2017
Holt McDougal Literature

11th Grade - Gateway 1

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Gateway Ratings Summary

Text Quality

Text Quality & Complexity and Alignment to Standards Components
Gateway 1 - Partially Meets Expectations
78%
Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality
12 / 16
Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence
13 / 16

The instructional materials for Grade 11 partially meet the expectation of Gateway 1. Most of the texts are at the right level of quality and at the appropriate level for students to grow their literacy skills. The materials include a range of texts that are appropriately rigorous from a quantitative lens, although the qualitative factors vary. The placement of materials for students to get exposure to increasingly rigorous materials of the course of the year is inconsistent, and the teacher may need to supplement to attend to students' access to robust range and depth of reading. Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, and culminating tasks represent the demands of the standards. Speaking and listening work is limited and does not include comprehensive supports for teachers to employ practice with academic vocabulary and discussion work over the course of the school year

Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality

12 / 16

Texts are worthy of students' time and attention: texts are of quality and are rigorous, meeting the text complexity criteria for each grade. Materials support students' advancing toward independent reading.

The instructional materials for Grade 11 partially meet the expectation that texts are at the right level of quality and at the appropriate level for students to grow their literacy skills. The materials include a range of texts that are appropriately rigorous from a quantitative lens, although the qualitative factors vary. The placement of materials for students to get exposure to increasingly rigorous materials of the course of the year is inconsistent, and the teacher may need to supplement to attend to students' access to robust range and depth of reading.

NOTE: Indicator 1b is non-scored and provides information about text types and genres in the program.

Narrative Only

Indicator 1a

4 / 4

Anchor/core texts are of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for anchor texts being of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading and consider a range of student interests.

The texts are high quality and worthy of students’ attention due to literary richness, rhetorical technique, and/or topical relevance. A large number or texts come from authors that are well-known, award-winning or iconic. A number of undisputed classic texts are present, including works for male, female, and multicultural authors. There is sufficient effort to include texts on topics of current interest or select older texts that have a potential to resonate with contemporary students.

Examples include but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, “The Crucible” by Arthur Miller is rich in theme, character, and plot that invites careful reading and analysis. An article on McCarthyism follows the play, inviting further analysis and study of the play’s symbolic commentary on political events of the 1950s.
  • In Unit 2, The Excerpt from “Walden,” by Henry David Thoreau is a multilayered text that requires careful reading to decipher multiple symbolic meanings and is written by an iconic author.
  • In Unit 3, “The Gettysburg Address” by Abraham Lincoln is a historical work that shines light on a tumultuous time period. This speech is worthy of students time and attention.
  • In Unit 5, “Thoughts on the African-American Novel” by Toni Morrison presents a complex argument situating literary production and reception in a range of historical and cultural contexts, a purpose that will require careful reading and rereading for Grade 11 students and is written by an award winning author.
  • In Unit 5, “A Rose for Emily” by William Faulkner presents complex language and themes inviting careful reading, a macabre theme that will interest many students, and is written by an iconic author.
  • In Unit 6, Excerpt from “Letter from Birmingham Jail” by Martin Luther King, Jr.” is a text rich in ideas and language warranting careful reading and analysis, Invites interest of students concerned about civil rights and social cause, and is written by a well-known speaker.

Indicator 1b

Narrative Only
Materials reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level.
*Indicator 1b is non-scored (in grades 9-12) and provides information about text types and genres in the program.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level.

Materials reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level and consider a range of student interests. Over the course of a year, students are exposed to a variety of text types including, short stories, poems, drama, essays, and speeches. The materials provide a Table of Contents per unit that lists the text titles, authors, and types of pieces.

Examples of the distribution of text types to meet the criteria for this indicator include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 2: American Romanticism
    • Short Story: “The Devil and Tom Walker” by Irving and “The Fall of the House of Usher” by Edgar Allan Poe
    • Poetry: “Old Ironsides” by Oliver Wendell Holmes and “The First Snowfall” by James Russell Lowell
    • Essay: excerpt from Self-Reliance by Ralph Waldo Emerson and an excerpt from Walden Henry by David Thoreau
    • Non-Fiction: excerpt from Woman in the Nineteenth Century by Margaret Fuller
    • Parody: “What Troubled Poe’s Raven” by John Bennett
    • Novel Excerpt: from The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne
  • Unit 4: Regionalism and Naturalism
    • Memoir: from Life on the Mississippi by Mark Twain
    • Short Story: “The Outcasts of Poker Flats” by Bret Harte
    • “The Story of an Hour” by Kate Chopin and “The Yellow Wallpaper” by Charlotte Perkins Gilman
    • Newspaper Article: “More of the Filibusters Safe” The New York Press
    • Cartoon: Calvin and Hobbes by Watterson
    • Journal Article: “Why I Wrote ‘The Yellow Wallpaper’” byCharlotte Perkins Gilman
  • Unit 6: Contemporary Literature
    • Drama: excerpt from A Raisin in the Sun by Lorraine Hansberry
    • Memoir: from Survival in Auschwitz by Primo Levi
    • Letter: excerpt from “Letter from Birmingham Jail” by Martin Luther King, Jr.
    • Interview: “Necessary to Protect Ourselves” by Malcolm X
    • Essay: “Martin Luther King Jr.: He Showed Us the Way” by Cesar Chavez , “Mother Tongue” by Amy Tan, and “Straw Into Gold: The Metamorphosis of the Everyday” by Cisneros
    • Poetry:“Revolutionary Dreams” by Nikki Giovanni and “The Man in the Moon” by Billy Collins

Indicator 1c

4 / 4

Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade level (according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for texts having the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, and relationship to their associated student task.

The materials include a variety of texts that are appropriate for 11th grade students and range in complexity. Texts that are moderate in complexity are accompanied by tasks that increase the level of rigor by demanding higher order thinking skills and analyses. Texts that are exceedingly complex are accompanied by a variety of scaffolds such as graphic organizers and discussion questions. Texts range in quantitative measure from Lexile 710 to Lexile 1620, as well as challenging poetry from Ralph Waldo Emerson.

Texts that fall below the Grade 11 quantitative band include qualitative features or reader and task considerations that make them appropriate for Grade 11 students. For example:

  • In Unit 1, students read “Coyote and the Buffalo” retold by Mourning Dove which measures at Lexile 710. The text includes words from the Salish language with definitions included in the footnotes of the text. Students analyze the text and interpet the moral of the story. Students are also asked to draw conclusions about the Okanogan society based on the folk literature.
  • In Unit 4, students read the short story, “The Yellow Wallpaper” by Charlotte Perkins Gilman which measure at Lexile 930. Qualitative features make this text appropriate for Grade 11 students. Qualitatively, the text is complex based on its extensive use of symbolism, formal language, complex sentence structures, theme, and its social context.

Texts that rise above or meet the Grade 11 quantitative band include qualitative features or reader and task considerations that make them appropriate for Grade 11 students. For example:

  • In Unit 5, students read T.S. Eliot’s poem, “The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock” which is a challenging poem. The poem meets grade level complexities due to allusions, and themes of alienation and repression, which might pose challenges to students. Its modernist form and experimental style can also be challenging for students to grasp. The materials offer students “Language Coach” and Stream of Consciousness supports in the margin notes.

Indicator 1d

2 / 4

Materials support students' literacy skills (understanding and comprehension) over the course of the school year through increasingly complex text to develop independence of grade level skills (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ increasing literacy skills over the course of the school year. (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels appropriate for the grade band.)There is a clear variety and appropriate leveling of texts. The complexity of texts varies from passage to passage with each unit representing a range of text types and complexity levels.

Students are given opportunities to build literacy skills. Over the course of the year, students engage with texts that vary in rigor and complexity. Many texts are accompanied with guidance and tasks that build students’ skills over the course of the school year, and provide opportunities for growth. Questions placed alongside the text and after the text prompt students to identify and comment on the effect or meaning of focus text features. However, the level of questions does not increase significantly over the course of the year, and tasks are scaffolded and passages labeled consistently across the year. Students do not become prepared to execute these skills on their own.

Some examples of how students engage with differently rigorous activities and texts over the course of the school year include the following:

  • Unit 2: American Romanticism: The texts and tasks in this unit focus on text analysis of poetry, essays, foundational works of American literature, speeches, short stories and an image collection. There is a clear progression of complexity throughout the unit with the most challenging texts and tasks found at the end of the unit. The unit begins with the short story, “The Devil and Tom Walker” by Washington Irving which has a lexile of 1120. Students analyze imagery and provide examples of satire with this text. The rigor of texts (many of which do not have lexile levels such as poems and image collections) are accompanied by tasks that increase in complexity. For example, later in Unit 2, after reading “Walden” by Henry David Thoreau, students are to “Review the philosophical ideas you summarized as you read. Choose two ideas - Thoreau’s view of the poor, for example, or the way he feels about civilized life. Explain whether or not you think the ideas you chose have merit, citing reasons for your opinions.” Next students are to compare two texts. In “Thoreau Still Beckons, if I Can Take My Laptop” (page 389), Cynthia G. La Ferle argues that “making choices is so much more difficult in a culture fueled by sheer busyness and commercialism. There are few places...where one can escape. Do you agree that it would be more challenging for a modern American to live as Thoreau did? Explain why or why not using details from both texts to support your opinion.”
  • Unit 7: The Power of Research: In Unit 7 students will take the questions they explored in previous units to a new challenging level through the task of completing formal research. Students will read informational texts about research and apply the skills practiced in previous units in a longer, sustained activity. Students will choose a topic, find relevant sources, evaluate sources, take notes avoiding plagiarism, verify information and follow the writing process when writing their research.

Indicator 1e

1 / 2

Anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria that anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.

The materials provide text complexity analysis for texts throughout the materials. Lexiles, Fry, and Dale-Chall readability are provided in the unit overview at the beginning of each unit. There are no qualitative measurements, nor are any reader and task considerations included to create a complete text analysis. There is also no rationale included for the purpose or placement in each grade level. Examples include:

Unit 2: Celebrating the Individual: American Romanticism

  • “The Devil and Tom Walker” Lexile 1120, Fry 9, Dale-Chall 7.3 (\
  • from “Self-Reliance” and from “Nature” Lexile 1010/980, Fry 10/7, Dale-Chall 7.0/6.8
  • from “Walden” Lexile 1280, Fry 12, Dale-Chall 6.5
  • “The Minister’s Black Veil” Lexile 1260, Fry 10, Dale-Chall 7.8

Unit 3: An Age of Transition: From Romanticism to Realism

  • from “Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave” Lexile 970, Fry 7, Dale-Chall 6.1
  • from “Incidents in the Life of the Slave Girl” Lexile 810, Fry 6, Dale-Chall 5.9
  • “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge” Lexile 1000, Fry 9, Dale-Chall 6.9

Unit 5: A Changing Awareness: The Harlem Renaissance and Modernism

  • “How it Feels to be Colored Me” Lexile 920, Fry 11, Dale-Chall 6.4
  • “Photo essay: The Grapes of Wrath” Lexile 1200, Fry College, Dale-Chall 7.6
  • “A New Kind of War” Lexile 990, Fry 9, Dale-Chall 5.7
  • “A Book of Great Short Stories” Lexile 1030, Fry 9, Dale-Chall 7.0

Unit 7: Investigation and Discovery: The Power of Research

  • “Why Soldiers Won’t Talk/The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner” Lexile 940, Fry 9, Dale-Chall 6.4
  • “From Stride Toward Freedom” Lexile 1060, Fry College, Dale-Chall 8.8
  • “From Coming of Age in Mississippi” Lexile 880, Fry 10, Dale-Chall 5.9
  • “Census Data: The US Population” Lexile 1150, Dale-Chall 7.8 (No Fry readability)
  • “Straw into Gold: The Metamorphosis of the Everyday” Lexile 920, Fry College, Dale-Chall 6.5

Indicator 1f

1 / 2

Anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria that anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.

Students will read a range of texts and a variety of genres but reviewers noted that additional guidance may be needed to help students develop stamina for long complex texts. Texts (in the print edition) are generally short works, or very short excepts (1-4 pages) of longer works, meaning students do not have ample opportunities to engage in reading large volumes.

Volume: While materials offer support via NovelWise, “a Website that helps students choose a novel or other book-length work to read.” There is no tracking or monitoring of independent reading in these materials and lack explicit instructions on implementation. Students are provided a variety of supports through the NovelWise site, including “study guides, reading strategies and literary elements instruction, presentations to introduce classic novels, and project ideas.” Some of the suggested independent reading texts are as follows:

Unit 2: People Watching

  • Into the Wild by John Krakauer
  • The Chosen by Chaim Potok
  • The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton
  • Finding Fish by Antwone Fisher

Unit 8: A Way with Words

  • Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe
  • Ethan Frome by Edith Wharton
  • Brave New World by Aldous Huxley
  • Funny Letters from Famous People by Charles Osgood

The materials contain a range of texts, including by not limited to:

  • Poetry
  • Fable
  • Editorials
  • Essays
  • Speeches
  • Short Stories
  • Magazine Article
  • Film Clip
  • Autobiography
  • Drama

Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence

13 / 16

Materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts to build strong literacy skills.

The instructional materials partially meet the expectations of the criteria around alignment to the standards. Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, and culminating tasks represent the demands of the standards. Speaking and listening work is limited and does not include comprehensive supports for teachers to employ practice with academic vocabulary and discussion work over the course of the school year. Writing lessons are many and include connections to the types and on-demand requirements put forth by the standards, and the materials include support for teaching revision. The grammar instruction included partially prepares students for the needs of the grade level.

Indicator 1g

2 / 2

Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria that most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text; this may include work with mentor texts as well).

The materials include a range of text dependent questions and tasks throughout each unit. Questions and tasks cover a wide continuum of standards and strategies. Each unit offers many opportunities for students to engage in evidence-based discussions and activities. Most of the questions and tasks are text-dependent and ask students to engage with the text directly. Students are given opportunities to use evidence pulled directly from the text as well as make inferences.

Before each text, students are directed to take notes in the Reader/Writer Notebook as they read. Most questions in the margins of the text require students to note and interpret grammatical, literary, and rhetorical features. Each excerpt has close read questions which are on the page next to the text itself for students and teachers to reference directly. Key passages are outlined in a red box with text-dependent questions for the teacher. At the end of each selection or compared groups of selections there is a section of three to five questions sub-headed Text Analysis Questions. These questions guide students directly back to the text. Questions and tasks cover comprehension, summarizing, clarifying, drawing conclusions, making inferences evaluating, synthesizing ideas, and analyzing and identifying literary devices.

Students engage with and draw evidence from the texts through Tiered Discussion Prompts, After Reading Questions, Analyzing Visuals and Reading-Writing Connection questions and tasks. Examples of these include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, students study Early American Writing, students are asked to:
    • Summarize: What was life like in the Americas prior to the arrival if the Europeans?
    • Analyze: How do the William Wood and William Bradford quotations illustrate the clash of cultures that occurred when Europeans and Native Americans first met?
    • Evaluate: Were Wood and Bradford fair in their assessment of the landscape and population of North America?
  • In Unit 3, students read selected poetry by Emily Dickinson and answer, “What essential truths about death and dying does Dickinson convey in the following poems? Cite specific details.”
  • In Unit 4, students are asked to write down unfamiliar words from the frontier dialect of Mark Twain’s “The Notorious Jumping Frog of Calaveras County.” Questions beside the texts ask students to note features of the tall tale genre in the text.
  • In Unit 5, questions accompanying Zora Neale Hurston’s, “How It Feels to Be Colored Me” ask students to state the main ideas of designated passages, reread passages and analyze rhetorical technique, and observe how grammar and style serve to highlight particular details.
  • In Unit 5, students read the text, “My City” and analyze the visuals by describing, “What details in this photo correspond to the poet’s vision of the city?”
  • In Unit 6, after reading “Stride Toward Freedom” students:
    • Clarify: In King’s view, what three qualities must a movement have in order to achieve the goal of integration?
    • Synthesize Sources: Review the chart you created as you read both texts. What are the main differences between the two leaders? What beliefs, if any, do they have in common? Be specific with your answers.
    • Analyze Genres: Think about the two works you just read. How do these two genres allow people to express their opinions in similar and different ways?
    • Biographical Context: Reread the autobiographies of of King and Malcolm X. What aspects of their personal histories may have influenced their different approaches to fighting racial injustice?

Indicator 1h

2 / 2

Materials contain sets of sequences of text-dependent/ text-specific questions with activities that build to a culminating task which integrates skills to demonstrate understanding

The materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for having sets of high-quality sequences of text-dependent/specific questions and tasks that build to a culminating task that integrates skills (may be writing, speaking, or a combination).

The materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts and integrates strategies to help students build literacy skills. The materials contain sets of high-quality sequences of text-dependent/specific questions and activities which build to a variety of tasks, including, but not limited to: short, on-demand written responses, longer (processed) essays, storyboards, re-writing in the author’s style, and movie scripts. These tasks and activities often ask students to compare/contrast works that have been presented as sets or series or synthesize the meaning, themes, or central ideas of the text sets.

Additionally, tasks often connect to a non-traditional text form such as a news report or movie scene.

At the end of majority of the texts or text sets, a culminating activity is provided. Each of the culminating activities within the unit lead to a larger culminating task for the unit. At the end of each unit there is a Writing Workshop, including a Timed Writing Practice, along with a Multiple Choice Assessment Practice. Also at the end of each collection of texts within an Era, there is a Wrap-Up Writing where students are asked to evaluate or analyze the texts from the time period.While these culminating activities seem to build off of each other, the standards associated with the writing and speaking activities are not well-supported throughout the entire unit; either through other writing tasks nor the reading questions aligned with core passages.

Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, after reading about the Native American Experiences, students complete a Wrap Up Activity that asks students to look back through the selections in the section and describe an early Native American value that many people still hold today. During the writing workshop students write a persuasive essay. The Teacher Edition states, “You have seen how some of our country’s founding fathers crafted arguments to support their claims, or positions, and to persuade readers to think a certain way. In this workshop, you will have the opportunity to assert a claim by writing a persuasive essay.” Writing Task: Write a persuasive essay that argues a strong claim on an issue. Support your claim with reasons and evidence that will convince your audience to think or act in a certain way toward an issue that interests you.Students are provided “idea starters” as well as “the essentials”: common purposes, audiences, and formats.
  • In Unit 3, the Writing Workshop states, “In this unit, you discovered the events, figures, and literature of the Civil War. The World Wide Web is home to discussions about the era and about the significant issues of today. Now, you will write about one legacy of your era in an online feature article-- an informative piece of writing on a topic or trend.” Writing task: Inform your audience by writing an online feature article that answers this research question: What is one topic, trend, or person, or phenomenon that has defined your time? Choose a topic that people will still read and talk about 100 years from now. Students are provided “idea starters” as well as “the essentials”: common purposes, audiences, and formats. During the unit students study about the Civil war and practice informational writing.
  • In Unit 4, students are asked to create a chart before reading Jack London’s “The Law of Life,” in which they are directed to record clues that help to reveal theme. The headings in the chart (“conflict,” “character,” “setting,” and so on) correspond to questions presented before the story (“What is the resolution of the primary conflict?” “What traits to the main characters display?” “What about the physical or cultural setting significant?”) A completed chart would supply evidence and thinking for some culminating questions: “Look back at the details about narrative elements you recorded in your chart as you read. Taken together, what do these details suggest about the fate of Koskoosh and all humans?” And “What comment on the human condition does Londom make through Koskoosh’s last thoughts?” Text-specific questions in the margin of the text also prompt thematic analysis that applies to the tasks in the culminating questions: “Reread lines 57-58. In one or two sentences, summarize the theme expressed here about the relationship between nature and the individual.” A culminating task at the end of the section “The Rise of Naturalism” similarly calls on students to draw examples and ideas from marginal questions in preceding texts. The activity presents five quotes that encapsulate the “central assumption of naturalism,” and then directs students to “Choose the quotation on this page that you think best represents a key theme of ‘The Open Boat’ or ‘The Law of Life. Write an essay defending your choice, using details from the story as support.”

Indicator 1i

1 / 2

Materials provide frequent opportunities and protocols to engage students in speaking and listening activities and discussions (small group, peer-to-peer, whole class) which encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.

The materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials providing frequent opportunities and protocols for evidence-based discussions (small groups, peer-to-peer, whole class) that encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.

Within the teacher’s edition of the text, a focusing question is posed, which is general and broad. The “big” question is used direct students to major themes. This question is repeated with supporting discussion questions throughout the sets of texts. Additionally teachers are provided “Tiered Discussion Prompts” that are text specific and connect to the big question. For example, In Unit 2 the “big/focus” question on page 229 states, “When is it time to take action?” “With a partner, think of examples from sports, politics, or everyday life when the time was right for decisive action. Then for one example, analyze why it was the right action at the right time.”

Some evidence of developing discussion protocols is present, it is not frequent throughout the teacher’s guide. Tiered Discussion Prompts, accompanying texts appear in the teacher edition which provide some protocols for discussion. There is limited guidance for small-group or peer-to-peer discussions or student-led conversation. The Speaking and Listening Handbook placed after the main units outlines basic principles and strategies for discussing and listening. For example, in Unit 5, page 881 students are asked, “Describe a dream or goal that you have that has not yet been realized. How do you feel about the situation and why? What is the poem’s main message or theme? and Do you agree or disagree with the speaker’s opinion regarding the impact of deferred dreams? Explain.”

Throughout the unit, there are opportunities for discussion prompted by the teacher in whole class instruction. There are few noted opportunities for students to discuss in a variety of groupings. Only a few mentions of small group discussion are present in the materials. For example, in Unit 4, the teacher’s Tiered Discussion Prompts accompanying an excerpt from Mark Twain’s Life on the Mississippi ask students to analyze and express ideas orally: “Analyze: How does Twain reveal the tension between master and apprentice as the scene progresses?”

Modeling of academic vocabulary is limited. The function of most of the discussion questions is as an ice-breaker and/or interest grabber before reading rather than an evidence-based discussion encouraging the use of academic vocabulary. For example, on page 1229, “Academic Vocabulary in Speaking: imagine that Martin Luther King Jr. and Malcolm X were discussing their respective beliefs about confronting racism. What do you think they would say to each other? In a small group, debate this complex issue by representing these two men's beliefs. Remember to keep the debate polite, focused, and in-line with the beliefs of Malcolm X and King. Use at least three academic vocabulary words in your debate.” While students are encouraged to use academic vocabulary there is no protocol to help students set this up. Nor are protocols for how to run a debate provided.

Indicator 1j

1 / 2

Materials support students' listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ listening and speaking about what they are reading and researching (including presentation opportunities) with relevant follow-up questions and evidence.

Activities requiring students to listen and speak to share information are embedded across the year’s instruction. Throughout the textbook, there are opportunities for discussion prompted by the teacher in whole class instruction. There are few noted opportunities for students to discuss in a variety of groupings. Some activities include discussion about what has been read and researched as well as preparing for group discussion. However, most activities, especially those placed at the beginnings of units, rely on opinion or life-experiences rather than research or textual evidence. Fewer activities involve gaining understanding from multiple sources or include follow-up questions.

The speaking and listening tasks are often presented as “Extension” activities, but they connect to readings or the section as a whole. There are tasks in the Speaking & Listening Workshop section of each unit in which students re-work a written assignment and create a speech or powerpoint presentation. Teachers have some guidance throughout the units, but could use more explicit details to help engage all learners with speaking and listening skills.

Examples include but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, after reading “Of Plymouth Plantation” by William Bradford students explore personal accounts of exploration and settlement and then “In a group of four students debate the following statement, The narrators of the selections in this section are unreliable because of their personal and and emotional involvement in the events and experiences they relate.” After reading a movie review of “The Crucible” students are to "Imagine you are a Puritan villager in charge of welcoming new settlers. Using the selections you’ve just read as your resource, write and deliver an informal speech to your new neighbors, welcoming them and sharing a little about the values and beliefs in your community.”
  • In Unit 2, teacher directed discussion questions are provided throughout the unit to guide students in the reading. Examples include,Students are prompted to understand the ideas in The Tragedy of Slavery on page 306. “Consider what you know about slavery from the account by Olaudah Equiano in In Unit 1 or from any other account your read or seen. What conclusion might you draw from this section, which describes slavery a generation after Equiano’s account was published?”For the poem, “Snowbound” on page 359, “Does Whittier succeed at making the chore that this stanza presents seem wondrous?”
  • In Unit 3, students view a pen and ink on paper titled “Lincoln at Gettysburg” with the following discussion prompt, “Examine the image of Lincoln shown here. Based on your reading and your prior knowledge of President Lincoln, give a brief oral critique of how he is portrayed in this painting. Discuss the style of the work as a whole, Lincoln’s placement in relation to other figures in the painting, the colors used, and any other aspects you consider important. Be sure to use precise, formal language in your speech.”
  • In Unit 4, teacher directed discussion questions are provided throughout the unit to guide students in the reading. For example, after students read “The Rise of Naturalism” the following discussion prompts are provided,How did the work of naturalist writers reflect the harsh realities of the late 19th century?Review what the texts says about naturalists in literature. Would you describe today’s writing as “naturalistic”? Why or why not? After reading “A New Role for Women” the following prompts are provided for discussion,Reread the first paragraph. What does the quotation suggest about women’s placement in society in the late 1800’s? Does the quotation have any relevance today? Why or why not? How did Charlotte Perkins Gilman, Kate Chopin and Edith Wharton contribute to the women’s movement?

Indicator 1k

2 / 2

Materials include a mix of on-demand and process writing grade-appropriate writing (e.g. grade-appropriate revision and editing) and short, focused projects.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials including a mix of on-demand and process writing (e.g. multiple drafts, revisions over time) and short, focused projects, incorporating digital resources where appropriate.

The 11th grade textbook offers opportunities for students to write in both process and on-demand formats and incorporates technology when appropriate. Throughout the units, short-constructed, on-demand writings are found. In addition, the end of units provide a processed writing task in a Writing Workshop strategy. The Writing Workshop strategy provides guidance in the steps of the writing process. The process writing assignments include segments on: planning, drafting, revising and editing, publishing with several opportunities for publishing. Digital publishing is often encouraged.

Examples of the mix of on-demand and process writing include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, page 280, students write an essay to answer the prompt, “Write a persuasive essay that argues a strong claim on an issue. Support your claim with reasons and evidence that will convince your audience to think or act in a certain way toward an issue that interests you.”
  • In Unit 2, page 495, students write on demand with a timed write to answer, “Write a short story in which characters react to an unexpected event in their own neighborhood. In your story, try to entertain peers and adults by presenting a lively description of how the main character and others handle the unexpected event and what happens as a result.”
  • In Unit 3, page 620, students write during Writing Workshop to answer the prompt, “Inform your audience by writing an online feature article that answers this research question. What is one topic, trend, person or phenomenon that has defined your time. Choose a topic that people will still read and talk about 100 years from now.”
  • In Unit 4, page 843, students write on demand with a timed writing to answer, “Write a comparison and contrast essay about two of your favorite literary texts. Your essay should concentrate on key aspects of the text, such as characters, theme, setting, plot, and conflict. Your essay should give your audience, such as your teacher and classmates, new insights into the literary texts.”
  • In Unit 5, page 834, students complete an essay during Writing Workshop to address the task, “Write an analytical essay that examines a literary movement or the broader ideas reflected in an author's various works. Keep your audience in mind as you gather evidence and details to support your controlling idea.”
  • In Unit 5 on page 844, students incorporate digital resources to, “Work with classmates to gather and develop content for a class newspaper. Then, use computer software to create your newspaper.”
  • In Unit 6, on page 1035, students write on-demand, “Write a paragraph about a memory of your own that you can still recall in crisp detail. What images, feelings, sounds, or smells come to mind Why do you think this moment lingers in your memory?”

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Materials provide opportunities for students to address different types/modes/genres of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. Writing opportunities incorporate digital resources/multimodal literacy materials where appropriate. Opportunities may include blended writing styles that reflect the distribution required by the standards.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the the criteria for materials providing opportunities for students to address different text types of writing (year long) that reflect the distribution required by the standards.

The 11th grade curriculum provides opportunities to meet the variety of writing styles mandated by the standards. These styles include: argumentative, explanatory, and narrative writing.

Examples of opportunities for students to address the different types of writing reflected by the standards include, but are not limited to:

  • Argumentative: In Unit 6 on p. 1177, an example of argumentative writing can be found.“Think about the adjustments veterans must make when they return from combat. What does society do to help ease their transition back into civilian life? Write a three-to-five paragraph essay on the importance of supporting veterans during this time of transition. Include specific suggestions of ways this might be effectively achieved.”
  • Explanatory: In Unit 5 on p.893, an example of explanatory writing is found. “Many factors shape your outlook--your personality, your life experiences, your state of mind. Write one or two sentences describing your outlook. Then, explain the factors you think have most influenced the way you look at the world.”
  • Narrative: In Unit 1 on p. 91, an example of narrative writing is found. “Write a personal account. Equiano uses details to provide powerful first-person testimony. Choose an experience or a scene you want to describe. Write a one-page account to communicate the power of the experience. Include vivid details.”

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Materials include frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support sophisticated analysis, argumentation, and synthesis.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 meet the criteria for materials including frequent opportunities for research-based and evidence-based writing to support analysis, argument, synthesis and/or evaluation of information, supports, claims.

Throughout the materials, a variety of writing tasks provide opportunities for research-based, evidence-based writing. Writing tasks include formal and informal writing to support analysis of poetry and prose. Examples include but are not limited to the following:

  • In Unit 2, an example of an analytical writing prompt is found. This is a short response piece. “Nathaniel Hawthorne is also a master of the gothic genre. Do you think Zweig’s comments about Poe can apply to Hawthorne’s work as well? Write a brief response, citing evidence from ‘The Minister’s Black Veil’ to support your opinion.”
  • In Unit 4, students read stories and materials instruct students to "Think about how women's roles have changed of the times of Kate Chopin and Edith Wharton. Using the stories you've just read and your knowledge of American society today, write a comparison of women's roles then and now.”
  • In Unit 6, a writing prompt involving the creation of an argument backed by research is found. “The 2000 census report identifies four categories of change in the American population-- geographical center, population size, race and origin, and age. Which category of change do you think will have the greatest effect on America in the 21st century? State your opinion and support it with reasons and evidence from the census report you have just read, the Census Bureau Web site, at least one other internet or print resource, and, if you wish, examples from your own experience.”
  • In Unit 7, students are guided through a research workshop and a writing process workshop. In these workshops students will be guided through the writing of a research paper that is to be based on one of the four questions of literature, history and life students have explored throughout the year. Students will have opportunities to use evidence-based writing to support analysis, argument, synthesis and/or evaluation of information, supports, and claims in each of their individual research projects.

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Materials include instruction and practice of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application in context.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 11 partially meet the criteria for materials including instruction of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level. Over the course of the year’s worth of materials, grammar/convention instruction is provided, however it does not increase in sophisticated contexts.

The materials offer grammar instruction and support over the course of the year. The Essential Course of Study (ECOS) table at the beginning of the Teacher’s Edition identifies grammar and language instruction and exercises present in each unit. (T23-T28) This page shows the progression of skills and language standards, starting with Latin roots, and moving on to dialect and language devices (such as alliteration), and ending the unit with the mechanics of excerpting poetry and punctuating quotations. Some grammar, mechanics, and conventions are taught explicitly (e.g., use alliteration) providing opportunities for students to grow their fluency through practice and application.The materials offer a “Language Coach” and “ Grammar and Style” notation embedded in most texts as well as a “Grammar and Style” practice activity at the end of some selections. Additionally, the materials offer “Grammar in Context” support with samples in the “Writing Workshop” section of each unit as well as a “Grammar Handbook,” along with other support resources, at the end of the text.

Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 2, Grammar and Style, page 1298, students are instructed that, “Conjunctive adverbs act as transitions between complete ideas, indicating the logical connections between them. Common conjunctive adverbs include consequently, however, nevertheless, and furthermore. A semicolon shows the close relationship between two independent clauses. In general, place a semicolon before the conjunctive adverb and then a comma after the conjunctive adverb. Also, look for places where you might strengthen the connections among your ideas by inserting semicolons and conjunctive adverbs.”
  • Unit 5, Grammar and Style, page 904, teachers are instructed to tell students, “Authors sometime use sentence fragments to highlight details, add emphasis or slow the pace or fluency of a passage. Ask students to identify the fragments in lines 108-111 and to explain their effect.” At the end of the selection, students are asked to refer back to the lesson and look at varying sentence style, “Zora Neale Hurston’s independent and unconventional personality shines through in her writing style. She wasn’t afraid to bend the rules of formal writing, adding punch and emphasis through the use of sentence fragments.”
  • Unit 6, Grammar and Style, page 1174, teachers are instructed to, “Point out that word choice is a key component in a writer’s distinct voice. Review that sensory verbs evoke sensory reactions while describing actions. Steinbeck uses many sensory adjectives and verbs in this essay because he wants the reader to imagine and feel what soldiers feel.”