Vietnam' or 'Why I Am Opposed to the War in Vietnam' creates a position on war and protest.” This writing practice helps prepare students for their response to the Driving Task Prompt later in the unit.
In Section 5, Synthesis, students bring together the ideas they have developed across their readings. They apply what they’ve learned to a final analysis of “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death,” using their notes as they prepare to draft a rhetorical analysis. In this section, students also participate in a critical discussion about how rhetoric supports a text’s central idea, allowing them to refine their interpretations and gain insights from their peers’ perspectives.
In Section 6: Writing Process, students go through the stages of composing a rhetorical analysis. They begin by reviewing the rubric and a sample analysis to plan and structure their work. Students then write an introduction with a thesis statement, followed by body paragraphs and a conclusion. To conclude the section, they share their analyses and provide peer feedback before revising their final drafts. As the last step of the unit, students complete a Read the World Reflection where they reflect on the unit’s essential questions.
Indicator 2e
Materials include a range of texts and provide teacher support in helping students learn about people who are similar to and different from them.
Criterion 2.2: Knowledge Building Through Reading, Writing, and Language Comprehension
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Materials include questions, tasks, and assignments that are meaningful, evidence-based, and support students in making meaning and building knowledge as they progress toward grade-level mastery of literacy skills.
Materials include clear, explicit instruction guidance for teachers across all literacy skills.
The Lenses on Literature materials partially meet expectations for Criterion 2.2: Knowledge-Building through Reading, Writing, and Language Comprehension. The program provides a clear, coherent, and research-aligned instructional pathway supported by meaningful, text-based questions, tasks, and assessments that build students’ literacy skills over time. The six-part unit structure ensures a logical progression from comprehension to analysis and writing, with frequent opportunities for close reading, discussion, and synthesis across texts. Students engage in structured, evidence-based discussions and writing tasks, supported by explicit vocabulary instruction and consistent formative and summative assessments that guide instruction and monitor progress. The program also offers strong support for the writing process, including planning, drafting, revising, and publishing, with aligned rubrics and tools. However, some components only partially meet expectations: opportunities for sustained evidence-based writing beyond major tasks are limited, sentence-level instruction and practice are not consistently embedded, and research instruction and application occur infrequently across units. Additionally, while discussion protocols are well-structured, guidance for deepening academic discourse can be general. Overall, the materials effectively support knowledge building and literacy development, but there are opportunities to improve consistency and depth across key skill areas.
Indicator 2f
Materials include a clear, research-based core instructional pathway with reasonable pacing throughout the year, which allows students to work towards grade-level proficiency.
The instructional pathway outlined in Lenses on Literature materials meets expectations for indicator 2f. The materials clearly define and explain the program’s core instructional pathway through a consistent six-part unit structure—Unit Launch, Reading for Comprehension, Building Knowledge, Genre Study, Synthesis, and Writing Process—detailed in the Teacher Edition and supported by unit-level documents such as the Unit Overview, Unit at a Glance, Sequence of Instruction, and Lesson Overviews. These resources outline the progression of learning, focus skills, texts, and lesson expectations, aligning with research-based literacy practices. Teachers also receive planning protocols to prepare for units and analyze student work. Supplemental resources (Adapt & Extend activities, Grammar & Language Toolkits, Independent Reading, and Novel Studies) are accompanied by explicit instructions describing when, why, and how to use them. However, many require additional instructional time and may necessitate reducing core lessons. The program provides pacing guidance indicating 165–179 instructional days per grade level. but leaves little room for interruption. Although the full six-unit sequence leaves limited flexibility for interruptions, the program clearly identifies a four-unit core instructional pathway that guarantees standards coverage, allowing districts to select four-, five-, or six-unit implementation models based on local scheduling needs. The Lenses Three-Phase Work Plan offers broad planning questions (e.g., how many units to teach, when they will be completed, and whether to implement Novel Studies), while the Guidance for Planning a Coherent Year of ELA Instruction with Lenses on Literature document includes more in depth guidance on how districts and schools should make implementation decisions. Overall, the materials present a clear, coherent, and research-aligned pathway toward grade-level proficiency within a school year.
Materials clearly outline the essential elements for the core instructional pathway. Materials clearly explain how to use and implement the core instructional pathway, which does not deviate from currently accepted research.
The front matter of the Teacher Edition details the program's unit “journey tracker.” Each unit follows the same six section structure: Unit Launch, Reading for Comprehension), Building Knowledge, Genre Study, Synthesis, and Writing Process. The front matter of the Teacher Edition includes an explanation of each section.
Unit Launch: Students are introduced to the unit’s purpose, the Driving Task Prompt, and the Anchor Text(s). They break down the skills needed for the final task, preview the unit topic, and begin building context. Students also complete an initial “cold read” of the Anchor Text(s) to form first impressions and personal responses.
Comprehension: Students revisit the Anchor Text(s) for a deeper, more literal understanding. Through structured reading, discussion, and short writing tasks, students strengthen their comprehension and practice vocabulary strategies that can be applied across different texts and contexts.
Building Knowledge: Students read a collection of texts that provide essential background information—such as historical, cultural, and conceptual context—to help them better understand the Anchor Text(s) and unit theme. Teachers explicitly teach the unit’s Focus Skills and standards, using these texts to help students develop transferable reading and analysis strategies.
Genre Study: Students receive direct instruction and guided practice related to the unit’s Focus Reading Skills and genre standards. By analyzing Genre Study Texts in whole-group, small-group, and individual settings, students learn about the genre’s purpose, structures, and features. This prepares them to apply genre knowledge when analyzing Anchor Text(s) or producing their own work in the same genre.
Synthesis: Students integrate their learning from earlier sections. During a final read of the Anchor Text(s), they pull together their knowledge, deepen their understanding, and sharpen the skills needed to answer the Driving Task Prompt. They participate in structured discussions—such as seminars—to explore ideas, refine interpretations, and prepare for the writing task ahead.
Writing Process: Students move through each stage of writing, including planning, drafting, revising, and sharing their final product. Before writing, they study model texts to understand the expectations of the writing task. Teachers support them through each step as they craft a polished final response to the Driving Task Prompt.
The Teacher Edition provides several unit-level documents that illustrate the learning of each unit.
A Unit Overview for every unit outlines the unit’s theme, genre focus, writing product, essential question(s), and Driving Task prompt. It also lists all unit texts, indicating which ones serve as Anchor Texts and which appear in the Knowledge Building or Genre Study sections.
A Unit at a Glance outlines information found on the Unit Overview page. Additionally, this document provides the unit’s focus skills and unit description summary.
A Sequence of Instruction document lists out every activity in each unit by lesson.
A Lessons Overview document which includes the prompt, artifact of learning, text(s), and activity focus skills used in each activity in each lesson.
Each Lesson at a Glance page includes the lesson focus skills, a list of lesson activities, a materials and classroom preparation section, and content considerations.
Overall, most of the Lenses on Literature program components align with current research, and the program follows an integrated instructional approach across all literacy components.
On the Carnegie Learning portal, teachers can find Teacher Planning Protocols, located under Implementation Resources. Materials include several step-by-step general protocols that guide teachers in preparing to teach and provide guidance on which resources and materials to reference. These protocols include: a Unit Internalization Protocol, an Analyzing Unit Texts Protocol, and a Preparing to Teach Protocol. Other protocols available to teachers for after teaching include: a Learning from Student Work Protocol: Formative, a Learning from Student Work Protocol: Summative, and an End-of-Unit Teacher Reflection Protocol.
When present, supplemental materials are designed to work coherently with the core instructional pathway. Materials provide detailed explanations of when and how to use supplemental materials so that all students can access grade-level materials.
Supplemental Resources can be found on the platform located under the section titled Supplemental Resources. The materials include several different types of supplemental resources, including:
Adapt & Extend activities
Grammar & Language Toolkits
Independent Reading
Novel Studies
Each Supplemental Resources section includes guidance for its use.
Adapt & Extend activities (available for each unit): The Adapt & Extend Handbook includes guidance on why, how, and when to use these resources. This guidance recommends using Adapt & Extend when educators want to deepen engagement, respond to formative assessment, honor student strengths, or extend learning beyond the core curriculum. These activities can be used at various points across a unit—before, during, after, or in parallel with core lessons. The handbook outlines when particular ideas are most effective. The activities are also appropriate during moments of interrupted schedules or when students benefit from additional autonomy or creative expression. Overall, Adapt & Extend is designed to enhance—not replace—core instruction, providing teachers with flexible tools to meet diverse learner needs, extend unit themes, and reinforce standards-aligned skills.
Grammar & Language Toolkits (available for each grade level): The Grammar and Language Toolkits Overview provides guidance on how and when to use the grade-level toolkit. Teachers can use these 60 lessons at several points during a unit: after students complete embedded grammar activities, as a follow-up to mid-unit writing tasks to reinforce conventions, during the writing process (especially for revising after a first draft), in response to formative data or student questions about grammar and language use, and in small-group or targeted settings to address specific needs. The toolkits enable teachers to adjust instruction in real-time based on students' understanding. Each lesson includes multiple exercises and an answer key. It should be noted that non-integrated grammar and language practice is not aligned with research-based practices.
Independent Reading: The Independent Reading Guide states that the program “offers teachers' flexibility to incorporate daily independent reading into their schedules. Each lesson is comprised of individual activities that teachers may schedule across class periods in order to accommodate daily routines and school calendars. This adaptability also creates space for intentional independent reading time.” The guidance provides sample schedules based on a 45-minute and 90-minute block. These schedules require teachers to adjust activities in lessons for the following days, which, given the number of instructional days in the curriculum, could potentially result in reducing the number of lessons and units.
Novel Studies: The Novel Studies Handbook states that “Each Novel Study is designed to last two to three weeks as a supplement to enrich [the] core curriculum. As shown in the sample calendar [provided], each Novel Study requires only a few days of devoted class time for active discussion and writing. This allows [teachers] to incorporate a Novel Study flexibly to connect to themes and topics in your core curriculum.” The schedule teachers and schools use, should they choose to incorporate Novel Studies, would depend on the amount of allotted instructional time for ELA. If schools only have 40 to 50 minutes of ELA instructional time, they would need to adjust the core curriculum to reduce the number of lessons and units.
While materials include guidance for all supplemental resources, most of these resources require additional time to be added to the daily or annual schedule to complete the core curriculum in its entirety. Districts, schools, and teachers would have to make decisions about what to remove from the core curriculum to make space for supplemental resources. The Guidance for Planning a Coherent Year of ELA Instruction with Lenses on Literature document which schools and districts who purchase the program can access, includes some guidance on making these decisions.
Materials provide implementation schedules, including lesson-specific guidance, that are well paced, and can be completed in the school year, allowing students to dive deeply into content.
The Teacher Edition includes a Sequence of Instruction for each unit, listing every activity in each unit by lesson. This document states that each lesson is designed for a 40- to 55-minute class period. The Lessons Overview document for each unit also provides this timing guidance. Additionally, each lesson’s Lesson at a Glance page provides timing guidance for each activity. In the lesson plan, timing guidance for each activity is found at the top right-hand corner. Timing guidance for each step in the activity is not provided.
Grade 9 materials include instruction for 165 instructional days
Grade 10 materials include instruction for 178 instructional days
Grade 11 materials include instruction for 179 instructional days
Grade 12 materials include instruction for 179 instructional days
Although the total number of instructional days does not exceed those in a typical school year, it leaves little flexibility for common interruptions. However, the implementation guidance clarifies that only four of the program’s six units constitute the core instructional pathway. This structure allows schools and districts to make strategic implementation decisions so the program can be reasonably completed within a single school year.
In the Teacher Resources section of the platform, located under Implementation Resources, teachers, school leaders, and district administrators can find the Lenses Three-Phase Work Plan. This document includes a planning structure to “Set the Conditions for Implementation Success.” In Step 2, the guidance states to decide on the following based on the implementation focus identified in Step 1:
“Unit Strategy
How many Lenses units will teachers implement this year?
By what date will each unit be complete? A unit is complete when students turn in their final writing products.
Who will determine which units will be implemented?
Novel Study Strategy
Will the teachers use Lenses Novel Studies?
How many Novel Studies will be implemented?
When will Novel Studies be implemented?
Who will determine which Novel Studies will be implemented?”
Those who purchase the Lenses on Literature program also have access to the Guidance for Planning a Coherent Year of ELA Instruction with Lenses on Literature document. This document includes information explaining how schools and districts can plan a coherent, standards-aligned year of instruction using the program. It outlines the program’s core instructional pathway, explains implementation options (4-, 5-, and 6-unit models), and provides guidance for pacing, unit order, and supplemental resources.
At the core of the program is a four-unit core instructional pathway for each grade level. These approximately six-week units integrate reading, writing, speaking and listening, language, research, and assessment into complete instructional arcs. When implemented as designed, the document claims that the four-unit model includes full coverage of grade-level standards. The program also includes two additional units per grade that expand genre exposure and disciplinary practice. These added units broaden students’ experiences without altering the standards progression ensured by the four-unit core. The core units required for each grade level are identified in this document. In addition to the four unit model, the document identifies two additional models to accommodate different school contexts.
The four-unit model represents the core program and is best suited for typical or interrupted school years, as it ensures standards coverage while allowing space for supplemental experiences.
The five-unit model builds on the core by adding one additional instructional arc, increasing opportunities for distributed practice across genres and writing types while maintaining flexibility in the calendar.
The six-unit model offers maximum disciplinary breadth and is intended for schools with stable schedules and protected instructional time. While it provides the widest range of genres and repeated application of priority standards, it requires a highly predictable school year to maintain pacing without disruption.
In addition to determining the number of units, schools must decide the order in which units are taught. Units are intentionally sequenced to reflect increasing cognitive demand across the year. Units 1–3 generally focus on building and reinforcing core disciplinary skills, while Units 4–6 require more independent, sustained, and complex application of those skills. Schools may reorder units within these two bands to align with local writing priorities or interdisciplinary connections, but the overall cognitive progression should remain intact. The document also provides a grade-level chart showing anchor text genres and writing products across units, supporting thoughtful year-long planning while preserving coherence.
The document also provides sample pacing guides and district examples that illustrate how schools can schedule units across a year while accommodating testing windows, extended text studies, benchmark assessments, and other local constraints.
Indicator 2g
Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text-based, allowing students to demonstrate their thinking in various formats.
The questions, tasks, and assignments in Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for indicator 2g. The materials provide consistent opportunities for students to make meaning of texts through structured, text-based questions and tasks that require varied responses such as speaking, writing, annotating, and discussion. Each unit includes activities like Read to Comprehend, Annotate Key Details, Read to Contextualize, Read to Analyze, and Synthesis, which guide students in closely reading and re-reading anchor texts. Students first engage with texts to build comprehension and later revisit them in synthesis activities that deepen analysis by focusing on literary and structural elements. This repeated interaction with texts, supported by guiding questions, ensures that students develop comprehension and critical analysis skills through multiple engagement formats.
Materials provide opportunities to support students in making meaning of the texts being studied through text-based questions and tasks that require students to answer in varying formats (e.g., speaking, writing, etc.).
Throughout the Lenses on Literature program, students engage in several activities before and after reading to make meaning of the texts under study. These activities include: Read to Comprehend, Annotate Key Details, Read to Contextualize, and Read to Analyze.
In Grade 9, Unit 5, Section 2: Comprehension, students read “The Yellow Wallpaper” by Charlotte Perkins Gilman. As they read, students answer the following guiding questions to help them make sense of the text:
“What emotions do you feel from the narration?
Which traits and past experiences shape the narrator’s perspective?
What key events cause changes to her perspective?”
In Grade 12, Unit 3, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students read “What are the Characteristics of Epic in Literature?” by Douglas Matus. During reading, students annotate, highlighting sections of the text in yellow and using the comment feature to write notes about “key characteristics of the epic genre.”
Students complete various tasks throughout each unit that require answering questions about the texts under study in multiple formats. These tasks focus on different parts of literacy components, such as vocabulary, reading, writing, speaking, and listening (including seminars).
Materials include text-based questions and tasks that require students to closely read and/or re-read complex parts of texts to deepen their analysis and understanding.
Throughout the Lenses on Literature program, students have opportunities to read and re-read the texts under study closely to deepen their understanding. Each unit is structured so that students read the anchor text several times. First, students read the anchor text(s) in the Reading for Comprehension section of the unit. During this initial read, students read for comprehension, often further analyzing parts of the text. Later in the unit, students re-read the anchor text or parts of the anchor text(s) in the Synthesis section of the unit. In this part of the unit, students apply what they have learned about the genre in the Genre Study section and the unit topic or theme in the Building Knowledge section to further deepen their analysis and understanding.
In Grade 10, Unit 2, Section 5: Synthesis, students re-read “One Hundred Love Sonnets: XVII” by Pablo Neruda, “Before You Come” by Faiz Ahmed Faiz, “Love After Love” by Derek Walcott, and “Quarantine” by Eavan Boland. First, students “annotate for words and phrases that develop [each poem’s] themes.” Students are also presented with the following guiding questions during this close reading.
“What questions about love does the poem raise, explicitly or implicitly?
How do literary devices in the poem help to answer those questions?
Which specific words or phrases help to develop the poem’s theme?”
Indicator 2g.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in text-based questions, tasks, and assignments, as well as the demonstration of their thinking in various formats.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in text-based questions, tasks, and assignments, as well as the demonstration of their thinking in various formats. The materials provide supports designed to help MLLs engage in text-based learning and demonstrate understanding; however, these supports are often confined to the digital Student Edition and are not fully integrated into the accompanying teacher guidance.
The materials provide strategies that allow MLLs to engage in comprehension-level work and to complete text-based questions and tasks. In Grade 12, Unit 3, Section 3, Building Knowledge, students read “What are the Characteristics of Epic in Literature?” by Douglas Matus, annotate for the defining traits of epics, and summarize key ideas. The Responsive Teaching Move notes include targeted small-group questions (e.g., “What defining characteristics of epics are addressed in the first two sections of the text?”) and guidance to help MLLs identify examples of compound and complex sentences that convey meaning. The materials provide explicit linguistic scaffolding alongside content comprehension by modeling academic sentence structures and focusing attention on how syntax conveys meaning. Additional supports are available through the digital Levels of Support, however MLLs using print materials will be well-supported in this activity through the guidance provided in the Teachers Edition. This integration supports MLLs in both understanding and summarizing key information, moving beyond literal comprehension to structured knowledge expression.
While the materials include strategies and digital supports to help MLLs engage in comprehension-level analysis tasks, they lack sufficient guidance in the print materials and sometimes the Teacher Edition to ensure educators know when and how to provide these additional supports effectively. For example, in Grade 10, Unit 2, Section 5, Synthesis, students reread four poems—“One Hundred Love Sonnets: XVII” by Pablo Neruda, “Before You Come” by Faiz Ahmed Faiz, “Love After Love” by Derek Walcott, and “Quarantine” by Eavan Boland—and annotate for diction, theme, and literary devices. The Responsive Teaching Move note provides a paraphrasing strategy (“focus on a small section of text,” “infer the text’s meaning,” “put the text into your own words”) and small-group annotation support. The materials provide additional supports for MLLs to annotate the four poems through the Levels of Support in the digital platform. At the Light-Multilingual level, Stop and Annotate boxes with additional focus questions for students are provided at the end of each poem. The Moderate-Multilingual and Intensive-Multilingual levels provide the same Stop and Annotate boxes as well as additional Stop and Annotate boxes in the middle of the first and second poems. This annotation guidance is available in the print version of the Student Edition, and the necessity for additional supports is not highlighted for teachers in the Teacher Edition. The materials would benefit from additional teacher guidance to bridge the gap between instruction and the supports provided in the Levels of Support. Without that, teachers may not be aware of when MLL students, particularly those early in their English proficiency, may need additional support to understand the task at hand and fully and completely participate alongside their peers.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Overall, Grades 9-12 of Lenses on Literature meet expectations for supporting MLLs’ full participation in text-based questions, tasks, and varied demonstrations of learning. The materials incorporate meaningful scaffolds, such as structured discourse, sentence frames, small-group strategies, modeling, and multimodal engagement, that effectively support comprehension-level analysis and academic language development. In addition, the digital Levels of Support system provides a comprehensive, differentiated framework that allows teachers to tailor instruction to students' needs. However, while the digital platform offers robust, lesson-specific supports, these scaffolds are not integrated into the print Student Edition or clearly emphasized in teacher guidance. As a result, the effectiveness of these supports may depend on teachers’ awareness and use of the digital tools, with reduced access for students relying solely on print materials.
Indicator 2h
Materials support students in developing their ability to comprehend complex ideas within and across texts through opportunities to analyze and evaluate texts.
The analysis opportunities in Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for indicator 2h. The program provides structured opportunities for students to analyze key ideas and details, craft and structure, and the integration of knowledge and ideas within and across texts. Activities such as Read to Comprehend and Read to Contextualize support students in identifying central ideas and details while drawing connections across texts and to their own experiences. In the Genre Study section, students examine craft and structure, including character development, perspective, figurative language, and word choice. In the Building Knowledge section, students have opportunities to make interdisciplinary connections. In the Synthesis and Writing Process sections, students integrate knowledge and ideas across multiple texts by comparing themes, perspectives, and genres and engaging in extended discussions and written analyses. This progression ensures students develop increasingly sophisticated analytical skills aligned to grade-level standards.
Materials provide opportunities for students to analyze key ideas and details (according to grade-level standards) within individual texts and across multiple texts to support students in making meaning.
In each unit, students have opportunities to analyze key ideas and details within and across texts through Read to Comprehend and Read to Contextualize activities. These activities occur in Section 2: Comprehension and Section 3: Building Knowledge of each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 10, Unit 4, Section 2: Comprehension, students read “What Makes a City Beautiful?” by Tea Lobo. As they read, they complete a Read to Comprehend activity, using the highlighting tool and notes feature to “mark and respond to the central idea of the text and claims made by the author about beauty and aesthetics.” As they read, students also consider the following questions:
“Why were geometric-based urban landscapes valued in the past?
Why would urban landscape planning based on geometry not be valued if people experience a city kinesthetically?
Currently, by what attributes is architecture evaluated? Why?”
In Grade 11, Unit 2, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students read “How it Feels to Be Colored Me” by Zora Neale Hurston. As they read, they complete a Read to Contextualize activity, where they draw connections between this unit’s anchor text (“How it Feels to Be Colored Me”) and other “informational texts and poems of the Harlem Renaissance” that they read in the Build Knowledge section of the unit (Section 3).
Materials provide opportunities for students to analyze craft and structure (according to grade-level standards) within individual texts and across multiple texts to support students in making meaning.
In each unit, students have opportunities to analyze craft and structure within and across texts through Read to Analyze activities and other activities in Section 4: Genre Study of each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 12, Unit 5, Section 4: Genre Study, students read “Why All the Modern-day Hate Toward the Merchant of Venice?” by Cory Franklin and read and listen to the podcast “All that Glisters Is Not Gold” by Code Switch. As students read, they use the highlighting tool and notes feature to “mark and respond to the way the author structures the text and how the author presents ideas.” Then, students “analyze and evaluate how effectively the text’s structure contributes to the central idea.” In a later lesson, students complete similar activities with the podcast “All that Glisters Is Not Gold,” analyzing both the podcast’s structure and then evaluating “how effectively the mode of the podcast shapes ideas.”
Materials provide opportunities for students to analyze the integration of knowledge and ideas (according to grade-level standards) within individual texts and across multiple texts to support students in deepening their understanding on a topic.
In each unit, students have opportunities to analyze the integration of knowledge and ideas within and across texts through activities in Section 5: Synthesis and Section 6: Writing Process of each unit’s “journey tracker.” Students also have the opportunity to make interdisciplinary connections, drawing on knowledge from history, science, or other areas, as outlined in Section 3: Building Knowledge, for each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 9, Unit 1, Section 5: Synthesis, students prepare for a Seminar about “heroism in the unit texts.” As they prepare, students answer the following questions, focusing their responses on the unit’s texts:
“How do the events/sequences of events and character interactions convey and develop the hero figures in each text?
How do the characteristics of the hero advance the plot?”
Indicator 2h.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in developing their ability to comprehend complex ideas within and across texts through their full and complete participation in opportunities to analyze and evaluate texts.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9-12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in developing their ability to comprehend complex ideas within and across texts through opportunities to analyze and evaluate texts. The program includes embedded scaffolds that enable MLLs to access grade-level texts and participate in analytical tasks. However, these supports are not consistently sufficient to ensure MLLs’ full and complete participation in all aspects of text analysis and evaluation.
Across units, Lenses on Literature maintains text complexity and provides multiple avenues for meaning-making across reading, writing, speaking, and listening. Supports are aligned to the tasks identified in the 2h report and are designed to build toward student autonomy through calibrated Levels of Support. At the same time, the materials provide inconsistent support for the full range of higher-order thinking required for analysis tasks. In some lessons, supports emphasize productive language (such as sentence frames for responding) without adequately scaffolding the reading comprehension, conceptual reasoning, and disciplinary thinking needed to fully perform the analysis.
For example, in Grade 10, Unit 4, Section 2, Comprehension, students read “What Makes a City Beautiful?” by Tea Lobo and complete a Read to Comprehend activity in which they annotate central ideas and the author's claims using guiding questions about aesthetics and evaluation. While the Levels of Support on the digital platform provide increased prompts to stop and annotate at higher support levels, the directions remain the same across levels. The materials include a Facilitation Option, which suggests that teachers provide a model annotation to support all students, and a Responsive Teaching Move note that offers five questions teachers can use for small-group annotation support. However, the guiding questions themselves can be linguistically demanding (e.g., “How can city architecture be experienced by everyone, even when they’re not paying close attention to it?”). Simply reading the questions aloud does not address the academic language load embedded in the prompts.
In the subsequent lesson, Activity 2.4: Analyze Central Idea, students use their annotations to complete an Analyzing Central Ideas Chart and then analyze how the central idea emerges, develops, and is shaped across the text, culminating in a response about the author’s choices. The Responsive Teaching Move notes address students who need support with the analysis concepts (e.g., directing attention to the first sentences of paragraphs or asking what new information each section adds). However, these moves primarily support conceptual access rather than providing linguistic scaffolds tailored to MLLs. Within the Levels of Support on the digital platform, the chart becomes more scaffolded in Light, Moderate, and Intensive levels (question prompts embedded in headers, added prompts in evidence boxes, and sentence frames for author choices and development). These frames help scaffold the language needed to explain and justify central ideas, but they are not sufficient on their own—particularly for students working from print materials without the platform’s embedded scaffolds—and they do not consistently support MLLs in navigating the text-dependent reasoning and language demands required to explain how ideas develop over the course of the text.
Similarly, in Grade 12, Unit 5, Section 4: Genre Study, students read Cory Franklin’s article “Why All the Modern-day Hate Toward the Merchant of Venice?” and listen to the Code Switch podcast episode “All that Glisters Is Not Gold,” then analyze and evaluate how structure and mode shape ideas. In Activity 4.9: Annotate for Structure and Details, students independently annotate how the author structures ideas. The materials again suggest a model annotation as a general support option and provide small-group annotation questions as Responsive Teaching Move notes. However, all of the Levels of Support on the digital platform are the same in this activity; across levels, students have access to glossed words, with little variation in scaffolding that would help MLLs interpret structure, credibility, or rhetorical choices in a complex argumentative text. In the next activity, 4.10: Evaluate How Structure Shapes Ideas, students complete a six-step process that requires summarizing, identifying a central claim, analyzing structure (beginning/middle/end), identifying examples, evaluating the effect, and discussing how structure influences effectiveness. Sentence stems are provided at key points (e.g., for summarizing key takeaways, addressing confusion, and evaluating effectiveness), and the Levels of Support in the digital platform offer additional sentence starters in the chart and discussion prompts. These supports create useful entry points for producing evaluative language about structure and effectiveness. However, the task still assumes students can independently manage significant comprehension and conceptual demands. For example, while Step 1 provides stems for responding, including prompts to share what was “confusing or challenging” about the article, students may struggle to articulate these thoughts if earlier reading supports were insufficient. Steps 2 and 3 offer conceptual reminders and a prompt to model “if time allows,” but they do not provide teacher-facing model language or student-facing linguistic tools aligned to the language goal of evaluating structural elements using evaluation language and text evidence. Steps 4 and 5 offer minimal support beyond completing chart components, and while discussion stems reappear in Step 6, the supports do not consistently build the disciplinary reasoning required to evaluate whether a structure is effective or how alternative structures might change impact. Additionally, the three differentiated Levels of Support are largely the same across Light, Moderate, and Intensive, limiting responsiveness to varied proficiency needs during the highest-demand parts of the evaluation.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Overall, Lenses on Literature provides some meaningful and well-aligned supports that enable MLLs to engage with complex texts and participate in analysis tasks. However, the supports are inconsistently distributed across the full sequence of comprehension, analysis, and evaluation. While students often receive help identifying ideas and producing responses, they are not always supported in developing the deep analytical thinking and explanatory language required to fully meet the task demands. The approach is strong in maintaining rigor, amplifying language access, and offering multiple pathways for participation, but inconsistent scaffolding for higher-order thinking limits MLLs’ full and complete participation in analyzing and evaluating texts across the program.
Indicator 2i
Materials include structured protocols and teacher guidance that frequently allow students to engage in evidence-based discussions about the texts they are reading.
The discussion protocols and teacher guidance in Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for indicator 2i. The program incorporates structured discussion protocols to support student participation across partner, small group, and whole-class formats, using Anchor Strategies such as Chalk Talk, Debate, Fishbowl, Seminar, and Pair Up–Square Up, all of which are outlined step-by-step in the Anchor Strategy Library. Lessons clearly identify the discussion format and include preparation tools (e.g., note-catchers), discussion norms, reflection components, scoring guides, and Responsive Teacher Moves to guide facilitation and feedback. Seminar discussions, in particular, emphasize respectful, evidence-based dialogue, goal setting, and post-discussion reflection, with prompts that encourage students to build on ideas, use textual evidence, and ask clarifying questions. Teachers are provided with facilitation steps, monitoring guidance, scoring criteria, and access to Sample Student Responses and sentence frames to scaffold discourse. For smaller discussions throughout units, the Teacher Edition includes guidance on chunking the thinking process that happens before discourse, so that students are better prepared for fruitful discussions. However, guidance for monitoring the depth and quality of academic content during discussions is sometimes general, and Responsive Teacher Moves sometimes focus more on participation and compliance than on advancing disciplinary thinking.
Materials include structured protocols that support students in participating in various types of discussions.
The Lenses on Literature program includes protocols that support students in engaging in various types of discussions throughout the course. These discussions prompt students to draw on textual evidence, prior knowledge, and personal ideas to extend and deepen their thinking. The program incorporates the following discussion formats:
Partner (including Turn-and-Talk)
Small Group
Whole Class
These formats are used across various types of “Anchor Strategies” including:
Chalk Talk
Debate
Discussion Moves
Fishbowl
Pair Up-Square Up
Seminar
The documents for these “Discussion Anchor Strategies” can be found on the Carnegie Learning Platform in the Supplemental Resources section under the Anchor Strategy Library. Each document includes the steps for each strategy.
The Teacher Edition includes a Lesson at a Glance for every lesson, which provides high-level guidance on the type of discussion students will engage in within the lesson: Partner, Small Group, or Whole Class.
An example of the type of discussion opportunities in the program is:
In Grade 10, Unit 1, Section 1: Unit Launch, students participate in a partner discussion where they “compare and discuss their annotations of ‘Food is a Story’ by Gaby Melian.” Before the discussion, the teacher reviews the purpose of the discussion, assigns students to pairs, and provides students with focus questions for their partner discussions. During the discussion, the teacher moves around the room and monitors.
Speaking and listening instruction includes facilitation, monitoring, and feedback guidance for teachers.
The How to Foster Student Connections Across Contexts and Communities with Lenses on Literature document, located in the Teacher Resources section of the platform, provides high-level information on facilitating “Respectful, Evidence-Based Discussion.” The document states: “Lenses provides multiple structured discussion protocols to help students examine differing ideas without reducing them to stereotypes. The Seminar in the Synthesis section of each unit models sustained, respectful dialogue about complex ideas, with students setting and reflecting on personal discourse goals. These discussion protocols emphasize:
Listening for and building on evidence
Exploring how context shapes interpretation
Asking clarifying and probing questions
This ensures that differences in perspectives are understood in relation to context and evidence, not reduced to ‘agree/disagree’ positions.”
The Teacher Edition includes Teaching Steps and Responsive Teacher Moves for each lesson, illustrating the steps teachers should take to facilitate each activity and respond to student needs, including discussions. While these notes on facilitating and monitoring discussions are present, the materials do not always include specific student sample responses that teachers should listen for during each discussion. Additionally, while the Responsive Teacher Move notes are present for discussions, they sometimes focus on monitoring for compliance, rather than supporting teachers in facilitating the specific academic content of the discussion. For some activities, the program provides Sample Student Responses. These responses can be found on the Carnegie Learning platform under Teacher Resources > Sample Student Responses. Teachers can reference these documents to orient themselves to the types of answers students might share in discussions. For Seminar discussions, this document includes guidance on how teachers should prepare students before the discussion, facilitate the discussion, and provide feedback after the discussion. When paired with the lesson plans, this guidance helps teachers manage both the structure and the content of the discussion.
In Grade 11, Unit 5, Section 5: Synthesis, students engage in a Seminar where they discuss questions about how narrative elements can be used to convey one or more themes. After the discussion, students reflect on their participation and the ideas that were shared. Before the discussion, teachers explain the purpose of the seminar and review the seminar norms, which include:
“Listening respectfully, even when disagreeing,
Not interrupting
Critiquing ideas, rather than peers
Allowing others time to speak
Being mindful of body language and eye contact
Staying on topic.”
The Teacher Edition includes the steps to the discussion activity and three Responsive Teacher Moves notes. For during the discussion, the note states,
“If students are not following directions, review and model the expectations and discussion norms. If needed, pose the following questions to move the discussion forward:
Have you ever changed something about yourself to fit in? How did you feel?
What part(s) of your identity are you proudest of? Why?
For the self-reflection step, the note states,
“Pose the following question(s) to help students who need support to write their reflection:
If you met your goal, is there something else you can do during the next discussion to improve?
Do you feel like your participation in this discussion was adequate? Did you allow other students to speak equally?
Is there a discussion norm that is difficult for you to follow? How can you improve on demonstrating it?”
For the reflection on ideas step, the note states,
“Use the following questions to help students who need support to reflect on the ideas in the seminar:
What perspectives from the discussion surprise you?
Have any of your initial ideas changed because of the discussion? If so, how?
What was challenging about the discussion and how could a similar challenge be addressed in the future?”
The Teacher Edition provides a scoring guide that teachers can use to give each student feedback on their participation in the seminar. Responsive Teacher Moves are available for teachers to use based on the potential needs of students. This guide includes questions like, “Did the student:
Accurately demonstrate understanding of others’ ideas?
Reasonably adjust ideas in response to others?
Logically build on the ideas of others?”
The Sample Student Responses document includes sample student responses and textual evidence for all the questions in the activity. Additionally, the document includes sample student discussion goals, sentence starters, and additional teacher facilitation guidance. For during the seminar, the guidance reminds teachers to “use prompts sparingly but when needed, including:
Where do you see that in the text?
Does anyone want to challenge or build on that?
How do you know?
Why is this important?”
These prompts remind teachers to ensure students are using evidence in their discussions, responding to the content of each other’s ideas, and providing a full analysis of their ideas.
In Grade 10, Unit 2, Section 4: Genre Study, students participate in a small group and larger group discussions on the mood and tone conveyed through the word choice in the Love Poetry collection. In small groups, students chunk the analysis into steps. In one step, they analyze for tone. The Teacher Edition includes a Responsive Teacher Move note for identifying tone which states,
“If students need support to identify a word or phrase that represents the poem’s tone, prompt them with the following sentence frames:
The word ______ suggests / reveals ________ about the speaker.
The speaker’s attitude about _______ is revealed through the word _________.
Through the word ________, we know that the speaker feels ________ about _______.”
In another step, students analyze for mood. The Teacher Edition includes a Responsive Teacher Move note for identifying mood, which states,
“If students need support to identify a word that represents the poem’s mood, prompt them with the following sentence frames for the discussion:
The word _________ makes me feel __________.
The word _________ represents the overall atmosphere of the poem.”
After discussing and working in smaller groups, students discuss their ideas in larger groups. The Teacher Edition provides a scoring guide that teachers can use to give each student feedback on their participation in the discussion. Responsive Teacher Moves are available for teachers to use based on the potential needs of students. This guide includes two questions: “Did the student:
Provide a clear and reasonable explanation of how the meaning of the word or phrase is affected by the context, connotation, or figurative use?
Provide a reasonable explanation of the impact of the specific word choices on meaning and tone?
Pose relevant questions?
Reasonably probe and challenge ideas?”
Indicator 2j
Materials include opportunities that frequently allow students to engage in evidence-based discussions about the texts they are reading.
The evidence-based discussion opportunities in the Lenses on Literature materials meet expectations for indicator 2j. The program provides frequent opportunities for students to engage in collaborative, text-based discussions in partner, small group, and whole-class formats, particularly throughout Sections 2–5 of each unit. Students regularly discuss texts using structured prompts that require them to reference specific details, make inferences, and respond to peers’ ideas using textual evidence. Each unit culminates in a Section 5 Seminar in which students synthesize ideas across multiple texts, drawing on textual examples and prior learning to support their responses. Students prepare in advance by setting goals and planning evidence-based responses, actively engage by listening, taking notes, and elaborating on classmates’ ideas, and reflect afterward on both their thinking and participation. These structured conversations consistently require students to incorporate evidence from texts while considering multiple perspectives and engaging in intellectual discourse.
Materials provide opportunities for students to engage in collaborative conversations about the text being read, which require them to utilize, apply, and incorporate evidence from texts and/or sources.
Throughout the Lenses on Literature units, students have many opportunities to engage in collaborative conversations about the texts being read. In each unit, students engage in partner, small group, and whole group discussions, primarily throughout sections 2 through 5 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” Every Section 5 of each unit on the “journey tracker” culminates in a Seminar activity where students discuss all the big concepts of the unit, while referring back to the unit’s texts.
In Grade 11, Unit 3, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students read Ralph Waldo Emerson’s “Self-Reliance.” Then, they identify and discuss central ideas from the text in partners as they answer the question, “What two main ideas does the text focus on?” After discussing with partners, students discuss in small groups. Later in the discussion, students consider, “How do these central ideas interact and build on each other?”
Materials provide opportunities for students to consider others’ perspectives and engage in intellectual discourse about texts and topics they are reading.
In each unit, students engage in a Seminar where they discuss all the texts they have read throughout the unit. Before each Seminar, students engage in a Prepare for Seminar activity where they set individual goals and plan their initial responses. In their initial planning students are to “use ideas and examples from the unit texts and your own life to respond.” During the Seminar, students share their ideas with their classmates, take notes, respond to each other’s responses, and ask each other questions. After the Seminar, students reflect on their individual goals and the ideas that surfaced in the class discussion.
In Grade 10, Unit 6, Section 5: Synthesis, students engage in a Seminar where they discuss the following questions:
“What is the importance of origin stories?
What do origin stories tell us about time, location, culture, and ourselves?
What techniques do authors use to create a mythical explanation for something important in the real world?
What connections can you find between the origin stories you read in this unit?
In what ways can origin stories be relevant to people’s everyday lives today?”
As they discuss, students take notes on their peers’ thoughts and are expected to respond and elaborate on others’ ideas.
Indicator 2j.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in evidence-based discussions about the texts they are reading.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in evidence-based discussions about the texts they are reading. While the materials provide some strategies to facilitate discussion, the supports do not consistently ensure that MLLs can fully participate in sophisticated academic conversations. In many lessons, MLLs are prompted to engage with philosophical, ethical, or interpretive content but are not provided with the linguistic tools necessary to express complex ideas, support claims with evidence, or respond to peers at the expected level of rigor.
For example, in Grade 9, Unit 6, Section 4: Genre Study, students complete a Read the World activity centered on William Blake’s quote, “If the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear to man as it is, infinite.” Students are asked to “make an intentional effort to think about how other people might view the events [they] experience in daily life” and to discuss their reflections in pairs or small groups. Afterward, they consider abstract questions such as:
“What new ideas in these texts ‘cleansed’ your ‘doors of perception’?
What other possibilities did they reveal to you?”
The Responsive Teaching Move note for this activity suggests that teachers “ask questions to encourage students to elaborate: Why do you think that? Is there another way to say that? Could you tell me more about that?” and to coach students to ask each other these same questions during conversation. These general prompts promote peer interaction but do not provide sufficient linguistic scaffolding for the high-level cognitive and academic demands of the discussion. Students are being asked to interpret abstract philosophical concepts and synthesize ideas from complex ethical texts, including “The Ethical Dilemma of Self-Driving Cars” by Patrick Lin. MLLs require explicit instruction in the use of analytical and evaluative language to fully express such ideas. The absence of structured academic language models or Tier 3 vocabulary limits MLLs’ ability to participate at the depth expected of the task.
A similar gap between linguistic support and academic expectation appears in Grade 10, Unit 6, Section 5: Synthesis. In this culminating Seminar, students discuss questions such as:
“What is the importance of origin stories?
What techniques do authors use to create a mythical explanation for something important in the real world?
In what ways can origin stories be relevant to people’s everyday lives today?”
Students are expected to “respond and elaborate on others’ ideas,” synthesizing insights across multiple texts while taking notes on peers’ comments. Pre-work includes filling out a Seminar Note Catcher to prepare initial responses. On the digital platform, the Levels of Support system provides sentence starters for this graphic organizer for the Light, Moderate, and Intensive-Multilingual levels. The Seminar Note Catcher is not provided in the print materials. The Responsive Teaching Move note for the Seminar Note Catcher advises teachers to prompt struggling students with questions like “What have you learned about origin stories throughout this unit?” or “Which text did you connect with the most? Why?” The materials do provide explicit connections to support MLLs in using this pre-work in discussion. During the seminar, the materials provide some supports, including a Multingual Learners note suggesting teachers “Provide students with a bank of phrases that can be used for explanation” including “for example, for instance, such as” and “displays, demonstrates, exhibits, indicates, is known for, illustrates, refers to, includes, contains, consists, tends to, reflects.” While the pre-work and the bank of phrases support MLLs’ participation at a basic level, they do not provide the scaffolding necessary for full engagement in analytical discussion. MLLs are asked to use advanced academic language—synthesizing, comparing, and evaluating—but the materials offer no explicit models for these linguistic functions. Without supports such as sentence stems for connecting or contrasting ideas, or explicit discussion moves, MLLs’ contributions are likely limited to general observations and isolated contributions, rather than the complex synthesis and collaborative participation expected in a seminar setting.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Across Lenses on Literature, discussion-based activities frequently emphasize engagement and reflection but lack consistent attention to the linguistic demands that enable MLLs to engage in academic discourse. Supports such as open-ended teacher prompts and peer discussion opportunities are present but remain too general to develop the specialized language of argumentation, comparison, and synthesis required at the high school level. The gap between the linguistic demand of the discussion tasks and the linguistic supports provided restricts MLLs’ ability to participate fully and equitably in evidence-based discussions. While the materials demonstrate an intention to include MLLs in rich classroom conversations, they fall short of providing the explicit, task-specific scaffolds necessary for those students to meet grade-level expectations for academic discussion.
Indicator 2k
Materials include explicit instruction on independent word-learning strategies and key vocabulary words to build knowledge within and across texts.
The instruction on independent word-learning strategies and key vocabulary words in Lenses on Literature materials meets expectations for indicator 2k. The program incorporates structured and explicit vocabulary instruction throughout all units, with a focus on essential words for comprehension and content-specific terms. Vocabulary instruction is primarily concentrated in Sections 2: Comprehension and 3: Building Knowledge, where many activities occur before, during, and/or after reading, with opportunities to revisit words in later sections. Section 4: Genre Study emphasizes content-specific and academic vocabulary. Lesson plans in the Teacher Edition provide teaching steps, scripting, and Responsive Teaching Moves to support instruction, including independent word learning strategies. Students also encounter multiple exposures to vocabulary within and across texts, supported by glossed terms on the digital platform. While teachers explicitly introduce content-specific vocabulary, students develop independence by identifying additional words through word-learning strategies embedded in activities.
Materials include structured and explicit practices for introducing key vocabulary words and independent word-learning strategies within the context of the texts (analyzing morphemes, etymology, word maps, and discussion of word relationships/shades of meaning, dictionary skills, context clues). Attention is paid to vocabulary essential to understanding the text and high-utility academic words. Materials provide multiple exposures to key vocabulary within (i.e., before, during, after reading) and across texts.
Vocabulary instruction is embedded in each unit throughout the Lenses on Literature program. Teachers can use the Teacher Edition’s Sequence of Instruction page to identify which activities throughout the unit will require vocabulary instruction. The program includes repetitive strategies that students use to learn and practice vocabulary activities, such as the Affix Generator, List-Group-Label, Vocabulary Mapping, Word Intensity Chart, and Word Solving Tool. Vocabulary instruction primarily occurs in Sections 2 and 3 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” In Section 2: Comprehension and Section 3: Building Knowledge, vocabulary activities are present before and after reading each text. For some unit activities, students revisit words they encountered in previous vocabulary exercises. In Section 4: Genre Study, the vocabulary presented through activities focuses more on content-specific and academic terms. Each lesson plan in the Teacher Edition includes Teaching Steps and Responsive Teaching Moves for each vocabulary activity. Although some vocabulary activities target words essential for text comprehension, the program also emphasizes content-specific vocabulary development.
In Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 2: Comprehension, students engage in a vocabulary activity before reading “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. In this activity, students review the program’s “list-group-label” vocabulary strategy, sorting vocabulary words by connections among them. Students use a graphic organizer to sort the words unceasing, vigilance, envious, impediment, luminous, hindrance, symmetry, neutralize, transmitter, sashweights, vague, wince, glimmeringly, temples, consternation, cower, bellow, gravely, synchronize, gambol, and riveting gun. The Teacher Edition includes a lesson plan with teaching steps, which include reviewing the vocabulary strategy, listing the words, grouping the words, and labeling the words. For each step, the lesson plan includes guidance for teachers. The group words step guidance states, “Ask students to sort the vocabulary words into groups based on similar words. They should record their groups in the Words columns until all words have been sorted into a group. As students form their word groups, move around the room, and monitor progress.” The lesson plan includes a Responsive Teaching Move, which features guiding questions that teachers can use to support students who require additional assistance. After reading the text, students revisit these words in a separate activity. This time, students work in partners to “discuss each word’s relevance to the plot of the story and the concept of worldbuilding prominent in dystopian literature.” The Teacher Edition includes a lesson plan with teaching steps.
In Grade 12, Unit 1, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students read Pablo Neruda’s “Ode to the Onion,” John Keats’s “To Autumn,” and Eavan Boland’s “Ode to Suburbia” and annotate for poetry elements, figurative language, and tone. First, students review the content-specific words: poetic elements, figurative language, and tone. The Teacher Edition includes a lesson plan with teaching steps, where the first step is to review key terms and concepts. For this step, the guide provides a clear definition of each word, allowing teachers to define them for students. After reading and annotating, students complete another activity where they analyze these elements in the poems. The Teacher Edition includes a lesson plan with teaching steps for this activity with Responsive Teacher Move notes. The Responsive Teacher Move note for the identify figurative language step includes definitions of metaphor, simile, and personification, along with examples and analysis for each example. This note also includes guiding questions that teachers can use to support students
On the digital platform, students have access to “glossed terms” within each text they read. These words include tier 2 and tier 3 words. Students may click on these words shown in blue during reading to find the part of speech and definition.
While the materials prompt teachers to introduce content-specific vocabulary explicitly, other words are not taught directly; instead, students identify them independently as they apply word-learning strategies.
The materials include lists of Academic Vocabulary used throughout their course. These can be found in the Additional Resources section of each unit overview on the platform. The lists are separated into two: a Grades 9-10 list and a Grades 11-12 list.
Indicator 2k.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the explicit instruction of independent word-learning strategies and key vocabulary words to build knowledge within and across texts.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the explicit instruction of independent word-learning strategies and key vocabulary words to build knowledge within and across texts. The materials consistently provide strategies and supports for MLLs to fully engage in vocabulary routines and word-learning instruction. Responsive Teaching Move notes appear throughout the program and include MLL supports that help students work alongside their peers in building academic vocabulary and deepening knowledge of texts.
Across lessons and units, MLL supports are embedded directly in instruction rather than added as optional supplements. For example, in Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 2, Comprehension, all students participate in a vocabulary activity before reading “Harrison Bergeron.” As part of this routine, students review the program’s “list-group-label” strategy, sorting vocabulary words by conceptual relationships. The materials provide Responsive Teaching Move notes in the form of guiding questions for students who need more support, and Teacher Resources supply differentiated scaffolds such as partially completed charts. This combination of explicit teacher guidance and differentiated support enables MLLs to participate fully in the vocabulary strategy.
The materials continue to offer sustained scaffolding for vocabulary development at upper high school grades. In Grade 12, Unit 1, Section 4, Building Knowledge, students read and annotate three poems—Pablo Neruda’s “Ode to the Onion,” John Keats’s “To Autumn,” and Eavan Boland’s “Ode to Suburbia.” MLL supports include access to an audio version of each text for students who may not yet read independently, ensuring they can participate in the same learning tasks as their peers. Teacher modeling reinforces vocabulary learning through think-alouds that demonstrate how to evaluate the impact of word choice, such as noticing how the word claustrophobia conveys a harsh or critical tone. The materials also include Responsive Teaching Move notes that guide teachers to support small-group annotation with targeted questions, such as: “How does the speaker feel about the onion?” or “What figurative devices does the speaker use to introduce the onion?” Sentence stems, such as “In line ___, the poet uses a metaphor to compare ___ to ___,” further help students articulate ideas using academic language. Additional support includes teacher-created visual glossaries to anchor vocabulary understanding. These integrated scaffolds—audio access, modeled think-alouds, discussion stems, and visual tools—ensure that MLLs can fully participate in explicit instruction of vocabulary and word-learning strategies.
Additionally, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Overall, the materials provide coherent, embedded support that fosters active participation in vocabulary learning. Teacher modeling, targeted scaffolds, and structured opportunities for speaking and writing ensure that MLLs can access grade-level vocabulary tasks and apply strategies for determining meaning in context. Because these supports appear throughout the instructional materials and are meaningfully connected to the texts and routines students engage with, Lenses on Literature meets expectations for supporting MLLs’ complete participation in explicit vocabulary instruction and independent word-learning strategies.
Indicator 2l
Materials include opportunities for students to practice independent word-learning strategies, as well as newly taught vocabulary words.
The opportunities for students to practice independent word-learning strategies and newly taught vocabulary words in Lenses on Literature partially meet expectations for indicator 2l. The program provides multiple opportunities for students to use independent word-learning strategies to determine the meaning of challenging vocabulary. Throughout the units, students engage in recurring vocabulary strategies, such as the Word Solving Tool, Vocabulary Mapping, List-Group-Label, Word Intensity Charts, and the Affix Generator, that require them to apply context clues, analyze word relationships, consider shades of meaning, and use dictionaries or reference materials. Activities across grade levels prompt students to use independent word-learning strategies. Lessons also introduce and reinforce academic and content-specific vocabulary connected to literary concepts, which students then apply when analyzing texts. In addition, students are provided with Vocabulary Journals to track and analyze new words using strategies such as context clues, morphemes, and reference tools. However, while vocabulary learning strategies are embedded in activities, opportunities for systematic review and for applying newly learned vocabulary in broader discussions or writing tasks are limited, and guidance for using the Vocabulary Journal is not clearly specified in the Teacher Edition.
Materials include opportunities for students to use independent word-learning strategies to understand the meaning of challenging words (inferring from context, using morphological or etymological awareness).
Many of the vocabulary activities throughout the program require students to use independent word-learning strategies to understand the meaning of challenging words. The program includes repetitive strategies that students use to learn and practice vocabulary activities, such as the Affix Generator, List-Group-Label, Vocabulary Mapping, Word Intensity Chart, and Word Solving Tool. These strategies require students to practice skills such as using context clues, considering word relationships, understanding shades of meaning, and utilizing dictionary skills.
In Grade 10, Unit 5, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students practice using context clues to determine the meaning of vocabulary words before reading “Scholastique Mukasonga on Writing and Mourning from Exile” by Deborah Tresiman. To complete the activity, students use the Word Solving Tool strategy to “select three words from the text to determine their meaning.” They complete a graphic organizer in which they record the word, clues related to the word, clues surrounding the word, and their inferred meaning. Then, students use a dictionary to look up and write down the definition of the word, and write an original sentence using it.
In Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 2: Comprehension, students use the Affix Generator strategy to “infer the meaning of a word by analyzing its roots and affixes” before reading “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death” by Patrick Henry. To complete the activity, students choose a word from the word bank: reconciliation, subjugation, supplication, remonstrated, prostrated, interposition, tyrannical, inestimable, or formidable. Next, they identify “the prefix, root, and suffix of the word in the graphic organizer. Then, they list the meaning of each prefix, root, and suffix. Next, students write down as many words as they can that “contain the prefix, root, or suffix” in the word. Last, students use all the information in the graphic organizer to identify the definition of the word they chose.
In Grade 12, Unit 6, Section 2: Comprehension, students use the List-Group-Label strategy to “identify and categorize vocabulary words” before reading “The Machine Stops” by E.M Forster. Students use a word bank to group the words by “words that seem similar” and then label the group with “what [they] believe the words have in common.” The words provided are: practical, essence, isolated, radiance, advanced, adapted, solitude, disregarded, lonely, reverent, melodious, brilliancy, summoned, machine, apparatus, cinemaphote, respirator, artificial, civilization, blasphemy, euthanasia, subservient, mechanical, worship, defect, homelessness, superstition, irreligious, and human.
Materials include opportunities for students to use academic and content-specific vocabulary in various contexts.
In many unit activities, the first step is to “Review key terms and concepts,” while for some other lessons, the focus is on “concept overview.” In this step and these lessons, the teacher introduces and reinforces academic and content-specific vocabulary, preparing students to apply their knowledge in subsequent steps.
In Grade 9, Unit 4, Section 2: Comprehension, the teacher reviews the concepts of conflict and plot as the first step in a lesson. Students review that “in a literary work,” conflict “is a struggle between opposing forces that drives the plot.” They also review that plot “is the series of main events in a story, organized to intrigue or engage the audience. An author can use the actions and interactions of characters to move the story forward and develop the plot. An author might also use what a character thinks and feels inside, also known as their internal conflict, to advance the plot.” Next, students review their annotations in “Lather and Nothing Else” by Hernando Téllez and work in partners to analyze the plot by discussing key actions of characters in the text. Later, they consider character motivations and examine the impact of each character’s motivation on their actions to analyze the character’s development.
In Grade 12, Unit 1, Section 4: Genre Study, students complete an activity that introduces them to the concept of rhetorical appeals. The teacher defines several types of rhetorical appeals, including ethos, pathos, logos, and kairos. Students see examples of each. Then, students write sentences using each type of sentence. In the next activity, students analyze the rhetorical analysis used in Richard Nixon’s “Address to the Nation on the War in Vietnam.”
Practice opportunities incorporate some review of previously learned words based on their connection to the topic of study.
Students have opportunities to use and apply content-specific vocabulary throughout the program. However, review opportunities for words learned from most of the texts being studied are not present outside of the learning surrounding each text. Additionally, the materials do not explicitly provide opportunities for students to apply newly learned vocabulary words in discussions or most of their writing outside of vocabulary-specific activities. While students may choose to do this, the directions in the activity and guidance in Teacher Edition does not prompt for reminding students to use recently learned vocabulary words.
Materials include Vocabulary Journals in the Student Edition. On these pages, the directions for students state, “Throughout the unit, keep track of words and concepts that are new, interesting, or particularly important to learn and practice. Use all the tools and strategies you know to determine what the word means: context clues, morphemes, dictionaries, and other reference materials.” The journal includes a graphic organizer where students input the words, definitions, and other information, such as connotations, sentences, related words, and visual cues. While this journal is included in the materials, the Teacher Edition does not specify when students should use it, leaving it up to each student to decide whether to create and manage their own journal.
Indicator 2l.MLL
Materials provide supports for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the practice of independent word-learning strategies, as well as newly taught vocabulary words.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the practice of independent word-learning strategies, as well as newly taught vocabulary words. While the materials offer several lesson-level supports that assist MLLs in using context clues, affixes, and other word-learning strategies, these supports are not applied consistently across units, and opportunities for students to use newly taught vocabulary in meaningful, discipline-appropriate contexts remain limited.
The materials provide some support for MLLs to participate in independent word-learning strategies. For example, in Grade 10, Unit 5, Section 3, Building Knowledge, students practice using context clues to determine the meaning of vocabulary words before reading “Scholastique Mukasonga on Writing and Mourning from Exile” by Deborah Tresiman. MLL support includes pairing MLLs with peers who can help identify context clues; MLL students then apply the clues to infer meaning. The materials direct teachers to model the strategy using complex sentences from the text, such as: “‘Even the fruit on the trees tasted of blood,’ recalls Sudershana Kumari…,” “At the time, there was an impetus to portray the moment of independence as a triumph…,” and “On the other side, they would become refugees—penniless, homeless strangers in a strange land.” These strategic pairings and teacher modeling routines provide targeted scaffolds that help MLLs participate in independent word-learning processes and negotiate the sophisticated language present in the anchor text.
However, these supports are not consistently robust or sustained across the program. In Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 2, Comprehension, students use the Affix Generator strategy to infer the meaning of unfamiliar words before reading Patrick Henry’s “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death.” Teacher modeling is provided as the only MLL support during instruction, exemplified through a think-aloud that analyzes the word reconciliation: “Clues in the word include the base reconcile and the suffix -tion… Clues around the word include the word love and the details that Congress presents a petition to the British…” While this model demonstrates the cognitive process of morphological analysis, no additional scaffolds are offered during instruction to help MLLs apply the strategy independently or reinforce the newly acquired vocabulary in context. Some additional supports for completing the Affix Generator activity are available on the digital platform through the Levels of Support for the Moderate-Multilingual and Intensive-Multilingual levels. Students assigned the Moderate-Multilingual level are provided with examples of prefixes, root words, and suffixes on the opening Review Vocabulary Strategy page. The Intensive-Multilingual level also provides those examples, and additionally provides a partial exemplar in the Affix Generator chart, showing the prefix and root of the word inform. MLLs are left without any supports to determine the Prefix Meaning, Root Meaning, Suffix Meaning, Other words with this prefix, Other words with this root, Other words with this suffix, or the Definition. This limited support prevents full and complete participation for MLLs and represents a pattern seen throughout the program.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Overall, the supports for vocabulary instruction and independent word-learning strategies are uneven. Some lessons offer intentional scaffolding aligned to language goals and academic tasks, while others provide only generic modeling that assumes a higher level of linguistic readiness than many MLLs may have. Opportunities for MLLs to actively use newly taught vocabulary—through structured academic discourse, writing tasks, or context-based activities—appear inconsistently, limiting their ability to internalize and apply new language. As a result, while the materials include pockets of strong support, they fall short of consistently ensuring that MLLs can fully participate in vocabulary learning and word-analysis strategies across the grade band.
Indicator 2m
Materials include explicit instruction on sentence composition appropriate to grade-level standards, embedded in what students are studying throughout the unit.
The explicit instruction for teaching sentence composition in Lenses on Literature partially meets expectations for indicator 2m. The program provides some explicit instruction in sentence-composition skills, though these opportunities are limited across the grade band. A Grammar and Language Toolkit supports instruction at each grade level, which includes isolated grammar practice and guidance for when and how to use it (e.g., after embedded activities, during revision, or in small groups). A How-To: Supporting Sentence Composition During Lenses Units document provides teachers with guidance for identifying, assessing, and supporting students’ sentence-level writing development throughout the Lenses on Literature program. Within units, sentence-level instruction is presented through activities that enable students to analyze sentence structure, tone, and style in core and mentor texts, and then apply these techniques in their own writing. Additional lessons, such as those on sentence types, provide direct instruction and practice, though the examples are not consistently drawn from core texts. Most opportunities to learn about and engage in sentence-level work occur while students are writing and revising the longer pieces of writing in Step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” There is limited practice with sentence-level writing outside of this context. While teacher guidance is clear, explicit instruction in sentence composition is relatively infrequent. Additionally, the existence of isolated grammar and sentence practice is not aligned with current research, which emphasizes embedding grammar instruction within meaningful reading and writing contexts.
Materials include some explicit instruction in sentence-composition skills (use of punctuation, sentence elaboration, sentence combining using cohesive ties, sentence fluency), embedded in what students are studying throughout the unit. Materials utilize some exemplar sentences from core and mentor texts that contain clear, varied, and rich examples of sentence structure.
Under Supplemental Resources on the platform, teachers can find a Grammar and Language Toolkit tailored to each grade level. This toolkit includes a summary of the program’s approach to grammar and language instruction, as well as information on how to utilize the Grammar and Language Toolkit. While the program includes embedded grammar and language activities throughout, the activities found in each grade level’s Grammar and Language Toolkit include isolated grammar practice outside of the topics and texts students are studying in each unit. The program suggests that teachers use these toolkits at the following times:
“After students complete embedded grammar activities
As a follow-up to mid-unit writing tasks to reinforce specific conventions
During the writing process, especially for revision after a first draft
In response to formative data or student questions about grammar and language use
In small-group or targeted support settings to address individual or group needs.”
Under Supplemental Resources on the platform, teachers can find a How-To: Supporting Sentence Composition During Lenses Units document. The document provides teachers with guidance for identifying, assessing, and supporting students’ sentence-level writing development throughout the Lenses on Literature program. It explains that sentence composition is taught in two main areas: Concept Overview activities, where students study language in context, and Writing Process activities, where they analyze and imitate model texts. Teachers are encouraged to evaluate sentence and paragraph writing during activities such as Read the World reflections, mid-unit writing tasks, and end-of-unit products using the SCALE rubric rows, Organize Ideas and Use Appropriate Language, Style, and Tone. The document outlines strategies for providing feedback using rubric language, incorporating mentor texts, and conducting brief writing conferences to help students identify their strengths, set goals, and revise their work effectively. It also includes specific supports for multilingual learners, such as assigning Levels of Support, using language goals, and providing targeted prompts to build grammatical and syntactic accuracy. The guide concludes with a Writing Conference Protocol, offering a four-step structure teachers can use for brief, focused student conferences to promote reflection and improvement in sentence composition.
In some activities, teachers walk students through examining a specific element of writing style from a core text in the unit and then practice replicating that technique in their own writing. In a few activities, while students look at sentence examples, the examples are not drawn from core or mentor texts.
In Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 4: Genre Study, teachers introduce the concept of sentence variety with students. The lesson plan includes two steps. In the first step, teachers introduce students to simple, compound, and complex sentences. They define each for students with examples and remind them that “too many simple sentences can make writing seem plodding and simplistic. Too many complex sentences may risk confusing the reader. A variety of sentence structures can give writing a rhythm and make it more interesting to read.” Then, the teacher prompts students to review sentences from the core text, “Dune Song” by Suyi Davies Okungbowa, and practice identifying sentence types. Last, students apply their learning by writing their own simple, compound, and complex sentences about one of the unit texts. In the next lesson, students reinforce this learning. The teacher prompts them to identify sentence types in the core text, “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut. In the next step, the teacher prompts students to revise sentences from the text to make them into other sentence types. They remind students that “they may revise each sentence by adding or removing clauses where possible” and that they may need to break a sentence into multiple sentences in some cases.”
In step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students produce an extended piece of writing by working through the full writing process. This stage often includes focused instruction on sentence-level writing skills.
In Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a rhetorical analysis essay. The teacher guides students through a lesson on editing sentences. The lesson plan includes guidance for several steps. First, the teacher guides students through a refresher on sentence types. Then, the teacher directs students to revise sentences in their rhetorical analysis essays. The lesson plan states that teachers should “direct students to change their simple sentences into compound and complex sentences. Remind them that complex sentences can be used to express relationships between ideas, such as similarity or opposition, cause and effect, or a sequence of events. The lesson plan includes a Responsive Teacher Move, with sentence frames that teachers can use to support students who struggle with the activity.
While the above activities are present in the program and the materials provide clear instructional guidance for the teacher, the opportunities throughout the grade band are infrequent. Most opportunities to learn about and engage with sentence-level work occur while writing and revising the longer pieces of writing in the program. There is limited practice with sentence-level writing outside this context.
Indicator 2m.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the explicit instruction of sentence composition appropriate to grade-level standards.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the explicit instruction of sentence composition appropriate to grade-level standards. While the materials include opportunities for students to study and practice sentence composition, the supports designed specifically for MLLs are inconsistent and often too limited to ensure full access to the linguistic complexity required at the secondary level.
Some components of the program offer strong, explicit support for MLLs developing sentence-composition skills. For example, under Supplemental Resources, teachers have access to the How-To: Supporting Sentence Composition During Lenses Units document. This resource provides actionable guidance for identifying, assessing, and supporting students’ sentence-level writing development across the program. It clarifies where sentence composition is taught in the curriculum—such as Concept Overview activities and Writing Process lessons—and encourages teachers to use rubric language from the SCALE rubrics to help students revise for organization, language, style, and tone (see 2m report for more details). The guidance includes strategies such as mentor-text analysis, brief writing conferences, and feedback aligned to sentence-level goals. This resource also includes targeted support for MLLs, including assignments with tools such as sentence frames, glossed vocabulary, and example responses. The document highlights language goals for lessons and provides explicit prompts that guide learners to revise for pronoun clarity, subject–verb agreement, transitions, and domain-specific language. These supports exemplify a strong example of how the program can fully support MLL participation in sentence composition when explicit, targeted scaffolding is integrated.
At the lesson level, however, supports are inconsistent. In Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 4: Genre Study, teachers introduce the concept of sentence variety through explicit instruction on simple, compound, and complex sentences. The lesson includes clear definitions, examples, and modeling using sentences drawn from the core text Dune Song by Suyi Davies Okungbowa. Students then apply this knowledge by identifying sentence types and composing their own. The lesson includes several Responsive Teaching Move notes to support students who need help distinguishing between sentence structures, such as directing them to reread definitions or to review examples of independent and dependent clauses. Teachers are also encouraged to provide transition words, such as because, since, and resulting in, to support students in increasing sentence complexity. An embedded Sentence Variety Practice Chart offers additional structured practice. These supports provide helpful clarification and some scaffolding toward more complex sentence structures, but they do not constitute comprehensive linguistic support for MLLs. The instruction centers heavily on teacher explanation and correction rather than providing multiple, scaffolded opportunities for MLLs to practice constructing sentences with increasing complexity. As a result, MLLs can participate in the lesson, but the supports are not robust enough to guarantee full mastery of grade-level expectations.
A similar pattern appears in Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 6, Writing Process, where students revise their rhetorical analysis essays by editing for sentence structure. Teachers review sentence types and instruct students to convert simple sentences into compound or complex ones, emphasizing the ways complex sentences can convey relationships such as cause and effect or contrast. The Responsive Teaching Move note supplies a few sentence frames to support students who struggle, including frames for compound sentences (“The argument appeals to the reader’s emotions, and the rhetorical devices ___”) and for expressing cause and effect or sequence. However, the only explicit MLL-specific support offered is a single sentence frame intended to help students incorporate feedback: I will (state action) by __. Besides this sentence frame, the supports provided are generic and not sufficiently targeted to the linguistic demands of rhetorical analysis. MLLs are expected to revise sentences to demonstrate academic sophistication independently, but the materials do not offer explicit modeling of advanced syntactic structures, discipline-specific language patterns, or guided practice opportunities tailored to varying proficiency levels. Consequently, the support allows partial participation but falls short of enabling full engagement with the sentence-level revisions required at Grade 11.
Additionally, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Across units, the materials demonstrate an uneven approach to supporting MLLs in explicit sentence-composition instruction. While some lessons provide teacher modeling and limited sentence frames, many rely primarily on general scaffolds that are not aligned to the linguistic complexity of high school writing. The inconsistent nature of MLL-specific supports means that, while students can participate in sentence-composition instruction, they are not consistently provided with the targeted scaffolds needed to fully and completely develop grade-level sentence skills. Overall, the materials include pockets of helpful support but lack a coherent, systematic approach to meeting the linguistic needs of MLLs during sentence-level instruction. The result is partial access: MLLs are able to engage in the tasks, but they are not fully supported in producing the sophisticated, varied, and rhetorically effective sentences expected at the 9–12 grade band.
Indicator 2n
Materials include evidence-based opportunities for students to practice sentence composition and editing of their own writing, appropriate for their grade level.
The sentence composition opportunities in Lenses on Literature partially meet expectations for indicator 2n. The program provides some opportunities for students to practice and apply sentence-composition skills while writing about texts, primarily within the writing process stage of each unit. In Step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students analyze sample writing pieces, sometimes at the sentence level, to understand expectations before composing their own work. During the writing and revision process, students apply what they have learned by composing and refining sentences in their own writing. Students also analyze model texts to identify purpose and audience, using rubrics to guide evaluation and reflection; however, the prompts do not consistently encourage deep analysis of how audience and purpose shape writing style. Overall, while students engage in some sentence-level work within extended writing assignments, opportunities to focus on and practice sentence-composition skills outside of these larger writing tasks are limited.
Materials include some opportunities for students to write sentences about the texts under study while practicing and applying sentence composition skills.
In step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students review a sample piece of writing that helps them understand the expectations for the assignment. Sometimes, they analyze it at the sentence level. After analyzing, students apply their learning in their own piece of writing. Although students practice sentence-level writing during the process of composing longer pieces throughout the program, opportunities to focus on sentence-level skills, outside of extended writing tasks, are limited within each unit.
In Grade 9, Unit 4, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a definition paper. Before writing, students read and analyze a sample definition paper, considering each part of the paper in relation to the program’s rubric. Later, students use what they learned from this sample piece of writing to write their own thesis statements, “a sentence or set of sentences that states the central claim or controlling idea of the text.”
Materials include some opportunities for students to practice and apply sentence composition skills by examining their own writing.
In step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students have the opportunity to revise and edit their writing. Sometimes, this revision is at the sentence level. After learning about a revision or editing concept, students apply their learning to their own piece of writing.
In Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 6: Writing Process, students draft a rhetorical analysis. After completing a draft, students complete several revision activities. In one activity, students edit sentences to clarify the relationships among ideas. They start by locating “simple sentences in their draft[s] that could be added to or combined to clarify the relationship of ideas.” Next, students “Transform [their] simple sentences into compound and complex sentences by adding to or combining the original sentences in a way that signals similarity or opposition between ideas, cause and effect, or a sequence of events.”
Materials include some opportunities for students to adapt their language based on the intended audience and purpose.
For each writing product in step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students receive and analyze a rubric. This rubric includes a row about using “appropriate language, style, and tone.”
In step 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” students read a sample writing product and determine its purpose and audience by analyzing each assignment’s rubric. Then, they use this learning in their own piece of writing. Although students have opportunities to analyze writing samples across the grade band, the prompts do not consistently guide them to examine the purpose and audience of each writing style with sufficient depth or focus.
In Grade 10, Unit 5, Section 6, students write a synthesis essay. Before writing, students read and analyze a sample synthesis essay, considering its purpose and intended audience. For this task, students compare the sample synthesis essay to the assignment’s rubric. They score the assignment and take notes on their score, using the language from the rubric in their reasoning. At the end of the analysis, students answer the following question: “What have you learned from this process that can be applied to your own synthesis essay?” Later, they apply this thinking as they draft their essay.
Indicator 2n.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in sentence composition practice and editing of their own writing, appropriate for their grade level.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet expectations for supporting MLLs’ full and complete participation in evidence-based opportunities for sentence composition practice and editing of their own writing, appropriate for their grade level. The materials provide some support for MLLs at the lesson level and include targeted scaffolds to help students engage in sentence-level work; however, these supports are limited and inconsistently applied.
In some cases, the materials offer targeted scaffolds that align directly with the writing task all students are completing. For example, in Grade 9, Unit 4, Section 6, students write a definition paper. Before drafting, they study a sample definition paper, analyze how it meets rubric expectations, and then develop their own thesis statements. The materials include several MLL-oriented supports, such as pairing Entering and Emerging MLLs with peers for modeled discussion routines, prompting reluctant writers to begin drafting without concern for accuracy, and providing sentence frames for key components of the assignment (e.g., “According to the dictionary, a villain is ___,” and “The texts in the unit [have/have not] challenged my understanding…”). These supports help MLLs begin to articulate ideas at the sentence level and engage with the academic task. However, support is limited to initial drafting and does not extend to all subsequent sentence-composition or editing steps. As a result, MLLs are not fully supported in developing or refining the academic sentences they will need to produce a complete definition paper.
Similarly, in Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 6, students revise sentences in a rhetorical analysis by transforming simple sentences into compound or complex ones to clarify relationships among ideas. The provided MLL supports include a single feedback frame (“I will (state action) by ___”) and a few sentence frames tied to types of relationships (e.g., cause and effect: “The argument is convincing because ___”). While these resources offer initial linguistic entry points, they are narrow in scope and do not address the full range of sentence-composition challenges inherent in rhetorical analysis, such as forming precise analytical claims, shifting between voices, or maintaining formal register. Because MLLs have limited opportunities to practice sentence combining and editing beyond this brief activity, and because the linguistic scaffolds provided are basic rather than comprehensive, MLLs cannot fully or independently participate in the sentence-level demands of the task.
Additionally, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Across the program, these examples illustrate a consistent pattern: while MLLs are offered some helpful tools—such as sentence frames, discussion routines, or partner structures—the supports are limited, inconsistent, and often confined to a single step in the writing process. While Lenses on Literature includes several useful supports for sentence composition and editing, these supports are not embedded consistently across writing tasks or throughout the writing process. Because MLL-specific scaffolds appear only occasionally and do not fully match the linguistic demands of the assignments, MLLs lack the level of structured, sustained guidance necessary to fully and completely participate in sentence-composition practice and editing alongside their peers.
Indicator 2o
Materials include a mix of both on-demand and process writing opportunities that are appropriately-aligned in purpose, genre, and/or topic to the reading of that unit.
The on-demand and process writing opportunities in Lenses on Literature meet expectations for indicator 2o. The program offers a balanced mix of grade-appropriate on-demand and process-based writing opportunities. Students engage in a variety of short, on-demand tasks, such as free writes, summaries, mini-essays, paragraph responses, and Read the World reflections, which allow them to demonstrate understanding and make meaning of texts in real-time. These activities are integrated throughout the units and often ask students to analyze or respond to specific readings, research questions, or literary concepts. Each unit also culminates in a process-based writing task in Step 6 of the “journey tracker,” where students plan, draft, revise, edit, and publish an extended piece of writing aligned with the unit’s Driving Task Prompt. These longer assignments closely connect to the genre, topic, and purpose of the unit’s Anchor Text(s) and maintain a clear connection to the unit’s reading and thematic focus. The distribution of process writing types (persuasive, explanatory, narrative) largely aligns with the standards, with a slight emphasis on persuasive writing. Overall, the program offers a balanced mix of short, on-demand writing experiences and extended, process-based compositions that reinforce students’ engagement with and understanding of the unit texts, while also developing their reading, analysis, and writing skills.
Materials include a mix of grade-appropriate on-demand and process writing.
The program offers various opportunities for students to engage in on-demand writing activities. These activities include free writes, summaries, mini-essays, paragraph responses, and Read the World reflections.
In Grade 9, Unit 1, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students read “5 Surprising Ways That Heroes Improve Our Lives” by Scott T. Allison, PhD. After reading, students write a summary of the text.
In Grade 10, Unit 4, Section 4: Genre Study, students complete research to their own research question. As part of the writing process, students complete a freewrite response to their research question, ensuring they consider the following:
“How can you synthesize the information from your sources to answer your research question?
How can you integrate multimedia components to clarify and support information?”
In Grade 11, Unit 4, Section 5: Synthesis, students consider a rhetorical situation and develop a research statement to develop the context for an author study. For this statement, they plan and draft a one-paragraph research statement to the prompt, “In paragraph form, draft your research statement in the Research Statement row of your Research Note Catcher. Use the information in your chart to answer:
Who is the author and why are they significant?
What aspects of the author’s life and works will your research focus on?
Which questions would guide your research?
How will this research contribute to ideas about Indigenous writers?”
In Grade 12, Unit 1, Section 4, students read “The Convergence of the Twain” by Thomas Hardy. Later, they write a mini-literary analysis where they explain “how the author’s use of poetic structure develops one or more themes in the poem.”
Throughout each unit, students complete Read the World activities. For each of these activities, students write reflections.
Step 6 of the program’s “journey tracker” requires students to engage in process-based writing. Students have opportunities to plan, draft, revise, edit, and publish longer pieces of writing in this part of each unit.
In Grade 10, Unit 1, Section 6: Writing Process, students plan, draft, revise, edit, and publish a rhetorical analysis to the prompt “After reading ‘Why We Cook When the World Doesn’t Make Sense’ by Reem Kassis, write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Kassis uses descriptions of food as a rhetorical technique to advance her perspective. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.”
In Grade 11, Unit 5, Section 6: Writing Process, students plan, draft, revise, edit, and publish a comparative literary analysis to the prompt “After reading ‘Lingua Franca’ by Carole McDonnell and personal narratives on belonging in America, write a comparative literary analysis in which you analyze how two authors use narrative elements and techniques to develop compelling accounts of the tension between assimilation and individuality. Support your analysis with evidence from both texts.”
Materials reflect the distribution indicated by the standards for process writing (9-12 40/40/20 persuade/explain/convey experience). (The information below is presented as contextual evidence only and is not factored into the overall score or rating.)
The process writing distribution in the Lenses on Literature program is as follows:
Grade 9: 50/33.3/16.7 persuade/explain/convey experience
Grade 10: 50/33.3/16.7persuade/explain/convey experience
Grade 11: 50/33.3/16.7 persuade/explain/convey experience
Grade 12: 50/33.3/16.7 persuade/explain/convey experience
Lenses on Literature materials mostly meet the distribution indicated by the standards across process writing opportunities.
Writing opportunities are appropriately aligned to the purpose, genre, and/or topic of the unit’s reading.
Each unit’s extended writing assignment aligns directly with the unit’s purpose, genre, and/or topic of study. These process-based writing tasks are guided by the program’s Driving Task Prompts, which students are introduced to in Section 1 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” Presenting the prompt early allows students to keep the final writing product in focus as they progress through the unit’s learning activities. The genre of the extended writing tasks either directly mirrors the genre of the Anchor Text(s) of each unit or requires students to draft a genre-appropriate analysis of the Anchor Text(s).
In Grade 10, Unit 3, the Anchor Text is a short story. The Driving Task prompt of the unit requires students to write an argumentative essay on this story. The prompt states, “After reading ‘The Three Questions’ by Leo Tolstoy and researching multiple texts on the concept of a meaningful life, write an argumentative essay in which you argue what you think qualifies as a ‘good’ life. Support your position with evidence from the texts. Include counterclaims and rebuttals in your response.
In Grade 11, Unit 2, the Anchor Text is an essay. The Driving Task prompt of the unit requires students to write a literary analysis of this essay. The prompt states, “After reading ‘How it Feels to Be Colored Me,’ write a literary analysis in which you analyze how Hurston uses her interactions with others and experiences in different settings to develop her ideas on freedom and oppression within the context of the Harlem Renaissance. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.”
In Grade 12, Unit 3, the Anchor Text(s) are various adaptations of an epic poem. The Driving Task prompt of the unit requires students to rewrite an epic scene from the epic poem. The prompt states, “After researching and comparing ancient Western epics, rewrite an epic scene from Beowulf in which you use rich literary language to convey your interpretation of the event, setting, and /or character(s).”
Indicator 2p
Materials include explicit instruction in varied writing processes, embedded in what students are studying throughout the unit.
The explicit instruction in varied writing processes in Lenses on Literature meets expectations for indicator 2p. The program includes explicit instruction in the writing process, which is embedded in the content students study throughout each unit. Writing tasks are closely tied to unit readings, and the Teacher Edition provides structured lesson plans that detail instructional steps, facilitation guidance, and Responsive Teacher Moves to support students at different stages of writing. Students practice writing for a range of purposes through scaffolded activities, such as summarizing, analyzing, and composing multi-paragraph essays, culminating in a process-based extended writing task in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” Lesson plans provide teachers with guidance on activities such as summarizing and paragraph development, and students analyze mentor texts that illustrate genre expectations before drafting their own work. Teachers are supported with analytic rubrics developed with Stanford’s SCALE, which clarify performance expectations and guide targeted feedback and reflection. Additional resources, such as Formative Assessment scorecards, Using Analytic Rubrics in Lenses on Literature, and Learning from Student Work: End of Unit documents, outline processes for scoring after students complete assignments, providing feedback, and using student work to inform instruction. However, while assessment tools are strong, lesson plans often provide only general guidance—such as “circulate and monitor student progress”—without specifying what teachers should look for or how to deliver effective feedback during instruction.
Materials include explicit instruction in writing processes (paragraph and multi-paragraph construction for varying purposes), embedded in what students are studying throughout the unit.
Throughout the program, students have opportunities to practice writing for different purposes. Writing assignments are directly integrated with the reading students complete throughout each unit. Teacher guidance for these assignments is provided in the lesson plans located in the Teacher Edition. Each lesson plan provides the steps for each writing activity, guidance on how teachers should facilitate, and Responsive Teacher Moves that teachers can use if students struggle.
In Grade 10, Unit 1, Section 2: Comprehension, students read “Why We Cook When the World Doesn’t Make Sense” by Reem Kassis. The Teacher Guide includes a lesson plan that presents the instructional steps of this activity. In the first step, “Review Comprehension Strategy,” the guidance provided instructs teachers to remind students of the definition of a summary and explain that students will be using the escalating summary strategy to complete this activity. The following definition is provided for teachers to use: “a summary is a short statement of the main points of a text, put into [your] own words, and [they] should not include opinions.” In the next step, “Read and summarize the first section of the text,” the guidance instructs teachers to pair students up, open their graphic organizers, and have them read and summarize the first section with their partner. This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note, which teachers can use with students who struggle. The note offers suggestions on how teachers can assist students who encounter words or sections of the text that they do not understand. In the third step, “Continue reading and building your escalating summary,” the lesson plan instructs teachers to direct students to keep reading and summarize. This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note, which teachers can use with students who struggle to complete the task. The note provides sentence frames that teachers can use with students who need support writing their summaries. In the final step, “Draft a summary of the entire text,” the guidance instructs teachers to prompt students to draft a one- to two-sentence summary of the text. This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note, which teachers can use with students who struggle. The note provides a suggestion that teachers can support students in summarizing central ideas through compound and complex sentences. A sample of what this looks like is provided.
In each unit, students complete an extended writing assignment in section 6 of the program’s “journey tracker.” Across the curriculum, these tasks vary in their genre and purpose. The Teacher Edition includes guidance for facilitating each part of the writing process. Each lesson plan provides the steps for each activity, guidance on how teachers should facilitate, and Responsive Teacher Moves that teachers can use if students struggle.
In Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a literary analysis to the Driving Task prompt “After researching the dystopian genre and historical context of ‘Harrison Bergeron’ by Kurt Vonnegut, write a literary analysis in which you analyze how Vonnegut’s structural choices (such as the use of parallel plots and contrasting character experiences) develop social commentary on how societies pursue equality or improvement. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.” The Teacher Edition includes eight lesson plans that teachers use to support students in completing this task. In the third lesson in this section, students draft their body paragraphs. The lesson plan for this activity includes five steps. In step 1, “Identify key ideas,” the guidance prompts teachers to explain the purpose of this activity and ensure that students have all the necessary materials to be successful. Then, teachers should prompt students to review their thesis statements and “guide students to highlight the key ideas within their thesis statement that they will need to develop their body paragraphs.” In the second step, “Determine supporting ideas,” the guidance prompts teachers to direct students to draft their supporting ideas in part 1 of their Literary Analysis Planner based on their analysis of their thesis statement and to monitor student progress, “ensuring the supporting ideas will develop the controlling idea in their thesis statement and that they will have enough textual evidence to and analysis to back up each idea.” This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note, which states, “If students need support to draft supporting ideas, encourage them to look back at the parts of the thesis statement and that they will have enough textual evidence to back up each idea.” In the third step, “Write topic sentences,” the guidance instructs teachers to “remind students that each paragraph should begin with a topic sentence” and to support students in drafting their topic sentences by asking themselves a set of questions. This step includes a Responsive Teacher note which states, “To help students explain their interpretation, direct students to a specific organizational pattern within the sample response.” The relevant section of the sample response is provided in the note. In the next step, “Gather textual evidence,” the guidance instructs teachers to “remind students that they will need to include textual evidence and analysis in each paragraph to develop their supporting ideas” and to support students in gathering evidence by asking themselves a set of questions. In the last step, Plan analysis, teachers should prompt students to draft their analysis for each piece of evidence. The lesson plan includes a set of questions that teachers should present for students to ask themselves, including:
“What do I want my reader to understand about this evidence?
How does this evidence develop my supporting idea and connect to the controlling idea?
What does this evidence show?”
Materials provide teachers with mentor texts and/or student exemplars to support students in examining how the genre works.
The program includes an “Analyze the [Work Product]” activity at the start of Section 6 in each unit. In this activity, the teacher guides students through analyzing a sample piece of writing that is in the same genre as the extended piece of writing they will produce. Each sample writing piece is based on a text students encountered earlier in the unit, but it differs from the text they use for their own final writing task. This analysis supports students in understanding how the genre functions and how the work product’s components fit together. As part of this analysis, students consider the purpose and audience of the work product.
In Grade 12, Unit 2, Section 6: Writing Process, students draft a rhetorical analysis to the Driving Task prompt “After researching ‘A Modest Proposal’ by Jonathan Swift and other satirical texts, select one text and write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how the author uses satirical techniques to develop a critique of individuals, ideas, or events. Support your response with evidence from the texts.” Before writing, students analyze a literary analysis, considering its purpose, audience, and features, in the Analyze the Rubric and A Rhetorical Analysis activity. The lesson plan for this activity includes four steps. In step 1, “Clarify the rubric,” teachers explain the purpose of the activity and prompt students to review the descriptors for each scoring element on the rubric and “discuss what they need to do in their rhetorical analysis to meet or exceed expectations” in partners. The lesson plan reminds teachers to “move around the room and monitor the discussion.” In the second step, “Evaluate a sample response,” teachers remind students of the prompt and introduce them to the sample rhetorical analysis. Then, teachers direct students to read the sample response independently, score each element on the rubric, and write a brief rationale for each score.” This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note, which states, “If students need support to come up with a score for each scoring element, have them work with their partner to talk through how they should score each scoring element.” In the next step, “Come to a consensus,” teachers prompt students to work in pairs and agree on scores, and then compare their scores with those of another pair. The lesson plan includes a list of questions that teachers can use to facilitate the discussions. In the final step, “Make suggestions,” the teacher prompts students to “think about the elements they scored as below exceeding expectations” and “annotate the sample response with specific suggestions for how to improve any scoring element that received less than a four.” The lesson plan reminds teachers to “circulate to monitor progress.” This step includes a Responsive Teacher Move note which states, “If students need support to come up with specific suggestions, provide some examples, such as Acknowledge the complexity of the issue here.” While the lesson plan provides general guidance for teachers on chunking the task for students, it does not offer examples of what teachers should look for or listen for in student work and discourse.
Materials provide guidance and instruction to teachers on how to provide timely and constructive feedback on student writing.
As students complete the final work product in each unit, lesson plans include guidance for teachers to facilitate each step of the writing process.
Many of the activities in Section 6 of each unit’s journey tracker include formative assessment guidance for the teacher. This guidance includes a Scoring Guide, which teachers use as a quick tool to assess how well students are meeting the activity's focus skills and standards. The guide supports teachers in interpreting formative data to plan next instructional steps, such as reteaching, scaffolding, or enrichment. Additional digital tools for recording observations and feedback are available on the Carnegie Learning platform. Responsive Teacher Move Notes are provided for each activity that includes formative assessment guidance.
In Grade 11, Unit 5, Section 6: Writing Process, students draft a comparative literary analysis to the Driving Task prompt “After reading ‘Lingua Franca’ by Carole McDonnell and personal narratives on belonging in America, write a comparative literary analysis in which you analyze how two authors use narrative elements and techniques to develop compelling accounts of the tension between assimilation and individuality. Support your analysis with evidence from both texts.” In one activity, students draft their thesis statements. The lesson plan includes guidance on formative assessment. This guidance includes a scoring guide to use to assess student performance and a Responsive Teacher Move note. Guidance states, “Formatively assess each student’s Artifact of Learning using this scoring guide. Did the student:
Provide a reasonable explanation of the impact of the author’s narrative choices?
Provide a reasonable explanation of how multiple themes or aspects of a complex theme interact and build on one another within the text?
Appropriately introduce claims?
Identify or call upon the most relevant meaning of domain-specific words and phrases?”
MLL Language Goal: “Did the student introduce interpretation using connecting words?”
Guidance includes two Responsive Teacher Move Notes. The first states, “If student responses are not aligning with the prompt, have them analyze the prompt with four steps:
a. Highlight – Highlight the main task.
b. Distinguish – Distinguish subtasks.
c. Restate – Restate each subtask in your own words.
d. Answer – Answer every part of the prompt.”
Each work product that students complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker” includes a specific rubric that teachers and students should use to evaluate student work. These rubrics differ based on the genre of each writing assignment and the grade level.
On the Carnegie Platform, teachers can find the Using Analytic Rubrics in Lenses of Literature document in the Teacher Resources section. The document explains how teachers can use analytic rubrics as instructional and assessment tools to evaluate student progress in reading and writing. Developed in collaboration with Stanford’s SCALE, these rubrics break complex literacy skills into clear, standards-based criteria across a four-point developmental scale, from Emerging to Exceeds Expectations. The guide outlines how to interpret and apply rubric rows to both formative and summative tasks, emphasizing their use for giving targeted feedback, promoting student growth, and aligning instruction with standards. Teachers are encouraged to use rubric language in feedback, conduct writing conferences (if time allows) to help students set goals, and engage in collaborative scoring to calibrate expectations and plan next steps. The document highlights that analytic rubrics are not designed for assigning grades but for supporting consistent, evidence-based evaluation and instructional decision-making across classrooms.
On the Carnegie Learning platform, teachers can find the"Learning From Student Work: End of Unit document at the end of each unit’s activities and under Teacher Planning Tools in the Teacher Resources section. The document is a teacher-facing guide that outlines a five-step process for analyzing student writing at the end of a unit in the Lenses on Literature program. Teachers begin by reviewing the unit’s Driving Task Prompt and focus skills or standards to clarify what the assignment asks students to think about and demonstrate. Then, they analyze the unit rubric, examining how expectations progress across scoring levels and identifying rubric language that connects to unit standards. Next, teachers score student work using the rubric, discuss scoring decisions with colleagues, and compare results to ensure consistency. In later steps, teachers analyze patterns in student performance and use these insights to determine instructional next steps. The process concludes with a reflection on the effectiveness of instruction, alignment to standards, and plans for improving teaching and assessment in the next unit.
While the steps for this process are clear, the guidance is generalized and not specific to each rubric. For step 3, score student work using the rubric, the guidance states, “Individually score a student work sample. Discuss with your team how you scored the student work, making sure to explicitly connect the student work to the specific criteria outlined in the rubric. If you have time, consider these options:
Repeat with additional student work samples and look for patterns.
Swap one of your scored student work samples with a colleague. Have them score the paper as well. Then, compare your scores to see your similarities and differences.”
Although the formative assessment Scoring Guides and SCALE rubrics offer clear criteria for assessing student writing and providing timely feedback, the lesson plans often include general directions such as “circulate and monitor student progress.” These directions lack specific guidance on what teachers should observe or the types of feedback they should provide while students are working.
Indicator 2p.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in all instruction of varied writing processes.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the criteria of providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in all instruction of varied writing processes. While the materials incorporate writing instruction across multiple genres and require students to engage in the stages of the writing process—prewriting, drafting, revising, and editing—the supports offered to MLLs are inconsistent, often underdeveloped, and not fully aligned with the academic and linguistic demands of the writing tasks.
For example, in Grade 10, Unit 1, Section 2, students read “Why We Cook When the World Doesn’t Make Sense” by Reem Kassis and complete a series of scaffolded summarization tasks. The guidance includes explicit review of the comprehension strategy, targeted support with vocabulary and difficult sections of text, and sentence frames to assist students in constructing summaries. A Responsive Teaching Move note also provides a sample of how to transform ideas into compound and complex sentences. These supports provide a strong foundation for comprehension and short-form writing, demonstrating an intentional attempt to scaffold linguistic complexity.
Another example occurs in Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 6, where students compose a literary analysis in response to the Driving Task: “After researching the dystopian genre and historical context of ‘Harrison Bergeron’ by Kurt Vonnegut, write a literary analysis in which you analyze how Vonnegut’s structural choices … develop social commentary.” The Teacher Edition includes a series of lesson plans to help students navigate the conceptual thinking required, including identifying key ideas, determining supporting ideas, writing topic sentences, gathering textual evidence, and planning analysis. These steps provide an organizational scaffold, and the Responsive Teaching Move notes offer general guidance to redirect students’ thinking or point them to sample responses, as well as several word banks to support specific steps in the writing process. The Levels of Support on the digital platform provide sentence starters for the Literary Analysis Planner and other graphic organizers throughout the process, but they primarily scaffold the production of writing, not the instruction of key concepts. The materials do not include explicit scaffolds essential for MLLs to fully engage with the genre. The lesson plan does not provide support for learning how to gather appropriate textual evidence or how to articulate the reasoning that links evidence to a claim. Without these supports, MLLs are expected to independently produce complex disciplinary language, such as explaining structural choices, analyzing social commentary, and integrating textual evidence, without adequate preparation. Thus, while students receive procedural guidance for the task, they do not receive the genre-specific linguistic scaffolding necessary for complete participation.
Across units, the instructional design does not provide the scaffolds necessary for MLLs to independently access the sophisticated discourse structures, academic vocabulary, and syntactic complexity required for the extended writing tasks. The few scaffolds that do appear (such as reminders, questions to consider, or opportunities to revisit a sample response) are not consistently aligned to the high-level academic language demands of the writing tasks. There are limited opportunities to practice the language functions required for analytical, explanatory, or argumentative writing, and explicit instruction on language use is uneven. As a result, students may understand the conceptual expectations of the writing tasks but lack the linguistic support required to produce writing that meets grade-level standards.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
While Lenses on Literature does support MLLs during some writing instruction, these supports are often narrow in scope, inconsistently applied, and insufficiently aligned to the linguistic demands of grade-level writing tasks. The lack of explicit, genre-specific scaffolds across the entire writing process—from prewriting through revision—limits MLLs’ full and complete participation in varied writing processes.
Indicator 2q
Materials include frequent opportunities for students to practice the writing processes using evidence-based strategies, embedded in what students are studying throughout the unit.
The opportunities for students to practice the writing processes using evidence-based strategies in Lenses on Literature meet expectations for indicator 2q. The program offers multiple opportunities for students to engage in all stages of the writing process, including planning, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing, utilizing a variety of supports and tools. For each final writing product in Section 6 of a unit’s “journey tracker,” students use structured graphic organizers to plan their ideas, such as story planners for narrative writing and analysis planners for literary essays. Students then draft their work in stages, using their organizers to develop thesis statements, body paragraphs, introductions, and conclusions. Revision and editing are emphasized through targeted strategies, such as varying sentence structure and maintaining a consistent tone and register. Students participate in peer feedback and use an editing checklist that covers sentence structure, style, conventions, and formatting to polish their work. The program also integrates technology throughout the writing process: students draft, revise, and submit their work digitally and, in some cases, prepare and present their writing using multimedia tools. These repeated, scaffolded opportunities help students develop independence and fluency across all phases of the writing process.
Materials include multiple opportunities for students to plan writing (e.g., with graphic organizers).
Students have opportunities to plan their writing for each final writing product that they complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 9, Unit 1, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a short story. As part of the writing process, they plan their writing. First, they prewrite by brainstorming ideas. Next, they plan for the hero in their stories by completing part 1 of the Short Story Planner graphic organizer. As they plan their hero, they consider their name, motivation, obstacles, how they respond to these obstacles, and how the hero will differ from other characters. Next, they plan their plot structure by completing part 2 of the Short Story Planner. As they plan the plot, they consider the plot pyramid, including the exposition, inciting event, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution, and denouement. They also map out their hero’s journey, creating a clear sequence of events. Afterward, they plan for their setting. To plan the setting, students complete part 3 of the Short Story Planner. As they plan the setting, they consider the figurative language and sensory details they will use to describe the setting. In subsequent planning steps, students plan the dialogue and story endings in their Short Story Planners.
Materials include multiple opportunities for students to draft their writing.
Students have opportunities to draft their writing for each final writing product that they complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 10, Unit 2, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a literary analysis. After planning, students draft their writing. First, they use their Literary Analysis Planner graphic organizer to draft a thesis statement. Then, they use their organizer to draft their body paragraphs. Last, they use their planner to draft an introduction and conclusion.
Materials include multiple opportunities for students to revise and edit their writing with grade-appropriate strategies and tools.
Students have opportunities to revise and edit their writing for each final writing product that they complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” For each unit, students have a specific revision focus based on the skills taught during the unit. As part of the revision and editing process, students engage in peer feedback. Before submitting their writing products, students proofread and polish using an editing checklist. The checklist includes the following elements:
Sentence Variety and Structure
Word Choice
Style and Tone
Capitalization, Spelling, and Formatting
Students are encouraged to use the checklist for one to two specific elements at a time, repeatedly proofreading their writing until they’ve gone through all the elements. This checklist is generic and used in each unit.
In Grade 11, Unit 3, Section 6: Writing Process, students write an argumentative essay. After planning and drafting, students revise and edit their writing. First, they revise and edit their essays for voice, ensuring that their sentences include precise language and that their essay appropriately varies sentence patterns for effect. Next, they edit to ensure that it contains a consistent and appropriate register. Last, they proofread and polish their argumentative essay.
Materials include multiple opportunities for students to use technology to produce and publish writing.
Students have opportunities to use technology to produce and publish their writing for each final writing product they complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.” Students use the digital platform to complete the entire writing process, from planning to submission. For some assignments, students use technology to create presentations and present their writing.
In Grade 12, Unit 4, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a rhetorical essay. After planning, drafting, revising, editing, and polishing, students plan a presentation to share their rhetorical essays with their peers. After drafting their presentations, students present to their classmates.
Indicator 2q.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in opportunities to practice the writing process using evidence-based strategies.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in opportunities to practice the writing process using evidence-based strategies. The materials include scaffolded writing instruction and practice with planners, teacher modeling, and step-by-step lesson plans.
Lessons include writing-process supports that meaningfully assist MLLs in generating ideas, organizing their thinking, and planning for extended writing. For example, in Grade 9, Unit 1, Section 6, Writing Process, students plan a short story using a multi-step, highly structured process. Students prewrite by brainstorming ideas, then plan their hero using the Short Story Planner graphic organizer, considering factors such as name, motivation, obstacles, and responses to challenges. Next, students plan the plot pyramid—exposition, inciting incident, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution, and denouement—as well as the sequencing of their hero’s journey. Students also plan their setting with attention to figurative language and sensory details, and subsequently plan dialogue and story endings. This planning sequence is supported by a Responsive Teaching Move note that provides targeted, actionable scaffolds: If students need support generating ideas, teachers prompt them to review their brainstorming work and discuss questions with peers. For MLLs specifically, the materials suggest that students follow these steps in their home language and provide a bank of sequencing phrases (e.g., later, afterward, earlier, suddenly, eventually). Additionally, the Levels of Support in the digital platform provide sentence stems, sentence frames, and question prompts across the light, moderate, and intensive levels for the planning graphic organizers. These supports enable MLLs to fully participate in idea development and narrative organization by addressing both cognitive and linguistic demands. This is a strong example of aligned support that scaffolds students toward grade-level expectations.
Other lessons throughout the course offer comparable supports for MLLs to practice the writing process. For example, in Grade 11, Unit 3, Section 6: Writing Process, students write an argumentative essay and are expected to revise and edit their drafts for voice, sentence variety, precise language, and control of register—high-level, abstract writing skills that require substantial linguistic control. The primary MLL-specific support highlighted in the Teachers Edition in this section is the suggestion that students write their response in their home language and then translate what they can into English using a bilingual dictionary or translation device. Although drafting in a student’s home language can serve as a valuable cognitive tool, relying on translation for a complex task may not always provide the most effective supports. MLLs may benefit from additional targeted English-language scaffolds to fully support their work, as they navigate both the demands of expressing their thinking in academic English and the revision process to improve sentence variety and structure, word choice, style and tone, and capitalization/formatting. The student-facing materials on the digital platform do provide linguistic scaffolds to support MLLs in participating in the planning, revising, and editing processes through the Levels of Support. The Argumentative Essay Planner and the Revise for Voice and Edit for Register activities all include question prompts, examples, and sentence frames targeted to the Light, Moderate, and Intensive-Multilingual levels to facilitate MLL participation in practicing the writing process. Although the Teacher’s Edition could more clearly reference the supports available in the student-facing digital materials, the Levels of Support offer sufficient scaffolding for MLLs to engage in practicing the writing process in this lesson and across the course.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Overall, Grades 9-12 of Lenses on Literature provide meaningful, embedded supports that enable MLLs to engage at each stage of the writing process, particularly through the differentiated Levels of Support available on the digital platform. While the Teacher’s Edition could more explicitly connect instructional guidance to the scaffolded student-facing resources and incorporate additional targeted linguistic supports for complex writing tasks, the integrated planners, sentence frames, modeling, and tiered scaffolds collectively create sustained opportunities for MLLs to participate in writing instruction. When implemented within the digital environment, these materials offer a coherent and responsive system that promotes access, engagement, and growth in academic writing.
Indicator 2r
Materials include frequent opportunities for students to practice evidence-based writing (by drawing from the texts and knowledge built throughout the unit), citing textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly and implicitly.
The evidence-based writing opportunities in Lenses on Literature partially meet expectations for indicator 2r. The program provides opportunities for students to write analytically about texts, using textual evidence to support their ideas and inferences. Students frequently cite evidence in discussions and graphic organizers; however, chances to develop these ideas into whole paragraphs or extended written analyses are limited. Most evidence-based writing occurs in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker,” where students engage in larger writing tasks. These assignments guide students in developing claims, selecting and analyzing evidence, and organizing their writing using rubrics and graphic organizers. While these tasks support students in applying evidence-based reasoning, the opportunities to engage in sustained, text-based writing beyond major unit assignments are infrequent.
Materials provide some writing opportunities that require students to cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. Materials provide some writing opportunities focused on students’ analyses and claims, which are developed by reading closely and working with texts and sources to provide supporting evidence. While opportunities are present, they are infrequent.
Throughout the program, students have some writing opportunities that require them to cite evidence and analyze texts closely. Although students frequently cite textual evidence in graphic organizers and discussions across the program, there are relatively few opportunities within units for them to compose paragraphs or extended pieces of writing. Most of the opportunities to use evidence in writing occur through larger writing assignments in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker.”
In Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 4: Genre Study, students analyze the structure of “All Summer in a Day” by Ray Bradbury. To analyze, students complete a graphic organizer to answer the prompt “Consider structural choices you discussed. How can ‘All Summer in a Day’ be divided into sections? How does the story move forward, between settings or between characters?” On the graphic organizer, identify a structural choice, include textual evidence to support that choice, identify its effect, and later analyze the impact of this textual structure. To determine the impact, students answer the prompt “How does Bradbury use structure and pacing to illustrate or convey a larger social commentary?” While students complete this graphic organizer, they do not use the organizer to compose an actual writing sample.
In Grade 11, Unit 1, Section 4: Genre Study, students draft a mini rhetorical analysis to the prompt “Write a mini rhetorical analysis arguing how the speaker of either ‘Address to the Nation on the War in Vietnam’ or ‘Why I Am Opposed to the War in Vietnam’ creates a position on war and protest. To complete this task, students must “incorporate information from their chosen text to support their analysis of it” and “use either direct quotations or paraphrasing.” The rubric for their response focuses on their analysis of rhetoric.
In Grade 12, Unit 4, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a rhetorical essay. During the writing process, students plan their counterclaims and rebuttals. They complete a graphic organizer in which they input their thesis statement, subclaims, supporting evidence, reasoning, and counterclaims, among other details. Next, students use their graphic organizers to draft the body of their essays, ensuring that they cite relevant sources.
Indicator 2r.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in opportunities to practice evidence-based writing (by drawing from the texts and knowledge built throughout the unit), citing textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly and implicitly.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs to fully and completely participate in opportunities to practice evidence-based writing, citing textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly and implicitly. While the program includes multiple writing tasks that require students to analyze texts and incorporate textual evidence, the supports provided are inconsistent in specificity and depth, limiting MLLs’ ability to engage meaningfully and independently in evidence-based writing across the grade band.
Across the materials, some strategies and supports aim to support MLLs’ participation in reading and discussion that build to evidence-based writing tasks. These include options for reading aloud, access to home-language drafting, the use of word or phrase banks, and differentiated graphic organizers on the digital platform. Such general supports can help MLLs begin engaging with content; however, they do not consistently align with the linguistic and disciplinary demands of evidence-based writing. The result is that MLLs may understand the content task but lack the scaffolds needed to cite textual evidence effectively, analyze an author's choices, or construct written arguments that demonstrate grade-level mastery.
For example, in Grade 9, Unit 2, Section 4, Genre Study, students analyze the structure of Ray Bradbury’s “All Summer in a Day.” Students use a graphic organizer to identify structural choices, include textual evidence, and later analyze the impact of those choices by responding to the prompt: “How does Bradbury use structure and pacing to illustrate or convey a larger social commentary?” Although the task requires substantial evidence-based reasoning, students do not use the organizer to compose an extended analysis or practice integrating evidence into writing. MLL supports provided in the Teacher Edition include reading aloud with expression and providing a bank of phrases, such as for example, displays, demonstrates, exhibits, and indicates. The digital platform provides differentiated Levels of Support for student-facing materials, like the Literary Text Structure Chart and the Determining Theme Chart, including sentence stems, sentence frames, and question prompts. While these supports can assist with understanding the text and producing basic explanations, they do not explicitly scaffold the key writing functions required for this task—such as selecting relevant textual evidence, embedding quotations, or analyzing how structural choices create meaning. Without these task-specific supports, MLLs may participate in the preliminary thinking but struggle to fully access the writing expectations of the assignment.
A similar pattern emerges in Grade 12, Unit 4, Section 6, Writing Process, where students are asked to write a rhetorical essay. During planning, students complete a graphic organizer containing thesis statements, subclaims, supporting evidence, reasoning, and counterclaims. Then, they use this organizer to draft body paragraphs in which they must cite textual evidence and analyze rhetorical strategies. In the digital platform, this organizer is differentiated for Light, Moderate, and Intensive-Multilingual support, which includes breaking down key sections into smaller chunks, additional prompts and examples, and sentence stems and frames. MLL supports provided in the Teacher Edition include strategies such as visualizing rhetorical elements (speaker, audience, message, tone) and providing banks of persuasive phrase frames, such as "Some people believe… yet others believe…" and "The opposition might claim…." Students are also shown how an anchor text is organized by rhetorical moves. While these supports promote understanding of rhetorical structures and help MLLs participate in planning discussions, they do not fully address the linguistic demands of evidence-based writing. Students receive limited scaffolding for integrating and citing evidence, for explaining how evidence supports rhetorical claims, and for drafting precise analytical commentary—tasks essential for success in a rhetorical essay. As a result, MLLs may understand the rhetorical components but lack the linguistic models needed to produce a complete, grade-level written analysis.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Although the materials provide some general instructional supports for MLLs—such as access to home-language drafting, transition words, and evaluative phrases—these supports are not consistently tied to the specific analytical writing expectations across units. Opportunities to build functional academic language, such as synthesizing ideas across texts, explaining the implications of evidence, or drawing conclusions, appear inconsistently, and many writing tasks assume students can independently perform key evidence-based moves without explicit scaffolding. Furthermore, the materials often separate comprehension-oriented supports from writing supports: MLLs may receive help in understanding a text but not in producing the analytical writing required of them. This disconnect leaves gaps in instruction, where students may engage successfully in oral or planning activities yet lack the tools to complete grade-level written tasks. Overall, while Lenses on Literature includes evidence-based writing tasks and offers some supports for MLLs, these supports do not consistently align with the full range of language functions necessary for analytical writing. More systematic scaffolds—such as models of evidence integration, explicit guidance for citation and reasoning, and structured opportunities to practice writing with evidence—would better ensure that MLLs can fully participate in and master evidence-based writing across Grades 9–12.
Indicator 2s
Materials include explicit instruction of research skills that guide research and writing projects to encourage students to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of a topic using multiple texts and source materials.
The explicit instruction of research skills in Lenses on Literature partially meets expectations for indicator 2s. The program provides structured opportunities for students to engage in research projects that build essential research skills aligned with grade-level standards; however, these activities are concentrated in one or two units per grade level. Each grade includes at least one unit centered on sustained research, guiding students through every stage of the process: generating questions, evaluating sources, conducting research, citing evidence, and presenting findings. Lesson plans include step-by-step teacher guidance, discussion prompts, and Responsive Teacher Moves to support facilitation. While the materials include strong scaffolding and structured routines for conducting research, explicit modeling of complex research skills is limited, resulting in some inconsistency in how research skills are explicitly taught across activities.
Materials include some research projects to build research skills that lead to mastery of the grade-level standards. Materials include some explicit instruction of research skills that encourage students to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of a topic using multiple texts and source materials.
In each grade level, the program provides at least one unit that includes one or more research projects. These projects allow students to build research skills incorporated in the grade-level standards. Lesson plans provided in the Teacher Edition include teacher guidance on how to facilitate research activities. However, guidance for explicitly teaching students the skills in the standards cited for these activities is inconsistent. While present, research projects are concentrated in one or two units per grade level.
In Grade 10, Unit 4, students complete various research activities throughout the unit that support them in completing their final writing product in Section 6 of the “journey tracker.”
In Section 4: Genre Study, students complete several research activities, including generating research questions, analyzing research questions, assessing usefulness, credibility, and accuracy, analyzing credibility and accuracy, assessing the usefulness of sources, focusing [their] research, narrowing [their] research question, conducting research, skimming to evaluate, analyzing the content, writing a bibliography, and writing a mini-research report. In the mini-research report, students answer the prompt “Write a well-developed response to your research question about beauty. Include evidence from at least two sources to support your response.” For each activity, lesson plans provide teacher facilitation guidance.
For the Generate a Research Question activity, students generate questions while considering the launch text, anchor text, and genre study text. The lesson plan for this activity includes teacher guidance for four steps. In the first step, students review their ideas. The lesson plan provides facilitation guidance, such as “Ask students to review their notes for the video ‘How to Make an Attractive City’ and their annotations for the text ‘What Makes a City Beautiful?’ Encourage students to think about big ideas that the two selections have in common. Ask them to keep in mind any questions they have about the selections.” In the next step, students skim the text “Study: When a City’s Trashy Lots Are Cleaned Up, Residents' Mental Health Improves.” The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance such as “Encourage [students] to keep the title in mind as they skim and to think about any question they still have about the selection.” The Responsive Teacher Note includes suggestions that teachers can provide to students who are unsure how to skim a text. These suggestions include “Read the title and any subheadings” and “Read the first sentences of the first and last paragraph, and also of sections, if applicable.” In the next step, students participate in a discussion. The lesson plan includes a list of questions that students should discuss,
“How does each text relate to ideas about beauty?
Explain how one of the texts expands or refines its definition of beauty.
Which big ideas about beauty and our perceptions of beauty do the texts address?
What are you still wondering about beauty?”
In the last step, students generate their research questions. The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance such as “Tell students that research questions should not have simple yes or no answers and should require students to analyze and synthesize ideas.”
For the Assess Usefulness, Credibility, and Accuracy activity, the lesson plan includes eight steps. In this lesson, teachers present a framework for analyzing sources titled TREAS. In the first step of the activity, teachers review the analysis strategy with students. The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance, such as “Explain that TREAS is a strategy that helps students identify key features of an informational text. They can use this to evaluate the overall credibility and effectiveness of a text.” In step 2, the teacher reviews key concepts with students. The lesson plan provides guidance on introducing the concept of evaluating sources and includes an exhaustive list of questions that students should ask themselves as they consider whether a source is helpful, credible, and accurate. In the next five steps, students learn about each part of the TREAS framework (topic, relevance, evidence, accuracy, and sources). For each step, the lesson plan includes facilitation guidance with questions that teachers should prompt students to consider. Each step also includes a Responsive Teacher Move note. For example, in step 4, students determine the relevance of a source. The lesson plan includes the following questions: “How does the text relate to the broader discussion of the topic? How is the text relevant to the topic?” The Responsive Teacher Move note states, “As needed, remind students that relevant means related or connected to the topic or issue at hand.” In the final step, students evaluate texts overall, deciding if they are credible and effective. The lesson plan includes questions that students should use to complete this task. In subsequent activities and lessons, students apply this TREAS framework to other texts.
For the Conduct Research activity, the lesson plan includes two steps. In the first step, students identify keywords they will use in search engines. The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance, such as “Emphasize that to conduct research effectively in a search engine, students need to identify keywords to help generate relevant and helpful results. Have students generate a list of possible keywords that will likely be helpful as they research their topic.” The Responsive Teacher Move note for this step states, “If students need support to come up with keywords and/or synonyms, model generating keywords and synonyms for a research topic. Consider typing examples of keywords in a search engine to determine how keywords generate results.” A sample model is not provided. In the second step of the activity, students identify possible sources. The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance, such as “Explain that students should only include information about a source if they determine that it is relevant to their topic and helpful for addressing their research question. Remind students that they must find multimodal texts.” The Responsive Teacher Move note for this step states, “If students have difficulty determining which sources are relevant, model selecting appropriate sources for a research topic based on keywords. Think aloud about the relevance of the source to the research topic. Then, invite students to evaluate additional sources for the topic you chose. Discuss as a whole group.” A model think-aloud is not provided.
For the Write a Bibliography activity, the lesson plan includes two steps. In the first step, teachers review key terms and concepts with students. The lesson plan provides facilitation guidance, including definitions of bibliography and annotated bibliography, as well as examples of common citations and an annotated bibliography. In the second step, students draft their bibliographies as they write an annotated bibliography for each source. The lesson plan includes facilitation guidance which states, “Explain to students that for each of their sources, including one of the unit texts, they will write an annotated bibliography. Tell students first to write an MLA citation for each source and then write a brief description and evaluation of each text. Move around the room and monitor students’ progress and provide support as needed.”
In Section 6: Writing Process, students use the research they collected throughout the unit to draft a multi-modal research presentation to the prompt “What makes something beautiful? After studying how the concept of beauty is portrayed in public spaces, art, and personal stories, research your own question about beauty. Then, write a multimodal research presentation in which you answer your research question and explain how your understanding of beauty was shaped by ideas and arguments from different sources. Support your explanation with evidence from unit texts and your independent research.”
Indicator 2s.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in explicit instruction of research skills that guide research and writing projects to encourage students to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of a topic using multiple texts and source materials.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in the explicit instruction of research skills that guide research and writing projects. While the program includes repeated opportunities for students to conduct research, analyze sources, and produce research-based writing, the supports designed specifically for MLLs are inconsistent and do not reliably provide the linguistic scaffolds needed for full and meaningful participation across the research process.
Overall, the materials offer structured research tasks—such as identifying keywords, evaluating sources, and synthesizing ideas—but they do not consistently include the language-focused scaffolds MLLs need to undertake these cognitively demanding tasks. Teachers receive general facilitation guidance and some Responsive Teaching Move notes, but these often stop at suggesting that teachers “model” or “think aloud” without providing the language teachers should model or the linguistic resources necessary for implementation. As a result, the burden of creating essential scaffolds falls to individual teachers, leading to unpredictable support for MLLs across classrooms.
For example, in Grade 10, Unit 4, students begin a research sequence with the Conduct Research activity. Students are guided to generate keywords, identify synonyms, and evaluate how search terms generate results. However, while the Responsive Teaching Move note correctly suggests modeling keyword generation—an essential scaffold for MLLs—the materials do not supply an actual language model or think-aloud. Similarly, when students select relevant sources, teachers are advised to “model selecting appropriate sources” and “think aloud about relevance,” but no written or visual examples are provided. Students are expected to fill out Part 3 of their Research Note Catchers for this activity. The student-facing materials in the digital platform provide “Stop and Review” notes in the directions for both the Moderate-Multilingual and Intensive-Multilingual levels, but the Light-Multilingual level provides no additional supports. The Moderate-Multilingual and Intensive-Multilingual notes are the same and consist of:
For Step 1: Identify keywords: “Stop and Review: To generate a list of keywords, consider the following:
Break your topic down to key concepts of ideas.”
For Step 2: Identify possible sources: “Stop and Review: A multimodal text involves multiple modes of communication such as images, audio, and visuals.”
While some sections of the Research Note Catcher do include sentence starters and other supports, Part 3 is blank for all Levels of Support. Generating effective keywords and articulating source relevance requires sophisticated academic language, such as identifying conceptual relationships, utilizing discipline-specific terminology, and justifying criteria for relevance. Without explicit linguistic scaffolds, MLLs are only partially supported and are unable to fully participate in the research process alongside their peers.
A similar pattern appears in the Assess Usefulness, Credibility, and Accuracy activity. The TREAS framework (Topic, Relevance, Evidence, Accuracy, Sources) provides a clear structure for evaluating informational texts. Students receive extensive conceptual guidance, including key questions for each part of the framework, and MLLs at the Intensive Multilingual level receive a partially filled-in TREAS Note Catcher on the digital platform. While this graphic organizer helps reduce the cognitive load of navigating complex informational texts, language supports focus almost exclusively on comprehension—decoding key academic terms, understanding questions, and identifying text features. Missing are the scaffolds needed to support expressive disciplinary language. Without these language supports, MLLs can often understand the analysis but lack the tools to express their reasoning in writing or structured discussion, resulting in partial participation.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Across the grade band, these patterns highlight missed opportunities to integrate language-specific supports aligned to the disciplinary practices of research. Tasks frequently require students to generate research questions, justify source selection, evaluate credibility, and synthesize information—each of which carries significant linguistic demand—yet the materials often limit support to basic definitions or simplified directions. There are few opportunities for MLLs to rehearse research language orally, practice academic sentence structures, or use collaborative talk to process complex ideas. Additionally, activities rarely address the four language domains in an integrated way, tending to emphasize reading over speaking and writing. While the program includes frameworks for teaching research, the absence of explicit language models, linguistic bridges, and structured discourse routines prevents MLLs from engaging in these tasks with the same depth and independence as their peers. The inconsistent application of MLL-specific scaffolds—particularly those needed to support expressive and analytical language functions—limits students’ ability to demonstrate disciplinary understanding through research writing and presentation.
In summary, Lenses on Literature provides meaningful opportunities for research instruction but does not consistently offer the targeted, language-rich scaffolding MLLs need to fully participate in research tasks across speaking, listening, reading, and writing. Where supports do appear, they tend to focus on comprehension rather than production or provide general advice rather than actionable linguistic tools. As a result, the materials partially meet the expectations for this indicator.
Indicator 2t
Materials include multiple opportunities for students to apply research skills to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of a topic.
The opportunities for students to apply research skills to develop knowledge of a topic in Lenses on Literature partially meet expectations for indicator 2t. The program offers some opportunities for students to apply research skills through both short and sustained research projects; however, these opportunities are limited in frequency across grade levels. Students engage in research tasks that involve generating or refining questions, gathering and evaluating information from multiple print and digital sources, and synthesizing findings into written analyses or argumentative essays. Activities guide students through skills such as identifying search terms, applying the TREAS framework to assess source credibility and accuracy, and practicing proper citation using MLA format to avoid plagiarism. Some projects also require students to integrate evidence from literary and informational texts to support their analyses and demonstrate understanding of a topic or problem. While these experiences align with the research expectations of the standards and promote foundational research skills, opportunities for students to conduct research projects and apply these skills across varied contexts are infrequent throughout the program because they are concentrated in one or two units per grade level.
Materials include limited opportunities for students to apply research skills to short and sustained research projects by answering a given or self-generated question or solving a problem, narrowing or broadening the inquiry when appropriate, synthesizing multiple sources on the subject, and demonstrating knowledge of the subject under investigation.
The materials provide opportunities for students to conduct research projects at each grade level. However, while opportunities are present in each grade level, they are concentrated in one to two units.
In Grade 9, Unit 6, Section 4: Genre Study, students complete several interconnected research activities. In the first activity, students identify an ethical problem and formulate a question. After selecting a topic, students narrow their focus, evaluate their own topic, and assess a peer’s topic. In subsequent activities, students create a research plan by identifying and evaluating potential sources, gathering information, and compiling an annotated bibliography for each source. In Section 5: Synthesis, students continue their research, ensuring they have information on both sides of the ethical issue. In Section 6: Writing Process, they use their research in an argumentative essay.
Materials provide limited opportunities for students to gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, use search terms effectively, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and quote or paraphrase the data and conclusions of others while avoiding plagiarism and following a standard format for citation.
The materials provide opportunities for students to gather relevant information from multiple sources, use search terms effectively, paraphrase, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and practice academic citations. However, while opportunities are present in each grade level, they are concentrated in one to two units.
In Grade 11, Unit 4, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students prepare to complete research on an author. In their preparation, students brainstorm search terms that they can use to compile sources. After identifying search terms, students compile sources. They use the program’s TREAS framework to assess each source for credibility, accuracy, and relevance. Then, students gather research from each source. Later in their research, students review and practice using MLA citations to avoid plagiarism.
Materials provide limited opportunities for students to draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
The materials provide opportunities for students to draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. However, while opportunities are present in each grade level, they are concentrated in one to two units.
In Grade 12, Unit 5, Section 6: Writing Process, students write an expository analysis to the prompt “After analyzing The Tragedy of Macbeth by William Shakespeare, audio interpretations of the play, and informational texts about Shakespeare’s historical context and modern relevance, write an expository essay in which you answer your own research question on a topic related to Shakespeare's creative choices, his historical context, or modern adaptations and interpretations of his work. Support your discussion with evidence from Macbeth and your research sources.” To be successful on this task, students must consider their learning from multiple genres (play, audio interpretation, informational sources) and incorporate evidence from both literary and informational texts into their writing product.
Indicator 2t.MLL
Materials provide support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in opportunities for students to apply research skills to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of topics.
The instructional materials reviewed for Grades 9–12 of Lenses on Literature partially meet the expectations for providing support for MLLs’ full and complete participation in opportunities for students to apply research skills to develop knowledge of a topic by confronting and analyzing different aspects of topics. While the program includes several structured research activities embedded across units, the supports provided for MLLs are inconsistent and often insufficient to ensure full participation in the increasingly complex research tasks required of students.
Across the grade band, students engage in research through iterative tasks that ask them to conceptualize issues, evaluate sources, synthesize information, and incorporate findings into extended writing. The program includes instructional routines, such as structured planning processes, annotated bibliographies, and synthesis steps, designed to guide students in considering multiple perspectives on ethical or literary issues. However, the scaffolding intended specifically for MLLs is uneven. Much of the support centers on language output, such as word banks, sentence frames, and strategies for increasing sentence complexity; yet, the materials offer limited explicit guidance for the cognitively demanding research processes that must precede writing. As a result, MLLs may be able to participate in the linguistic elements of discussion or drafting but remain under-supported in foundational phases such as formulating research questions, selecting and evaluating sources, and integrating information across diverse texts.
For example, in Grade 9, Unit 6, Section 4: Genre Study, students engage in several interconnected research activities related to an ethical issue of their choice. They formulate a research question, narrow their focus, evaluate peer- and self-generated topics, identify and evaluate potential sources, gather information, and compile an annotated bibliography. Later, in Section 5: Synthesis, students continue researching to ensure they have evidence representing multiple sides of their issue, and in Section 6: Writing Process, they craft an argumentative essay using their findings. The materials provide several MLL supports aligned to language production, such as clarifying the concept of “counterclaim,” offering banks of phrases for explanation and evaluation, providing sentence frames for arguing both sides, and differentiated graphic organizers on the digital platform. The Teacher Edition also recommends modeling compound and complex sentences to help students understand how meaning is conveyed and suggests marking up long sentences to clarify grammatical elements. These supports help MLLs understand key academic vocabulary and produce more complex arguments, but they do not fully scaffold the research skills themselves. The evidence does not show explicit language supports for MLLs during the earliest and most conceptually demanding stages, such as identifying a strong research topic, determining the relevance or credibility of sources, or synthesizing conflicting viewpoints. While modeling is suggested, written models for these steps are not provided. As a result, MLLs may access the linguistic frame of the assignment but still struggle to complete the cognitive work required for research-based writing, limiting their full participation.
Similarly, in Grade 12, Unit 5, Section 6: Writing Process, students develop an expository essay responding to a self-generated research question connected to Macbeth, audio interpretations of the play, and informational texts on Shakespeare’s historical context and contemporary relevance. Students must synthesize evidence across multiple genres and modalities. Support for MLLs in this section provides strategies to help students engage in the writing process, including using their home language as a starting point, translating ideas into English, analyzing rubric requirements through linguistic features such as noun groups and adjectives, and increasing sentence complexity with transition words. Sentence frames are also provided to help students classify and explain research findings and plan their expository essays. These scaffolds can help MLLs complete the written portion of the task once ideas are formed, but they do not address skills required for the earlier research steps that are equally essential: developing a research question, analyzing literary and informational texts for evidence, and synthesizing findings into an integrated interpretation. Without explicit support for these steps, MLLs may understand the writing expectations but continue to lack the language-based tools necessary to access, evaluate, and effectively integrate research materials.
As mentioned above, in the digital platform, teachers have the option to use the Level of Support system to “deliver responsive instruction, assigning supports to individual students or groups based on assessment and observation data.” This system “offers different types of supports that are included based on the instructional purpose of the activity.” The four Assignable Support Levels are:
“CORE/MLL: Provides universal supports such as accessibility tools and vocabulary aids in English and multiple languages.
LIGHT/MLL: Adds occasional prompts to enhance comprehension and task completion.
MODERATE/MLL: Provides multiple, layered supports to increase access to content.
INTENSIVE/MLL: Offers modifications to content to streamline student thinking and prioritize Focus Skills.”
This is a strong example of lesson-specific supports embedded in the core content to enhance participation for MLLs. Its impact is limited, however, by being available only on the digital platform, which reduces access for students using print materials. For students working solely in the digital environment, the Levels of Support system is highly beneficial.
Across grades 9–12, Lenses on Literature offers strong supports for the linguistic production required in research-based writing; however, the materials do not provide the same level of scaffolding for the conceptual and analytical skills necessary to conduct research. Opportunities to apply research skills are present, yet supports for MLLs are inconsistently distributed, often limited to later writing phases, and not aligned to the full research cycle. As a result, the materials only partially meet expectations for enabling MLLs to participate fully and completely in applying research skills to develop knowledge of a topic.
Indicator 2u
Materials include formative assessments and guidance that provide the teacher with information for instructional next steps.
The formative assessments and teacher guidance on formative assessments in Lenses on Literature meet expectations for indicator 2u. The program includes a variety of formative assessments that help teachers monitor student understanding and adjust instruction accordingly. Each unit integrates quick writes, discussions, and other short tasks designed to gauge progress toward mastery of focus skills and standards. The How to Use Lesson Plans section in the Teacher Edition explains two primary types of formative assessments—those with a Scoring Guide and those with a Rubric—and outlines how teachers can use them to collect data and plan next steps. Scoring guides provide quick checks for understanding and include reflective questions and Responsive Teacher Moves that suggest reteaching, scaffolding, or enrichment strategies. Rubric-based assessments utilize a developmental progression aligned with standards, enabling teachers to identify where students fall on a continuum from Emerging to Exceeding Expectations and make informed instructional adjustments to support growth. Rubrics also include Responsive Teaching Notes offering specific strategies, such as modeling, guided practice, or interactive approaches to reinforce key skills. Teacher Planning Tools include The Learning From Student Work: Formative guide, which outlines a structured, six-step process teachers can use to analyze student work in order to inform responsive instruction. Digital tools on the Carnegie Learning platform provide additional support for data tracking and feedback. Overall, the program offers structured, actionable guidance that enables teachers to interpret formative data and tailor instruction to enhance student progress toward grade-level proficiency.
Materials include formative assessments and support for the teacher in determining students’ current skills/level of understanding. Materials include guidance that supports the teacher in making instructional adjustments to increase student progress.
Each unit in the Lenses on Literature program includes various formative assessments across multiple types of skills. Formative assessments include quick writes, discussions, and other tasks. The "How to Use Lesson Plans" section in the front matter of each Teacher Edition provides an explanation of how formative assessments function within the program. The section highlights two types of formative assessments—those with a Scoring Guide and those with a Rubric—and how teachers can use them to monitor student progress and inform instruction. In the Teacher Resources section of the Carnegie Learning portal, under Teacher Planning Tools, teachers can find the Learning from Student Work: Formative Assessment document.
The Learning From Student Work: Formative Guide outlines a structured, six-step process that teachers can use to analyze student work and inform responsive instruction. The process begins with examining the activity prompt and focus skills to clarify what students are being asked to think about and do. Teachers then study the activity’s rubric or scoring guide to understand how skills are assessed and how expectations progress across proficiency levels. Next, teachers score one or two samples of student work by identifying evidence that aligns with rubric criteria, and then score a partner’s samples using the same process. Afterward, partners discuss patterns they notice in student thinking, areas of strength, and where students struggled. Finally, teachers identify the next instructional steps by reflecting on whether prerequisite skills were explicitly taught, how evidence of grade-level standards is reflected in student work, and how their findings should inform upcoming instruction and assessment. The guide focuses on using this process to make evidence-based decisions and directs teachers to additional support materials on using analytic rubrics.
Formative Assessment with a Scoring Guide: Teachers use the scoring guide as a quick tool to assess how well students are meeting the activity's focus skills and standards. The guide supports teachers in interpreting formative data to plan next instructional steps, such as reteaching, scaffolding, or enrichment. Additional digital tools for recording observations and feedback are available on the Carnegie Learning platform.
In Grade 10, Unit 2, Section 3: Building Knowledge, students participate in a group discussion where they establish their own perspective on love. This activity serves as a formative assessment within the program. The Teacher Edition provides teachers with guidance, including questions to consider as they score student work, an MLL language goal question, and three Responsive Teacher Move notes. Guidance for scoring states, “Did the student:
Refer to relevant evidence to support ideas?
Develop a logical plan for consensus-building?”
MLL Language Goal: “Did the student share their beliefs using opinion language?”
The three Responsive Teacher Notes state,
“If students provide evidence that is not relevant to their perspective, ask them to reread their perspective and think of a personal experience that connects with it.
If groups cannot come up with a strategy for reaching a group consensus, have them try to work out a consensus without a strategy. If they succeed, have them write down a description of what they did. If they do not succeed, use the Responsive Teaching Move in Step 4.
If students need support to meet their language goal, provide them with an opportunity to practice with the Introduction Generator Anchor Strategy.”
Formative Assessment with a Rubric: This version utilizes a developmental progression rubric that aligns with grade-level standards, with performance levels ranging from Emerging to Exceeding Expectations. Teachers use the bolded language in each rubric row to determine where a student’s work falls on the continuum and what supports are needed for growth. Level 3 represents the benchmark for end-of-year proficiency, enabling teachers to plan instruction that moves students toward mastery.
In Grade 12, Unit 4, Section 4: Genre Study, students evaluate and analyze how Sir Ken Robinson develops his argument in “Do Schools Kill Creativity?” This activity serves as a formative assessment within the program. The Teacher Edition provides teachers with guidance, including a rubric to use to assess each student’s work and an MLL language goal question to consider as they score student work. The rubric includes two focus areas. One is “Analyze the Use of Rhetoric,” and the Other is “Cite Evidence to Support Analysis.” Each focus area includes four different scores on the scale, including Emergent, Approaches Expectations, Meets Expectations, and Exceeds Expectations. Each score for Analyze the Use of Rhetoric States,
“1- Emergent:
Discusses style/content* of the text with minimal connection to the power, persuasiveness, or beauty of the text
OR
Inaccurately describes the style/content of the text
2- Approaches Expectations:
Makes connections between style/content of the text and the power, persuasiveness, or beauty of the text
3- Meets Expectations:
Accurately demonstrates how the style/content contributes to the power, persuasiveness, or beauty of the text
4- Exceeds Expectations:
Accurately demonstrates how specific instances of style/content work together to develop the power, persuasiveness, or beauty of the text
*‘Style/content’ may be interpreted as ‘Style and content,’ ‘Style or content,’ or ‘Style and/or content’ depending on the text and the demands of the task.”
Each score for Cite Evidence to Support Analysis states,
“1- Emergent:
Identifies and cites textual evidence that is loosely related to inferences or analysis
2- Approaches Expectations:
Identifies and cites relevant textual evidence to support inferences or analysis
3- Meets Expectations:
Identifies and cites strong textual evidence to support inferences or analysis
4- Exceeds Expectations:
Identifies and cites strong textual evidence from across the text to support inferences or analysis.”
The MLL language goal question teachers should consider as they score student work states, “Did the student evaluate an argument using evaluation language?”
Indicator 2v
Materials include culminating tasks/summative assessments that require students to demonstrate the knowledge and skills acquired throughout the unit/module while integrating multiple literacy skills (e.g., a combination of reading, writing, speaking, and listening).
The culminating/summative assessments in Lenses on Literature meet expectations for indicator 2v. Each unit in the Lenses on Literature program concludes with a culminating task in Section 6 of the “journey tracker,” serving as the unit’s summative assessment. These tasks require students to integrate multiple literacy skills—reading, writing, speaking, listening, and language—developed throughout the unit, with unit Seminars helping students synthesize ideas in preparation for writing. Units are backward-designed so the final product reflects the focus standards and skills taught, whether students are analyzing texts in Analysis Units or creating original pieces in Creative Units. Instruction leading up to the task is scaffolded through practice activities, mentor text analysis, and step-by-step guidance through the writing process. Teachers receive support for evaluating student work through genre- and grade-specific SCALE rubrics and the End-of-Unit Learning From Student Work Protocol, which outlines how to analyze student performance, calibrate scoring, and determine next instructional steps for student growth.
Culminating tasks/summative assessments are evident in each unit/module and align to the unit’s/module’s topic or theme. Culminating tasks/summative assessments provide students with the opportunity to demonstrate the knowledge and skills acquired throughout the unit/module while integrating multiple literacy skills (reading, writing, speaking, listening).
In the Lenses on Literature program, the final writing product that students complete in Section 6 of each unit’s “journey tracker” serves as each unit’s culminating task. Before each unit starts, students preview the prompt for this task, which is considered each unit’s Driving Task Prompt. In Section 5 of each unit, students complete a Seminar activity in which they discuss some of the larger questions of the unit. This activity supports priming students for their written task in Section 6. In this sense, each unit’s Seminar serves as an additional, smaller culminating task throughout the program. Each unit is backward designed so that the Driving Task Prompt encompasses the focus standards that students learn and practice throughout the unit. During the completion of this task, students utilize various skills, including reading, writing, language, speaking, and listening. The finished product enables students to demonstrate the reading and writing skills they’ve acquired throughout the unit and the school year. Two unit types in the program dictate how the final writing product addresses reading and writing standards: Analysis Units and Creative Units. In Analysis Units, students must demonstrate their ability to interpret and analyze texts, apply evidence, and utilize their writing skills. In Creative Units, students focus on applying what they’ve learned to their own original writing products. As such, this final task is designed to allow students to practice and demonstrate their mastery of the focus skills and standards for each unit.
In Grade 11, Unit 5, Section 6; Writing Process, students write a literary analysis to the Driving Task prompt “After reading ‘Lingua Franca’ [Anchor Text] by Carole McDonnell and personal narratives on belonging in America, write a comparative literary analysis in which you analyze how two authors use narrative elements and techniques to develop compelling accounts of the tension between assimilation and individuality. Support your analysis with evidence from both texts.” While completing this task, students utilize their reading and writing skills during the drafting, revising, and editing phases of the process. During the editing phase, students must exchange peer feedback and practice their speaking and listening skills. In the final task, students apply the knowledge and reading skills they have developed throughout the unit, drawing on multiple readings of the Anchor Text and other unit texts to deepen their understanding, while also demonstrating their writing skills.
Materials provide opportunities to support students in gaining the knowledge and skills needed to complete the culminating tasks/summative assessments.
Students gain the knowledge and skills throughout each unit to complete culminating tasks. Additionally, the Seminar students engage in during Section 5 of each unit, prompts them to discuss the unit’s essential questions. This discussion primes student thinking for a successful writing product.
The materials break down the Section 6 assignment into parts for each writing product, providing instruction and guidance on completing each component. Each writing product completed in Section 6 of each unit’s journey tracker is broken down into parts comprised of the writing process: planning, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. Before students plan, they analyze a mentor text and the rubric on which their work will be evaluated. For each component, materials include some instruction and guidance. To complete these longer assignments, students must utilize the information they have learned throughout the unit’s readings and apply the skills they’ve gained throughout the unit's assignments.
In Grade 9, Unit 3, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a rhetorical analysis to the Driving Task prompt “After evaluating argumentative texts on the Civil Rights Movement, read ‘Letter from Birmingham Jail’ by Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. and write a rhetorical analysis in which you analyze how Dr. King uses rhetoric to justify civil disobedience. Support your analysis with evidence from the text.” The task is broken down into parts. After analyzing the rubric and a model rhetorical analysis, students plan their thesis statements and body paragraphs. Next, students draft their body paragraphs. Then, they plan and later draft their introductions and conclusions. Afterward, students edit their drafts for sentence variety. Next, they participate in peer feedback. Then, students proofread their essays. Last, students reflect and submit their assignments. To complete this assignment, students must consider all the learning about justice and the rhetoric of persuasion they read and learned about throughout the unit.
Materials include guidance that supports the teacher in determining and evaluating student performance on the culminating tasks/summative assessments in the program.
On the Carnegie Platform, teachers can find the Using Analytic Rubrics in Lenses of Literature document in the Teacher Resources section. The document explains how teachers can use analytic rubrics as instructional and assessment tools to evaluate student progress in reading and writing. Developed in collaboration with Stanford’s SCALE, these rubrics break complex literacy skills into clear, standards-based criteria across a four-point developmental scale, Emerging to Exceeds Expectations. The guide outlines how to interpret and apply rubric rows to both formative and summative tasks, emphasizing their use for giving targeted feedback, promoting student growth, and aligning instruction with standards. Teachers are encouraged to use rubric language in feedback, conduct writing conferences (if time allows) to help students set goals, and engage in collaborative scoring to calibrate expectations and plan next steps. The document highlights that analytic rubrics are not designed for assigning grades but for supporting consistent, evidence-based evaluation and instructional decision-making across classrooms.
Each unit’s final writing product includes a grade-level and genre-specific rubric that teachers should use to evaluate student performance. Rubrics for these tasks are designed as SCALE rubrics. These rubrics are analytic, developmental, and instructionally aligned.
Analytical: “Each skill or standard is scored individually, making it easy to see where students are meeting expectations and where they need more support.” Developmental: “Each rubric row shows how a skill or standard progresses over time, giving [teachers] and [their] students a roadmap to progress.”
Instructionally Aligned: “[Teachers] will use the rubric rows throughout the unit—from quick writes to final products—so assessment becomes an ongoing part of instruction.”
In Grade 10, Unit 5, Section 6: Writing Process, students write a synthesis essay to the Driving Task prompt “After reading ‘The Dog of Titwal' by Saada Hasan Manto and multiple texts on living during wartime, write a synthesis essay in which you analyze how characters develop and interact to demonstrate the impacts of war on the human experience.” The Carnegie Learning portal provides a rubric that teachers should use to score students' final products. The rubric includes five rubric rows: Analyze How Characters Contribute to Theme, Analyze the Development of Theme, Introduce a Controlling Idea and Maintain Focus, Supply Evidence, and Use Appropriate Language, Style, and Tone. Each rubric row is scored on a scale of 1 to 4, where 1 means emerging, 2 means approaches expectations, 3 means meets expectations, and 4 means exceeds expectations.
At the end of each unit and under Teacher Planning Tools in the Teacher Resources section of the Carnegie Learning portal, teachers can find the End-of-Unit Learning from Student Work Protocol. The document is a teacher-facing guide that outlines a five-step process for analyzing student writing at the end of a unit in the Lenses on Literature program. Teachers begin by reviewing the unit’s Driving Task Prompt and focus skills or standards to clarify what the assignment asks students to think about and demonstrate. Then, they analyze the unit rubric, examining how expectations progress across scoring levels and identifying rubric language that connects to unit standards. Next, teachers score student work using the rubric, discuss scoring decisions with colleagues, and compare results to ensure consistency. In later steps, teachers analyze patterns in student performance and use these insights to determine instructional next steps. The process concludes with a reflection on the effectiveness of instruction, alignment to standards, and plans for improving teaching and assessment in the next unit.
While the steps for this process are clear, the guidance is generalized and not specific to each rubric. For step 3, score student work using the rubric, the guidance states, “Individually score a student work sample. Discuss with your team how you scored the student work, making sure to explicitly connect the student work to the specific criteria outlined in the rubric. If you have time, consider these options:
Repeat with additional student work samples and look for patterns.
Swap one of your scored student work samples with a colleague. Have them score the paper as well. Then, compare your scores to see your similarities and differences.”