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Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies

9th Grade - Gateway 1

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Gateway Ratings Summary

Text Quality

Text Quality & Complexity and Alignment to Standards Components
Gateway 1 - Meets Expectations
90%
Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality
16 / 16
Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence
13 / 16

Overall, the Grade 9 materials meet the expectations for Gateway 1. A variety of high quality, complex texts support students’ growing literacy skills over the course of the year. However, some text types/genres called for in the standards are not fully represented.

Materials support students’ growth in writing skills over the course of the year using high-quality, text-dependent questions and tasks, though some writing types called for in the standards are not present. Students may need additional support with speaking and listening activities. Materials do not include explicit instruction targeted for grammar and convention standards.

Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality

16 / 16

Texts are worthy of students' time and attention: texts are of quality and are rigorous, meeting the text complexity criteria for each grade. Materials support students' advancing toward independent reading.

The Grade 9 materials meet the expectations for Text Quality and Complexity. Students engage with rich texts that support their growing literacy skills as they read closely, attend to content in multiple genres and types (including multimedia platforms). Texts are organized to support students' close reading and writing, and guidance around quantitative, qualitative, and placement considerations is provided for teachers should they introduce other texts into the materials.

NOTE: Indicator 1b is non-scored and provides information about text types and genres in the program.

Narrative Only

Indicator 1a

4 / 4

Anchor/core texts are of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading.

The materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria of anchor texts being of publishable quality, worthy of especially careful reading, and considering a range of student interests.

Throughout the year, students have the opportunity to read about a broad range of subjects of interest, such as education in America, issues of terrorism, and more. Students are also exposed to highly engaging, theme-rich fiction pieces, such as Ernest Hemingway’s “The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber.”

Anchor texts in the majority of chapters/units and across the yearlong curriculum are of publishable quality. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1 contains multiple texts of publishable quality from reputable publishers. Unit 1, Part 1, incorporates the first four texts to introduce the focus, Reading Closely for Textual Details. Helen Keller’s personal narrative, The Story of My Life, is a commercially published text. The remaining texts serve as an introduction to the content of the main texts; each is a different text type, including a photograph, the previously mentioned personal narrative, multimedia video, and website.
  • Unit 2's anchor text, Plato’s Apology of Socrates, supports the purpose of the unit of making evidence-based claims. Apology is Plato’s account of the defense Socrates gave at his trial in Athens in 399 B.C..
  • Unit 5 texts offer many perspectives and positions on the topic of terrorism and allow students to study the issue from a variety of angles. Since terrorism is currently an issue of global concern, this may be a topic of interest for Grade 9 students.

Anchor texts are well-crafted, content-rich, and include a range of student interests, engaging students at the grade level for which they are placed. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 4, Activity 3, students are asked to read one of three challenging texts in preparation for the culminating task: Eleanor Roosevelt’s "Good Citizenship: The Purpose of Education," Thomas Jefferson’s Notes on the State of Virginia, and Arne Duncan’s "The Vision of Education Reform in the United States." These texts are grade-level appropriate, challenging, and require close reading.
  • Unit 3’s anchor text is Ernest Hemingway’s short story, ”The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber.” This piece is well-crafted and appropriate for the grade level. It encourages close and multiple readings because it explores several themes such as courage, violence, gender roles, and marriage; these could be used to discuss similar themes in other stories. This story also has an interesting plot, engaging characters, and unusual shifts in perspective that Grade 9 students will find engaging.
  • Unit 4 explores the theme “Music: What Role Does it Play in Our Lives” and consists of five text sets. Texts are selected not only to appeal to students’ interests, but also to “provide many ideas about how music plays an essential role in our lives, including its impact on leisure, self-expression, and culture.” Texts are chosen for their ability to introduce various subtopics within the general topic area and include texts such as “What is Online Piracy?”, “Why Your Brain Craves Music," and “The Evolution of Music: How Genres Rise and Fall Over Time.”
  • Unit 5 contains multiple texts of publishable quality from established publishers. For example, students read Major Terrorism Cases: Past and Present from FBI.gov and Events of 9/11. To increase student engagement and understanding, the curriculum also provides information about terrorism via timelines, political cartoons, and videos.

Indicator 1b

Narrative Only
Materials reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level.
*Indicator 1b is non-scored (in grades 9-12) and provides information about text types and genres in the program.

The materials reviewed for Grade 9 partially reflect a distribution of text types and genres required by the standards for Grade 9. While this curriculum provides an abundance of informational text, including literary nonfiction, it does not include poetry such as narrative poems, sonnets, ballads or dramas. Examples of text types and genres that are provided include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1, “Education is the New Currency,” is centered around numerous texts related to how education in the United States is changing. The curriculum provides the teacher with a list of texts used in the unit via the Reading Closely For Textual Details Unit Texts chart (80-81). Texts provided include personal narratives by Helen Keller and Eleanor Roosevelt, speeches by Colin Powell, Arne Duncan, and Horace Mann, and other nonfiction pieces such as TED Talks, websites, government documents, and videos.
  • Unit 2 uses Plato’s Apology of Socrates as the anchor text. This nonfiction piece is used throughout the unit and serves as students’ main source when making evidence-based claims.
  • In Unit 3, the instruction is centered on the analysis of the short story, “The Short Happy Life of Frances Macomber,” by Ernest Hemingway; this fictional text is the sole text for this unit.
  • Unit 4 offers Common Source Sets “that model and briefly explain a text sequence focused on a particular Area of Investigation” (316). A list of these Common Sources can be found at the end of the unit. Source 1 is a YouTube video entitled, “Imagine Life Without Music." Source 2 is the Internet-based article, “A Brief History of the Music Industry.” Source 3 consists of three internet-based sources: “What is Online Piracy?”, “Why Your Brain Craves Music,” and “The 25 Most Important Civil Rights Moments in Music History.” Sources 4 and 5 also consist of non-fiction, internet-based articles about music (403-406).
  • Unit 5 provides a comprehensive list of texts in the chart, Building Evidence-Based Arguments Unit Texts. Text Sets 1 and 2 consist of informational texts such as “Militant Extremists in the United States” by Jonathan Masters and “A Brief History of Terrorism in the United States” by Brian Resnick. Text Set 3 consists of a political cartoon. Text Set 4 consists of seminal arguments such as Public Law 107-40 “Authorization for Use of Military Force” and Osama bin Laden’s Declaration of Jihad against Americans. Text Set 5 includes additional nonfiction arguments such as “Obama’s Speech on Drone Policy” and “Terrorism Can Only Be Defeated by Education, Tony Blair Tells the UN” (535).

Indicator 1c

4 / 4

Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade level (according to quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for texts having the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, and relationship to their associated student task. Most texts fall within either the Current Lexile Band or the Stretch Lexile Band for grades 9-10. Some texts exceed the band for grades 9-10, but are structured in a way that make them accessible to Grade 9 students. The few texts that do not have Lexiles provided qualitatively meet the requirements for this grade level because they serve as introductory pieces for a unit, provide for the exploration of several themes or multiple meanings, allow for the analysis of narrative structure, or are easily accessible sources that offer different perspectives on an issue.

Most anchor texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative and qualitative analysis and relationship to their associated student task. While many of the texts are challenging, texts are chosen to engage student interest and promote inquiry, which make them worthy of students’ time and attention. Texts support students’ advancement toward independent reading. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1 contains an extensive set of texts for students to practice close reading for details and more than half are accompanied with a Lexile score. Of the identified texts, only one falls far below grade-level, an excerpted transcript of Colin Powell’s TED Talk, “Kids Needs Structure.” The speech was given a 900L, putting it in the 4th-5th grade Stretch Lexile Band. Although this text measures only 900L, it is appropriate for the grade level because it provides strong description and narration. Powell's ideas and supporting details also allow students to “explore his perspective, which developed during his days in the military.” Unit 1, Part 1 incorporates the first four texts to introduce the focus, Reading Closely for Textual Details. Helen Keller’s personal narrative, The Story of My Life, has an identified Lexile score of 1250. This set of texts includes a photograph that connects to the previously mentioned personal narrative, multimedia video, and website. In Unit 1, Part 4, Activity 3, students are asked to read one of three challenging texts in preparation for the culminating task. Eleanor Roosevelt’s “Good Citizenship: The Purpose of Education” measures at 1250L, Thomas Jefferson’s Notes on the State of Virginia measures at 1410L, and Arne Duncan’s “The Vision of Education Reform in the United States” measures at 1200L which falls within the Stretch Lexile Band for grades 9-10. These texts are challenging and allow for close reading, questioning, analysis and summary. While Jefferson's text is above grade level, it provides teachers the opportunity to assign a more complex text based on individual student's reading comprehension levels. This one would be reserved for more capable students.
  • The core text for Unit 2 is Plato’s Apology with a 980L, which falls within the 9th grade Current Lexile Band of 960L to 1120L. Students use a question-based approach to read and analyze the text. Qualitatively, this text is challenging since requires familiarity with Greek leaders such as Chaerephon, Anytus and Lycon, as well as Greek mythology allusions such as Minos and Rhadamanthus. Other vocabulary will also challenge students such as words like “impetuous” and “odious.” At the end of Unit 1, the teacher’s edition provides “media supports” with various editions of Apology on Audiobooks, YouTube, ebooks, and PDFs. Each edition gives a description. For example, “2. Socratic Citizenship: Plato’s Apology” is described as a lecture from Yale University on the political and philosophical contexts of Socrates’ trial. Although this is an advanced analysis of Plato’s Apology, students can benefit from watching how an expert discusses an important text in Western civilization.”
  • In Unit 5, the curriculum provides a variety of texts in the form of text sets. Lexile levels are provided for texts within the Text Notes sections of the teacher’s edition. For example, In Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 2, students read “What is Terrorism?”; this text measures at 1200L which exceeds the Current Lexile Band for grades 9-10, but falls within the Stretch Lexile Band. Students also read “Terrorists or Freedom Fighters: What’s the Difference?” which measures at 1070L which falls within both the Current and Stretch Lexile Bands for grades 9-10. The final text in this activity is “Militant Extremists in the United States” which measures at 1470L. This text is very complex and its Lexile level is higher than the top measurement for the Stretch Lexile Band for 11-CCR. The text does state that “the headings and subheadings help organize the information into sections” (459), making it more accessible to 9th grade students. The other texts within the unit are timelines, political cartoons, and videos. The curriculum indicates that these texts are readily accessible to 9th grade students. Text 4.1 “Authorization for Use of Military Force” is Public Law 107-40 has an estimated Lexile level of 1270L which falls in the Stretch Lexile Band for grades 9-10. All the texts in Unit 5 were appropriately chosen as resources for the unit’s final assignment where students develop a supported position on the issue of terrorism. These texts offer many perspectives and positions on the topic and allow students to study the issue from a variety of angles.

Indicator 1d

4 / 4

Materials support students' literacy skills (understanding and comprehension) over the course of the school year through increasingly complex text to develop independence of grade level skills (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ increasing literacy skills over the course of the school year. Series of texts are at a variety of complexity levels appropriate for the grade band.

As the year progresses, students read increasingly difficult texts. In the Grade 9 curriculum, the writing skills build on one another, as well as the complexity of the texts to support the thinking and literacy skills. In the units with the texts sets, there is a breadth and depth of choices in the full range of the Lexile stretch band providing opportunities to challenge students by giving them complex texts, but also by providing more reachable texts as they are working on analysis and synthesis skills in writing.

The complexity of anchor texts students read provides an opportunity for students’ literacy skills to increase across the year, encompassing an entire year’s worth of growth. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In the overview for Unit 3, the Teacher’s Edition states that “this unit extends students’ abilities to make evidence-based claims into the realm of literary analysis.” All reading, discussion, and literary analysis focuses on Ernest Hemingway’s “The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber.”
  • In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 2, students read “A Brief History of the Music Industry,” which measures at 1500L; this measurement places it outside even the Stretch Lexile Band for Grade 11-CCR. However, the text is written in a student-friendly way with short paragraphs making it easier to read which allows students to access this much more complex text.

The complexity of anchor texts support students’ proficiency in reading independently at grade level at the end of the school year as required by grade level standards. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1, Part 2, Activity 2, includes a speech by Colin Powell which has a Lexile of only 900 but is credited for the strong description and narration from Powell which provides the opportunity for students to explore his perspective. Unit 1, Part 3, Activity 1, introduces a passage by Maria Montessori and measures at 1270L which “should be challenging but accessible for most students with the scaffolding and support of the close reading process”. The final three texts in Unit 1, Part 4, Activity 2, all focus on the purpose and value of education in society. They range from a piece by Thomas Jefferson (1410 L) to FDR (1250L) to Arne Duncan (1200L).
  • In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 3, students read “Why Your Brain Craves Music” which measures at 1350L; this measurement places it within the Stretch Lexile Band for Grade 9-10. In Unit 4, Part 3, Activity 2, students read “Why I Pirate” which measures at 1200L; the curriculum suggests that due to the complexity of the text that it be used for teacher modeling. Students also read the article, “Are Musicians Going Up a Music Stream without a Fair Payout?” This article measures at 1180L which falls within the Stretch Lexile Band for Grade 9-10.

Indicator 1e

2 / 2

Anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.

The instructional materials meet the expectations that texts and lesson materials are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level. Additionally, there are included tools and metrics to assist teachers in making their own text placements should they need to introduce a new text or text set into the materials. The curriculum provides quantitative information for both anchor texts and text sets excluding photographs, videos, and websites. The Teacher Edition explains the purpose and value of the texts in the Text Notes. For example, some texts are chosen for their value in reinforcing literary techniques while others were chosen as appropriate introductions to a particular time period. All texts were chosen because they were appropriate for 9th grade students while still allowing some flexibly for a variety of reading levels.

Examples of how the materials explain how texts are placed in the program include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 3, students read an excerpt from Helen Keller’s autobiography. Its Lexile Level is 1250L. The curriculum states, “This is a good first text for close reading because it is vivid and challenging, but it is also relatively short and accessible for most students” (17). It goes on to provide rationale for its purpose stating that the text can be used to show students how writers can use similar literary techniques in nonfiction that are found in fiction pieces with a focus on figurative language and characterization.
  • In Unit 5, the curriculum provides the following rationale for text selection: “The texts...are offered in the form of text sets, in which texts are grouped together for instructional and content purposes” (443). Since students are not required to read every text, the curriculum also provides flexibility for teachers to make decisions about text selection based on student reading levels as the selections have different complexities. For this unit, Lexile levels are provided within the Text Notes for each text set (excluding photos, videos, and websites). For example for Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 2, students read “What is Terrorism?”; the curriculum describes this piece of writing as, “The text measures at 1200L and should be accessible to most ninth grade students” (455).

Indicator 1f

2 / 2

Anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria that anchor and supporting texts provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading proficiency. Students read a variety of texts including nonfiction personal narratives, fictional short stories, and nonfiction articles. Texts are accompanied by a Questioning Path Tool which provides both text-dependent and text-specific questions that guide them into a deeper reading of the text. Finally, each unit provides various student checklists and teacher rubrics that can be used to monitor progress throughout the year.

Instructional materials clearly identify opportunities and supports for students to engage in reading a variety of text types and disciplines and also to experience a volume of reading as they grow toward reading independence at the grade level. For example:

  • Unit 1 is based on numerous non-fiction texts related to education in the United States and how it is changing. In Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 3, students read Helen Keller’s The Story of My Life. The curriculum provides support for this reading via the Questioning Path Tool. This tool provides four levels of both text-dependent and text-specific questioning which include questioning, analyzing, deepening, and extending (page 18 of the Teacher’s Edition).
  • Unit 3 is based on the close reading of Ernest Hemingway’s short story, “The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber.” In Unit 3, Part 1, Activity 1, students are provided a Questioning Path Tool that not only guides them through the close reading, but it is a question from this tool that will serve as the basis for the writing of an Evidence-Based Claim.
  • Unit 4’s reading includes a Common Source Set (virtual texts) that focuses on a particular area of investigation, “Music: What Role Does it Play in Our Lives?” This is given as a model of how a teacher can create source sets and recognizes the ever-changing nature of websites. Within the source sets are YouTube videos, internet-based articles, as well Gale Reference Library articles..

Materials also include checklists, rubrics, and student conference suggestions to assist in evaluating the development of literacy proficiency.

Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence

13 / 16

Materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts to build strong literacy skills.

Overall, the instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 partially meet the expectations of indicators 1g through 1n. The materials support students as they grow their writing skills over the course of the year. High-quality, text-dependent questions and task support students as they grapple with materials, participate in discussions of content, engage in a variety of writing types, and demonstrate their learning with evidence-supported arguments. However, speaking and listening protocols are not fully outlined throughout the materials to support teachers and students. Teachers may also need to add additional instruction to cover the full range of writing standards required for narrative writing. Materials do not include explicit instruction targeted for grammar and convention standards.

Indicator 1g

2 / 2

Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria that most questions, tasks, and assignments are text dependent/specific and consistently support students’ literacy growth over the course of a school year.

The instructional materials include questions and tasks that require careful reading over the course of a school year, during which students are asked to produce evidence from texts to support claims. Materials introduce the text-dependent inquiry basis called the Questioning Path Tool, which provides opportunities for students to ask and use questions to guide their close examination of the text. The Questioning Path Tool progresses from intensive practice and support in developing text-specific questions to gradual release of responsibility as students learn to develop high-quality questions on their own, deepening their understanding of the text. These questions require students to return to the text for evidence to support their answers to questions about the roles of specific details, the meaning of specific phrases, character development, and vocabulary analysis. The process supports a text-centric curriculum and approach to multiple literacy skills.

Students work independently and collaboratively to respond to and generate text-specific questions. Also, writing tasks provide the opportunity for students to conduct more text-dependent work. Models can be modified for existing content (i.e., novels) owned by a district.

The tasks and assignments asked of students are appropriately sequenced and follow a consistent routine. The materials require students to closely read the text, drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 2, The Questioning Path Tool shows initial text-dependent questions that engage the surface level details, identifying the what: “What details stand out…?” and “What do I think this image is mainly about?” Students are then allowed an opportunity to deepen their understanding by moving toward text-specific questions that analyze the how: “How do specific details help me understand what is being depicted in the image?”
  • The Questioning Path Tool templates and Reading Closely: Guiding Question handouts are provided with the materials to encourage students to create their own questions in four categories: questioning, analyzing, deepening, and extending. These tools are included in each unit.
  • The materials also include text-specific questions.
    • In Unit 1, Part 2, Activity 1, the Questioning Path Tool for the text, “The Story of My Life,” provides text-specific questions. One example is, “What does the figurative language phrase ‘a little mass of possibilities’ in the first paragraph suggest about how Keller at first saw herself as a student?”
    • In Unit 2, Part 1, Activity 2, there are text-specific questions to accompany Plato’s Apology: “In Paragraph 3, Socrates says he is on trial because of a ‘certain kind of wisdom’. According to Socrates, what kind of wisdom does he not have? What does this suggest about the wisdom he does have?”
    • In Unit 4, Part 3, Activity 2, students are asked to analyze a source’s perspective and bias as they develop sources for their research portfolio. The materials direct students to use the Guiding Questions handout from previous units for guidance. Specifically, the materials point to the “P” of the “LIPS” domains--Language, Ideas, Perspective, and Structure--in the Guiding Questions handout. The Perspective domain presents text-dependent, evidence-based questions for students. The question, “What details or words suggest the author’s perspective?” is a strong example of a stand alone text-dependent question. Other questions, such as, “How does the author’s perspective influence my reading of the text?”, rely on the provided follow-up instructions in the Deepening section of the Guiding Questions handout. This section asks students to support and “explain why and cite [...] evidence” from the text.

Students are supported in their literacy growth over the course of a school year. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1 culminates in a text-centered discussion in the Reading Closely for Textual Details: Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies Literacy Toolbox. The Instructional Notes explicitly ask students to “point out key words that indicate the author’s perspective,” as well as “ask the other participants to reference the texts in their comments.”
  • In Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 2, students are asked to question the text without the typical modeling by the teachers, thus placing more of the responsibility on the student. The teacher Instructional Notes for this task indicate: “(The students) should be bringing useful questions from such handouts as the Guiding Questions and Assessing Sources handouts into their reading process, and they should not require prescriptive scaffolding. However, students will also be reading, analyzing, and evaluating complex arguments in this unit, perhaps for the first time. They may need the support of text-dependent questions that help them attend to the elements and reasoning within arguments.” The Instructional Notes include further information for the teacher to assist with “abbreviated versions of the model Questioning Tools found in other units.”

Teacher materials provide support for planning and implementation of text-dependent questions, tasks, and assignments. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • Teacher Instructional Notes across the units include reminders to teachers to consistently direct students to use the text to support responses. These notes also encourage teachers to generate questions to model for the students.
  • In Unit 3, Part 5, Activity 5, the Instructional Notes provide the following teacher instructions for a task so that students are provided with proper modeling. The notes read: “Return to the literacy skills criteria students have been using in Part 4: Forming Claims and Using Evidence. Talk through how you might apply these criteria in reviewing a draft evidence-based claims essay—beginning with general Guiding Review Questions, such as “What is the claim and how clearly is it expressed and explained? Is there enough, well-chosen evidence to support the claim?” Then model how a writer might develop a more specific text-based review question to guide a second review of the draft.”
  • In Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 2, the Instructional Notes reference the EBA (Evidence-based Argument) Toolbox, which includes “a few model text-specific questions for deepening students’ understanding of specific aspects of the arguments they will read closely.”

Indicator 1h

2 / 2

Materials contain sets of sequences of text-dependent/ text-specific questions with activities that build to a culminating task which integrates skills to demonstrate understanding

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for materials containing sets of high-quality sequences of text-dependent and text-specific questions and activities that build to a culminating task which integrates skills to demonstrate understanding.

The materials include quality culminating tasks which are supported with coherent sequences of text-dependent questions and tasks and are present across a year’s worth of material. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, the tasks focus on Reading Closely for Textual Details which is a prerequisite skill and foundation for the work done in the following units. Each unit introduces a skill, such as making evidence-based claims and researching to deepen understanding, which is necessary for Unit 5 Building Evidence-Based Arguments: “What is the Virtue of Proportional Response?”
  • In Unit 2, Part 5, Making Evidence-Based Claims (EBC), the culminating activity is a writing task, students compose “a rough draft of an evidence-based claim essay on their global claim.” The materials suggest that this task is “used as evidence of Literacy Skills associated with close reading…” To this point, close reading activities have been driven by the Questioning Path Tool - a handout utilized throughout the curricular materials with general text-dependent questions to text-specific questions. To describe the relevance of the tasks, the teacher’s edition addresses the materials by using the analogy of “practitioners in various fields are able to analyze and understand [works] because their training focuses them on details… [and this] often involves using questions to direct their attention.” This analogy is included to help students understand the process of building an EBC and completing the Forming EBC Tool. This is just one step in the process of completing the culminating task.
  • In Unit 5, Part 2, Activity 7, students are tasked to use notes and annotations taken from previous activities to compose a culminating essay to demonstrate mastery of analyzing an argument. Student work is text-dependent; they use notes and annotations collected on the Delineating Arguments Tool practiced with the included text set or other materials as determined by the teacher. The Delineating Arguments Tool is preceded by the use of the Guiding Questions handout, remaining consistent with the text-dependent and text-specific basis of the entire curriculum.

Evidence that sequences of text-dependent questions and tasks throughout each unit prepare students for success on the culminating tasks includes, but is not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, students are asked to read nine texts focusing on the theme, “Education is the New Currency.” In Unit 1, Part 5, Activity 3 of this unit, students are asked to participate in a text-centered discussion about how education is the great equalizer of the conditions of humans. To prepare for the culminating activity, students work collaboratively to review each other’s text-based explanations, discuss their assigned text to other texts within the unit, and write a comparative text-specific question for the discussion.
  • In Unit 4, Part 5, students are asked to create a culminating research portfolio or produce an alternative research-based product. The activities leading up to this culminating task include the consistent Questioning Path Tool to explore a topic using various texts and to develop an Inquiry Question. The student- or class-generated Inquiry Question determines the texts used with the text-dependent Research Evaluation Tool. When using the Research Evaluation Tool, which consists of three checklists with guiding questions, students present materials gathered and studied to include in their portfolio and receive feedback from the teacher and peers about the credibility, relevance, and sufficiency of the evidence gathered.

The culminating tasks are varied and rich, providing opportunities for students to demonstrate what they know and are able to do in speaking and/or writing. The following are examples of this evidence:

  • In Unit 3, the Unit Overview includes an Outline describing the five parts of the unit. The Outline describes Part 5: Developing Evidence-Based Writing: “Students develop the ability to express global evidence-based claims in writing through a rereading of the texts in the unit and a review of their previous work.” Students are expected to reread the texts in the unit and discuss with the class the development of Evidence-Based Claims (EBCs). They are also expected to create their own EBCs about literary technique and work collaboratively throughout the writing process. Finally, students participate in a class discussion of final evidence-based essays.
  • In Unit 5, the culminating task consists of an argumentative essay. In preparation for this final task, students write short essays analyzing an argument. In Unit 5, Part 2, Activity 7: Writing to Analyze Arguments, the teacher’s Instructional Notes read: “Students use their notes, annotations, and tools (such as the Questioning Path Tool) to write paragraphs analyzing one of the arguments they have read thus far in the unit.”

Indicator 1i

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Materials provide frequent opportunities and protocols to engage students in speaking and listening activities and discussions (small group, peer-to-peer, whole class) which encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 partially meet the criteria for materials providing frequent opportunities and protocols for evidence-based discussions (small groups, peer-to-peer, whole class) that encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax.

The materials promote twelve Academic Habits and twenty standards-aligned Literacy Skills. The materials intend for students “to develop, apply, and extend” Academic Habits “as they progress through the sequence of instruction.” Academic Habits include mental processes and communication skills sets such as, but not limited to, Preparing, Collaborating, Completing Tasks, Understanding Purpose And Process, and Remaining Open. Each Academic Habit is accompanied by general descriptors and most units include rubrics designed for teachers to conduct observational assessments of Academic Habits, thus providing another opportunity for assessment. By comparison, the Literacy Skills articulated by the materials are focused on reading and writing skills; Academic Habits are mental and communication-based processes.

In the Teacher’s Edition, Grade 9 Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies: User Guide, the publisher includes a table that “lists the anchor Common Core State Standards that are targeted within the five Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies units and indicates the Literacy Skills and Academic Habits that are derived from or are components of those standards.” The instructional materials focus on “SL.1: Prepare for and participate effectively in a range of conversations and collaborations with diverse partners, building on others’ ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively.” Other speaking and listening standards within the strand are not targeted within the Developing Literacy Proficiencies units.

Throughout the curriculum, students are provided frequent opportunities to participate in evidence-based discussions. Many activities start with teacher-led, whole-class discussions to establish students’ first impressions with teachers modeling how to use evidence from text to support observations. When students dive deeper into the texts, they are often assigned to work in pairs to discuss claims and organize evidence. In other activities, the curriculum suggests that students work in teams to become experts, then jigsaw into new groups to share what they have learned. These discussions are text-specific and ask students to refer to this textual evidence while presenting claims and validating observations. While discussions are evidence-based, teachers and students are not provided with protocols or models for conversation. Conversation is a tool used throughout the curriculum, but is not ever explicitly taught or assessed.

The consistent design of the curriculum provides a focus on using textual evidence and contains sequenced tasks for most discussions to support the demonstration of academic vocabulary and analysis of syntax. This is maintained by the consistent use of a questioning path system and explicit modeling instructions for teachers to follow with students. At times, the Questioning Path Tool leads whole class discussions or between students in pairs and small-groups for specific purposes. For example, Unit 4 is focused on research skills and the questioning-based instruction promoted by the materials becomes inquiry-based discussions used by students grouped into research teams.

Materials provide multiple opportunities and questions for evidence-based discussions across the whole year’s scope of instructional materials. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 3, Part 4, Activity 6, “The class discusses their new EBC’s (Evidence-Based Claims) from Activity 5 and students listen actively to portions of the text being read or presented.” Students discuss the text and review the self-developed Questioning Paths. In pairs, students discuss their claims and organize evidence. Students also participate in a whole-class read aloud to help each other analyze claims and selected evidence.
  • In Unit 4, the core question, “Music: What role does it play in our lives?” might increase student engagement. In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 1, the opening discussion in the Instructional Notes provides an opportunity for a discussion/question for “inquiry and research.” In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 2, specific instructions are given after viewing a video on how to help students think about topic areas that might be interesting to research. This is done through full-class discussion.

The opportunities provided do not always adequately address and promote students’ ability to master grade-level speaking and listening standards. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 3, during small group work utilizing Academic Habits, the teacher’s edition shares that students “might reflect on how well they have demonstrated the skills of preparing for discussions by reading and annotating the text and considering the questions that have framed discussion.” The Discussion Habits Checklist is available for teachers and students to access using the RC (Reading Closely) Literacy Toolbox. Similarly, in Unit 1, the Student Edition highlights skills and habits, such as questioning, collaboration, and clear communication; notably, the students are reminded of the following: “These skills and habits are also listed on the Student Literacy Skills and Discussion Habits Checklist, which you can use to assess your work and the work of other students.” The skills and habits address core standards specifically targeted by the publisher in Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies Units.
  • In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 2, in the teacher’s edition, students in small groups “practice the thinking process by using the topic area and questions previously developed by the class and filling in the Tool’s second Area of Investigation section.” However, all the questions students are given after these instructions are questions that they are working on independently. The tie between the small group goal/organization and this activity is weak.
  • In Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 4, “Students work in reading teams to develop a set of more focused text-specific questions…” Students can also work individually to review one of the background texts to find additional details. The note section suggests that students work in teams to become experts, then jigsaw into new groups to share what they have learned. Speaking and listening skills are not assessed. Students participate in a sharing out of ideas. In the activity, peers do not set rules for collegial discussions and decision-making or challenge ideas and conclusions of their peers as included in the CCSS.

Grade-level-appropriate opportunities occur for evidence-based discussions that encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax within the materials, but the curriculum does not utilize the opportunities. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • On page xxxiii, the curriculum states that many decisions about the teaching of vocabulary are left up to the teacher. It also states that “activities and tools use vocabulary related to reading skills that students can apply while reading and writing.” Additionally, keywords in the Reading Closely and Making Evidence-Based Claims units’ texts “are highlighted and defined so that students and teachers can focus on them as needed.” This shows that the curriculum is not providing guidance regarding how to intentionally incorporate academic or text-specific vocabulary into instruction. (This wording is the same in all grade levels.) The instructional materials do not provide the guidance necessary to ensure students will demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression.
  • In the Introduction for Unit 3, the teacher’s edition states a “skillful reader of a literary work pays attention to what authors do--the language, elements, devices, and techniques they use, and the choices they make that influence a reader’s experience with and understanding of the literary work.” While the development of student’s EBCs are grounded in this skillful reading, the same isn’t true for speaking/listening. For example, in Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 4, a reflection question asks about communicating ideas with specific evidence, but no focus is included on modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax, which could easily be incorporated into this rhetorical analysis.
  • In Unit 5, Part 5, Activity 1, the activity concerns the editing and revision stages of the writing process. After allowing students time to process aspects of their writing, the activity provides reflection questions to guide discussions about the students’ drafts. The Text-Centered Discussion occurs in peer-editing pairs. Editing partners read, looking for “textual evidence that expresses the writer’s understanding of the issue” about which they are writing. At this point in the curriculum, and with modeling provided by the teacher, students could appropriately use academic vocabulary when providing feedback. The materials provide a description of the task, but not the protocol of the very explicit steps on how to be successful at the task. The opportunity is there, but the materials do not explicitly require students to use the vocabulary in their feedback. It could happen naturally, but is not directly stated as an expectation by the materials and, therefore, the teacher.

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Materials support students' listening and speaking (and discussions) about what they are reading and researching (shared projects) with relevant follow-up questions and supports.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for the materials supporting students’ listening and speaking about what they are reading and researching (including presentation opportunities) with relevant follow-up questions and evidence.

Materials embed evidence-based academic discussions focused on listening and speaking skills in reading and writing processes. Students are often asked to engage in discussions about texts through activities such as note taking, annotating texts, and capturing what their peers say. Students then transfer the practice to their own writing through collaborative revision workshops with peers.

Speaking and listening instruction is applied frequently over the course of the year and includes facilitation, monitoring, and instructional supports for teachers. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 3, Activity 2, students discuss how the author’s use of language reflects his or her perspective on the subject. Students have to present evidence and connect their comments to the ideas of others. Students practice listening skills as they take notes, annotate their texts, and capture what peers say. The curriculum supports the development of listening and speaking skills with the formal and less formal versions of the Reading Closely Literacy Skills and Discussion Habits Rubrics.
  • In Unit 2, Part 1, Activity 2, the teacher guides students to share ideas during a “brief discussion in which students volunteer something they learned about the speaker (Socrates).” Further guidance is offered in the Instructional Notes to assist the teacher in leading the discussion with follow-up questions to the students’ independent reading and to prepare them for the next step. An example of one such question is: “What words or sentences in the paragraph tell you this information?” Then, students transition into “the second guiding question: ‘What details or words suggest the author's perspective?’”
  • In Unit 3, Part 2, Activity 2, students read aloud, "The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber" and continue to engage with the same guiding questions to elicit evidence of the author’s language, ideas, and use of supporting details. Support is provided by the Making EBC Tool and text-specific Questioning Path Tool.
  • In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 2, students explore a research topic. Students watch a video and read a common text to stimulate thinking about what makes the topic interesting and to open up possible areas to investigate. After watching the video, small groups, and later the entire class, will summarize what they have learned through the video. Students will compare notes and note-taking strategies. Students then work in small teams to read an internet-based text and discuss what they already know about the text before they read it. Students will listen and participate as the class discusses how the source they just read relates to the topic and the video they have previously previewed.
  • In addition, students are expected to exhibit the following behaviors during the Text-Centered Discussion:
    • “Listening: Listen fully to what readers have observed; Consider their ideas thoughtfully; Wait momentarily before responding verbally.
    • "Remaining Open: Avoid explanations or justifications for what they as writers have tried to do (no 'yes, but . . .' responses); Frame additional informal, text-based questions to further probe their readers’ observations.”

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Materials include a mix of on-demand and process writing grade-appropriate writing (e.g. grade-appropriate revision and editing) and short, focused projects.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for materials including a mix of on-demand and process writing (e.g., multiple drafts, revisions over time) and short, focused projects, incorporating digital resources where appropriate. Throughout the units, the instructional materials require students to produce on demand short, informal writings and longer, independent process writing tasks and essays.

On-demand writing tasks can consist of completing the worksheets/handouts/tools from the Literary Toolboxes and evolve into students composing sentence-length, evidence-based claims and paragraphs. Students compose initial on-demand writing in pairs to become accustomed to the material’s Academic Habits or approach to revisions through informal collaborative small group and class discussions in Unit 2 to more formal Research Teams in Unit 4. Examples of on-demand writings include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 4 is focused on increasing students’ close reading skills. In Part 1, students demonstrate their proficiency through discussions closely guided by their on-demand writing that occurs in the Questioning Path Tool handouts included in the Literacy Toolbox. For example, Activity 4 tasks students to follow the Guiding Questions provided in the tool to analyze details in a multimedia text, a TED Talk by Sir Ken Robinson. There are multiple text-centered questions and the materials assign students to “write a few sentences explaining something they have learned.”
  • In Unit 2, Part 4, Activity 2, students consider text-based review questions, and “articulate and share their text-based responses and constructive reviewers claims” that they have generated based on the reading.
  • In Unit 4, Part 1, Activity 2, students summarize their observations and understandings of a topic discussed in class and brainstorm potential areas of investigation as well as details about the topic to expand or increase understanding.

Opportunities for process writing tasks include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 2, Part 5, Activity 5, “students used a criteria-based checklist of feedback from peers in a collaborative review process to revise and improve their evidence-based claim essays.” Once students have completed the first drafts of their essays, they work in writing groups to complete two review and revision cycles. The first cycle focuses on the essay’s content or on evaluating and improving the content or quality of claims and evidence; the second cycle focuses on improving organization and expression and clarity of their writing.
  • In Unit 4, Part 2, Activity 3, students are directed to “consult a librarian or media specialist and conduct web- or library-based searches” for additional sources to complete the culminating research writing assignment. The process writing for this is sequenced out beforehand with the Common Sources and Literacy Toolbox handouts specific to this unit. The peer-feedback, revision processes practiced in previous units is implemented again to develop and improve the students’ research essays. Part 5 focuses on research skills for the summative purpose of creating a research portfolio, written research narrative, or research-based product to present.

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Materials provide opportunities for students to address different types/modes/genres of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. Writing opportunities incorporate digital resources/multimodal literacy materials where appropriate. Opportunities may include blended writing styles that reflect the distribution required by the standards.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 partially meet the criteria for materials providing opportunities for students to address different text types of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. Writing is embedded throughout the curriculum; however, the writing instruction does not fully reflect the distribution of the standards, in particular the various elements of narrative writing, even though narrative writing is at times included as a follow-up reflection to longer research projects. The 9-12 CCSS state within narrative writing that students write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequence. In particular, students are to use narrative techniques such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection, and multiple plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters. Students are not provided opportunities to engage in narrative writing tasks allowing sufficient practice for specific narrative techniques as required by the standards.

The curriculum provides a variety of unit-specific checklists and rubrics so that students and teachers can monitor progress in literacy skills (including writing) and academic habits such as collaborating and clearly communicating. This curriculum is based in reading grade-appropriate texts and responding to these texts in both formal and informal writing.

Materials provide multiple opportunities across the school year for students to learn, practice, and apply different genres/modes of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. While students encounter a variety of texts—speeches, essays, historical texts, TED talks—the writing that they are asked to do is not varied. While they write expository and argumentative pieces, they are not asked to write outside these genresExamples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 3, Part 5, Activity 1, students are considering the piece, “The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber,” by Ernest Hemingway with respect to its content, as well as use of literary techniques. While they discuss these techniques in writing a global claim about literary techniques, there are no opportunities to also practice/write/develop narrative techniques such as dialogue, pacing, description, plot lines, or develop experiences, events, and/or characters as stated in the standards.
  • In Unit 4, Part 5, Activity 2, the Teacher’s Edition states, “students write a reflective research narrative explaining how they came to their understanding of the topic, the steps they took to reach that understanding, and what they have learned about the inquiry process.” Instructional Notes are included to assist teachers in guiding students through the Activity Sequence as students “tell the ‘story’ of their search,” including the following reflective points:
    • Their initial understanding of the topic of Music and its importance in our lives.
    • Their culminating understanding or view of the topic.
    • The steps they took to reach their evidence-based perspective.
    • Their personal experience learning about and using the inquiry process to research the issues connected to the topics they have investigated.

In this type of writing, students will connect their ideas to the sources used during their research; however, due to the nature of this assignment, students are not able to use narrative techniques such multiple plots lines or sensory language to convey a vivid picture of characters. An example of this follows:

  • In Unit 4, Part 5, Activity 2, the Instructional Notes relating to the narrative state, “Because this may be the first time in the Developing Core Proficiencies program sequence that students have written a narrative, they may want to consider the specific Expectations of CCSS W.3 at ninth grade…” and list these standards for the teacher. There is no additional guidance to assist teachers and ensure students have practiced and reached proficiency of all narrative techniques for the grade level.

Materials provide opportunities for students/teachers to monitor progress in writing skills. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 2, Part 3, Activity 1, the teacher’s edition states that students read “paragraphs 11-18 of Plato’s Apology, guided by a Guiding Question(s) from the model Questioning Path Tool and use the Forming EBC Tool to make an evidence based claim.” Following the reading, “students record key details, connections, and an initial evidence-based claim on the tool.” The Instructional Notes provide teachers with reminders in Part 3: Formative Assessment Opportunities: “Students should now be beginning to develop more complex claims about challenging portions of the text. Their Forming EBC Tool should demonstrate a solid grasp of the claim-evidence relationship, but do not expect precision in the wording of their claims.” Tools are provided to both teachers and students to assess Academic Habits.
  • Each Part of Unit 3 ends with Formative Assessment Opportunities which incorporate writing skills ranging from Attending to Details and Identifying Relationships to claims and textual evidence and claims-evidence relationship writings.
  • In Unit 3, Part 3, Activity 2, students compare the draft claims they have written and teachers facilitate a short comparative discussion that helps students reflect on the strengths and/or weaknesses of their claims.
  • Unit 5 focuses on the argumentative mode of writing and addresses the standards’ persuasive appeals by continuing to focus on EBCs. It follows the same processes for multi-stage collaborative reviews for development and revisions in writing and opportunities for teachers to track students’ progress: formative assessments and rubric/checklists to observe demonstrated Literacy Skills and Academic Habits.

Where appropriate, writing opportunities are connected to texts and/or text sets (either as prompts, models, anchors, or supports).

  • The Questioning Path Tool questions written by the students are always connected to a specific text.
  • The Forming Evidence-Based Claims Tool asks students to respond to various texts to capture details and their thinking, as well as to identify how texts connect with one another.
  • As part of Unit 1’s final assignments, students are asked to write a multi-paragraph “explanation of something you have come to understand by reading and examining your text.” Students are expected to use one of three final texts and present and explain the central idea, use quotations and paraphrases to support the central idea, explain how the central idea is connected to the author’s purpose, and explain a new understanding.

Materials include a number of writing opportunities that span the entire year. Each final writing task includes formal, usually multi-paragraph essay writing. Students also write throughout each unit in preparation for these final writing tasks. These shorter, informal writing tasks can be found in the form of independent writing, writing text-based explanations, and writing EBCs in pairs.

  • In Unit 3, the curriculum provides a Student Making Evidence-based Claims Literacy Skills Checklist. This checklist allows the student to assess skills in three areas: Reading, Thinking, and Writing. Various checklists also appear in the other units and are modified to the skills being assessed in that unit.
  • Unit 4 is focused on building students’ proficiency with research skills. The use of a common source set supports a teacher’s ability to track students’ progress while modeling research skills. Students practice research skills throughout the unit with guidance from the teacher and from peer reviews. The writing conducted fits into two products: (1) a research portfolio of sources and findings and (2) a reflective research narrative. As a third, optional, writing product, the material recommend students maintain a reflective journal throughout the process.

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Materials include frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support sophisticated analysis, argumentation, and synthesis.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 meet the criteria for materials including frequent opportunities for research-based and evidence-based writing to support analysis, argument, synthesis and/or evaluation of information, supports, claims.

Instructional materials include frequent opportunities for students to write evidence-based claims relating to various topics and in response to text sets organized around the topic. Students are asked to analyze text, develop claims, and support those claims with evidence from the text. Tools, such as Questioning Path Tools, Approaching Text Tools, and Analyzing Details Tools, are provided to help students analyze and organize text to be used in later writing. The checklists and rubrics also include criteria for Using Evidence which asks students to support explanations/claims with evidence from the text by using accurate quotations, paraphrases, and references. Opportunities for writing to sources include informal writing within the units and formal writing in the form of culminating tasks.

All units provide students the opportunity to engage with texts to compose evidence-based writing for the purpose of research, argumentative, or explanatory/informational writing. Optional activities are provided for the teacher to expand and include more writing opportunities and modes.

Texts include a variety of sources (print and digital). Materials meet the grade level demands of the standards listed for this indicator.

Materials provide frequent opportunities across the school year for students to learn, practice, and apply writing using evidence. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 4, Activity 4, students are tasked with writing a multi-paragraph essay with a central idea and explain how it is developed using text-based evidence gathered in previous activities with the Analyzing Details Tool.
  • In Unit 2, Questioning Path Tools connect the reading to the writing students will do and the Deepening portion of this tool is strongly text dependent.
  • In Unit 2, the Evidence-Based Claims (EBC) Tool helps students find evidence in the text to support the claims they are creating by providing a place for students to record the details they find. This tool is tied to the targeted Literacy Skill of Using Evidence. Part 1, Activity 4 tasks the teacher with modeling the Forming Evidence-Based Claims handout from the Literacy Toolbox. It is designed for students to “first note details that stand out” and then relate details to each other, explaining any connection between the text and another text, or the text and a reader’s experience. This activity leads students to begin developing claims that are supported by evidence. It is modeled first by teachers using the Supporting Evidence-Based Claims Tool.
  • Unit 4 connects reading with writing by asking student to draw connections among key details and ideas within and across texts.

Writing opportunities are focused around students’ analyses and claims developed from reading closely and working with texts and sources to provide supporting evidence. Instructional notes are very specific with regards to helping students develop clear claims beginning with the definition of what a claim is and the explanation that a claim is only as strong as the evidence that supports it. Examples include, but are not limited to:

  • In Unit 1, Part 2, Activity 5, “students write a short paragraph explaining their analysis of the text and reference (or list) specific textual details.” Students are asked to write a short paragraph of several clear, coherent, and complete sentences. Students are to explain their analysis of Text 5.
  • In Unit 2, Part 5, Activity 5, “Students use a criteria-based checklist of feedback from peers in a collaborative review process to revise and improve their evidence-based claim essays.” Once students have completed the first drafts of their essays, they will work in writing groups to complete two review and revision cycles. The first cycle focuses on the essay’s content or on evaluating and improving the content or quality of claims and evidence; the second cycle focuses on improving organization and expression and clarity of their writing.

Materials provide opportunities that build students’ writing skills over the course of the school year. The teacher edition shares the Unit Design and Instructional Sequence: students are presented with a topic and “begin learning to read closely by first encountering visual images, which they scan for details, and then multimedia texts that reinforce the skills of identifying details and making text-based observations from those details.” (xxxviii). Therefore, students are provided an opportunity to learn about the topic before exposure to the more complex grade-level texts and then move forward to more challenging texts. Writing opportunities are varied over the course of the year. Examples of varied writing opportunities that build students' skills over the course of the year include, but are not limited to:

  • Unit 1 focuses on increasing students’ abilities to read for detail and increase understanding of the text. Most of the frequent writing opportunities occur in completing the Literacy Toolbox handouts. The guiding questions provided by the handouts are text-dependent and require students to reference details from the text to support their understanding and explanation about the central idea of the text. This is not necessarily evidence-based; students are merely focused on explanatory or informational writing in this unit. In Unit 1, Part 1, Activity 1, students are introduced to the topic through an analogy from another field.
  • All the activities in Unit 1, build to a two-stage culminating activity. Students will do the following: 1) Analyze one of three related texts and draft a multi-paragraph explanation of their text, and 2) Lead and participate in a comparative discussion about the three texts. Students are writing informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content. In addition, students are drawing evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
  • Unit 4, Part 5, Activity 4 is an optional activity for students to compose a multimedia presentation or formal essay to communicate a perspective. The materials suggest various opportunities for writing modes to be addressed using EBCs--informational presentation, a research-based explanation, a thesis-driven argument, or Op-Ed piece. The summative writing assignment for the unit is a reflective research narrative. This unit incorporates much of the expectations for this indicator.

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Materials include instruction and practice of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application in context.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 9 partially meet the criteria for materials including instruction of the grammar and conventions/language standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application context.

The materials present tables in the initial overview of each unit and sub-sections outlining the alignment to Common Core State Standards. The materials are focused on select standards for the reading, writing, and speaking and listening standards and do not state a direct alignment to the language standards. However, the materials do provide opportunities for students to demonstrate some, but not all, language standards. This occurs in the form of reading and demonstrating understanding of the text and intentions of word choices by the authors. The provided rubrics direct students and teachers to expect standard English language conventions and punctuation to be demonstrated in writing assignments. However, the materials are not as specific for these expectations as specified by the Common Core State Standards for language conventions. The materials do not clearly provide opportunities for students to practice all language and grammar expectations outlined by national college-and-career readiness standards.

The materials promote and build students’ ability to apply conventions and other aspects of language within their own writing. Instructional materials provide opportunities for students to grow their fluency language standards through practice and application. The materials do not include explicit instruction of all grammar and conventions standards for Grade 9 and do not include Conventions of Standard English, Knowledge of Language, or Vocabulary Acquisition and Use as specific CCSS Anchor Standards Targeted in Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies Units. Evidence to support this rationale include, but are not limited to:

  • In the Developing Core Literacy Proficiencies: User Guide, the instructional materials provide documentation for the Alignment of Targeted CCSS with OE Skills and Habits. Reading standards 1-10, writing standards 1-9, and SL.1 are included. No language standards are listed.
  • In Literacy Skills, “Using Conventions” explains “effective sentence structure, grammar, punctuation, and spelling to express ideas and achieve writing and speaking purpose" including “writing and speaking clearly so others can understand claims and ideas.” In Unit 1, the Targeted Literacy Skills state that students will “learn about, practice, develop, and demonstrate foundational skills necessary to read closely, to participate actively in text-centered questioning and discussion, and to write text-based explanations." They align the unit goals with CCSS ELA Literacy W.4—produce clear and coherent writing.
  • There are no opportunities for direct instruction of grammar and conventions/language standards. For example, in Unit 1, Part 4, Activity 4, instructions in the teacher’s edition state, “students’ writing can be reviewed in relationship to the specific grade-level expectations for writing standard 2 (explanatory writing), especially if students have been working on writing explanations in previous units and are reading for more formal feedback.” Within that standard, the teacher’s edition lists items a-f of which d states “use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to manage, the complexity of the topic”; and e states “establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing.” No specific instruction for these skills has been attended to in the materials.
  • On the Attending to Details handout, under “analyzing details” there are some specific questions under “Language and Structure” for students to keep in mind, such as “Authors use language or tone to establish a mood” and “Authors use a specific organization to enhance a point or add meaning” but while this tool may make students more aware of those moves/rhetorical choices within the writing they are reading, they are not linked to instruction of grammar and conventions.
  • Unit 2 does not provide the instruction or opportunities necessary for students to master the use of parallel structure or the use of various types of phrases and clauses to convey specific meaning or add variety to writing or presentation. CCSS.ELA.Literacy.L.9-10.2 requires that students demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. Unit 2 does not provide the instruction or opportunities necessary for students to master the use of a semicolon to link independent clauses or the use of a colon to introduce a list. Spelling is also not addressed.
  • Unit 3 states that it provides “several opportunities for students to apply and develop literacy skills,” including using conventions. However, instruction does not directly support this. For example, in Unit 3, Part 3, Activity 3, the work with developing an evidence-based claim includes five steps:
    • Reflecting on how one has arrived at the claim,
    • Breaking the claim into parts,
    • Organizing supporting evidence in a logical sequence,
    • Anticipating what an audience will need to know in order to understand the claim,
    • Planning a line of reasoning that will substantiate the claim.

All instruction and accompanying tools are in support of practicing, developing, and writing EBCs. For example, in Unit 3, Part 4, Activity 8, “Using Peer Feedback to Revise a Written EBC, peers give feedback on clarity of the claim, the defensibility of the claim, the use of evidence, and the organization. No feedback is listed for conventions.

  • For Unit 4, the instructional materials provide guidance on How This Unit Aligns with CCSS for ELA and Literacy; primary alignments include CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.9-10.7-9, CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.1, CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.2-5. Supporting alignments include CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.1-4, 6, and 9. No language standards are included. Unit 4 does not provide the instruction or opportunities necessary for students to master the use of parallel structure or the use of various types of phrases and clauses to convey specific meaning or add variety to writing or presentation (CCSS.ELA.Literacy.L.9-10.1.A-B). Unit 4 does not provide the instruction or opportunities necessary for students to master the use of a semicolon to link independent clauses or the use of a colon to introduce a list. Spelling is also not addressed (CCSS.ELA.Literacy.L.9-10.2.A-C).
  • Unit 5 culminates in writing an argumentative essay and listed in the targeted literacy skills is “using effective sentence structure, grammar, punctuation, and spelling to express ideas and achieve writing and speaking purposes. In Unit 5, Part 1, Activity 5, there is a formative assessment as a building block for students’ final argument where they write a 1-3 paragraph explanation of their multi-part claim. It is supposed to “represent their best thinking and clearest writing, but beyond that indicator, there is no built-in instruction or sense of how that looks with regards to grammar and conventions.
  • In Unit 5, Activity 1, Part 5, students work on strengthening writing collaboratively. The teacher’s edition references Writing with Style: Conversations on the Art of Writing by John R Trimble. One of his four essentials is “Use confident language—vigorous verbs, strong nouns, and assertive phrasing.” In the remaining Activities 2-5, there is focus on the following areas:
    • Content: Ideas and Information,
    • Organization: Unity, Coherence, and logical sequence,
    • Support: Integrating and citing evidence,
    • Additional Rounds of Focused review and revision.

While grammar and convention mistakes and missteps could be picked up in these rounds of revision, the materials do not include any direct lessons or instructions.