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8th Grade - Gateway 1

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Gateway Ratings Summary

Text Quality

Text Quality & Complexity and Alignment to Standards Components
Gateway 1 - Partially Meets Expectations
86%
Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality
19 / 20
Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence
12 / 16

Criterion 1.1: Text Complexity and Quality

19 / 20

Texts are worthy of students' time and attention: texts are of quality and are rigorous, meeting the text complexity criteria for each grade. Materials support students' advancing toward independent reading.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 include texts that are of high quality and engaging to students. The text sets reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards, offering a range and volume of reading from which students can learn. These texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative and qualitative analysis and relationship to their associated student task. The materials include guidance about the inclusion of and rationale for texts and their placement. Although most texts fall within the appropriate range for text complexity for Grade 8, the range of complexity is inconsistent considering the work over a whole school year's worth of instruction. There are limited and inconsistent supports to ensure all students will be able to comprehend the materials at grade level.

Indicator 1a

4 / 4

Anchor texts are of publishable quality and worthy of especially careful reading and consider a range of student interests.

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 8 meet the expectations for anchor texts being of publishable quality and worthy of careful reading. The collections include well-known, published, and diverse authors such as Edgar Allan Poe, Frederick Douglass, Walt Whitman, Elie Wiesel, Ray Bradbury, Stephen Crane, Louisa May Alcott, Gary Soto, Sherman Alexie, and Anne Frank. Included non-fiction texts are also from well-known sources such as the New York Times.

The anchor texts and supplementary texts consider a range of topics that would be relevant and of interest to Grade 8 students. Text collections in this program explore the immigrant experiences of young adults from the Middle East and Haiti, as well as the experiences of Hmong immigrants. Another collection explores the “thrill of horror” and asks students to compare a classic horror short story to a film version; they also read an adaptation of Frankenstein in the form of a poem. The topic of adulthood is examined through a collection of texts directly connected to this age group: the driving age, appropriate use of cell phones and their influence on teen driving, and the influence of media. All of these topics would be of interest to Grade 8 students. Anchor texts at this grade level are well-crafted, content-rich, and engaging.

The collections include many writing types including the following: short stories, poems, myths, graphic stories, speeches, informational texts, memoirs, media such as newscasts, and online sources. Anchor texts are included for each collection, and close reading pieces are identified.

Some representative examples of texts that demonstrate high quality include:

  • Collection 1: “Culture and Belonging”
    • Short Story: “My Favorite Chaperone,” by Jean Davies Okimoto
    • Memoir: “from The Latehomecomer,” by Kao Kalia Yang – from Minnesota Public Radio website – “In 2009 The Latehomecomer won two Minnesota Book Awards—for memoir/creative nonfiction, and the Reader's Choice Award. It was the first book to ever win two awards.
  • Collection 2: “The Thrill of Horror”
    • Edgar Allan Poe's short story: "The Tell-Tale Heart"
    • Informational text: "What Is the Horror Genre?" - a literary criticism that helps students move beyond simply liking or disliking a story. This text guides students to analyze elements of a text that are often evident in quality literature.
  • Collection 3: “The Move Toward Freedom”
    • Autobiography: “from Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave,” by Frederick Douglass – a well known historical piece studied in many schools across the country.
    • Historical Fiction: “The Drummer Boy of Shiloh,” by Ray Bradbury, whose work has been included in four Best American Short Story collections.
  • Collection 4: “Approaching Adulthood”
    • The short story, "Marigolds," by Eugenia Collier
    • "When Do Kids Become Adults?" provides background knowledge that gets students to think deeply and to form or solidify their beliefs about their lives, both currently and in their not-too-distant future.
  • Collection 5: “Anne Frank’s Legacy”
    • Drama: The Diary of Anne Frank, by Frances Goodrich and Albert Hackett (Pulitzer Prize-winning play)
  • Collection 6: “The Value of Work”
    • The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, by Mark Twain offers an ironic and humorous adolescent perspective on the topic of work.
    • “One Last Time,” a memoir by well-known author Gary Soto, explores the value and hardship Soto experienced while becoming a published writer.
    • Students also read two argumentative articles about teen employment in “Teens Need Jobs, Not Just Cash” and “Teens at Work.”

Indicator 1b

4 / 4

Materials reflect the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards at each grade level.

The instructional materials reviewed meet the criteria for reflecting the distribution of text types and genres required by the standards for Grade 8. The materials include an appropriate distribution of literary and informational texts that are aligned to the suggested balance in the CCSS for Grade 8. There are 29 literary and 25 informational texts distributed throughout the six collections. The whole of the program does support students' access to many strong informational pieces of text including media text such as a public service announcement, an advertisement, and a film.

The following are examples of the variety of texts found in three collections within these instructional materials:

Collection 2, “The Thrill of Horror,” contains eight texts: two literary texts, three informational texts in the Collections Student Edition; one informational and two literary texts are located in the Close Reader.

  • Literary Texts:
    • "The Tell-Tale Heart," short story by Edgar Allan Poe
    • “Outsiders,” short story by H.P. Lovecraft
    • “The Monkey’s Paw,” short story by W.W. Jacobs
    • “Frankenstein,” a poem by Edward Field
  • Informational Texts:
    • “Scary Tales,” essay by Jackie Torrence
    • “The Monkey’s Paw,” film by Ricky Lewis Jr.
    • "What Is the Horror Genre?" literary criticism informational text by Sharon A. Russell
    • “Man-made Monsters,” essay by Daniel Cohen

Collection 3, “The Move Toward Freedom,” contains eight texts: three informational texts and two literary texts are located in The Collections Student Edition; two informational texts and one literary text are located in the Close Reader.

  • Literary Texts:
    • “My Friend Douglass,” historical writing by Russell Freedman
    • “The Drummer Boy of Shiloh,” historical fiction by Ray Bradbury
    • “A Mystery of Heroism,” short story by Stephen Crane
    • O Captain! My Captain!” poem by Walt Whitman
  • Informational Texts:
    • “Bloody Times: The Funeral of Abraham Lincoln and the Manhunt for Jefferson Davis,” history writing by James L. Swanson
    • “Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass,” an autobiography by Frederick Douglass
    • “Harriet Tubman: Conductor on the Underground Railroad,” biography by Ann Petry
    • “Civil War Journal,” journal entries by Louisa May Alcott

Collection 4, “Approaching Adulthood,” contains twelve texts: five informational texts and three literary texts are located in The Collections Student Edition; one informational text and three literary texts are located in the Close Reader.

  • Literary Text:
    • "Marigolds," short story by Eugenia Collie
    • “The Whistle," short story by Anne Estevis
    • “Hanging Fire,” poem by Audre Lorde
    • “Teenagers,” poem by Pat Mora
    • “Identity,” poem by Julio Noboa Polanco
    • “Hard on the Gas,” poem by Janet S. Wong
  • Informational Text:
    • "When Do Kids Become Adults?" informational text from the New York Times
    • "Much Too Young to Work So Hard," historical informational text by Naoki Tanaka
    • "Is 16 Too Young to Drive a Car?” article by Naoki Tanaka
    • “Fatal Car Crash Drop for 16 year-olds, Rise in Older Teens,” article by Allison Aubrey
    • “Your Phone Can Wait,” public service announcement
    • “Driving Distracted,” poster

Indicator 1c

4 / 4

Texts have the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, and relationship to their associated student task.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 meet the expectations of texts having the appropriate level of complexity for the grade according to quantitative analysis, qualitative analysis, and relationship to their associated student task. The collections at the beginning of the year contain more texts below the indicated quantitative band, but by the middle of the year, there are less texts below the band and more in the specified range. While there are some texts that are unquantifiable or fall outside of the grade band, often they are balanced by more rigorous tasks or sophisticated focuses.

The materials for Grade 8 include texts that have quantitative ranges from the 700's and span through the school year to the 900’s-1000's to texts with a high quantitative measure in the 1200’s-1400's. The texts have appropriately rigorous qualitative features throughout the materials. The information below shows the quantitative measure for different collections.

  • Collection 1: 700 - 1220
  • Collection 2: 730 - 1030
  • Collection 3: 980 - 1010
  • Collection 4: 1070 - 1440
  • Collection 5: 1020 - 1410
  • Collection 6: 1040 - 1310

Some examples of the texts in the program that represent how the materials meet the expectations of this indicator include the following:

  • “My Favorite Chaperone” is below the quantitative level of the span at 790L; the task, write a summary, is fairly simple, but this seems acceptable due to it being the first text and task for the new school year. Two of the three close reading selections in this collection are in the band at 1010L.
  • The “Tell-Tale Heart” in Collection 2 is placed at a Lexile of 850 which is outside of band; however, this text’s qualitative analysis ranks Knowledge Demands as the highest in text complexity due to a “distinctively unfamiliar experience.” Language Conventionality and Structure also rank at second highest in complexity. These complex qualitative features would make it reasonable to find it in this collection. The second anchor text, a literary criticism, is within the grade span at 1030. Both of the close reader texts in this collection are at difficult Lexile levels outside the band in the 1200’s.
  • “Civil War Journal" in Collection 3 is above the grade span. The qualitative analysis indicates complexity in both language and knowledge demands. This could be challenging for 8th grade readers; however, it is placed toward the end of the collection. Students have been reading seven other texts, within the grade band, on the topic of the Civil War, so they should have quite a bit of background knowledge that will support them during their reading of this text.

Indicator 1d

4 / 4

Materials support students' increasing literacy skills over the course of the school year. (Series of texts should be at a variety of complexity levels appropriate for the grade band.)

The Grade 8 instructional materials fully meet the expectations for materials supporting students’ increasing literacy skills over the course of the school year. As the year progresses, students are exposed to texts of more challenging readability levels. Consistent supports such as text-dependent questions and emphases on vocabulary development are continued to support students' ability to access the increasing complexity of the texts. Series of texts, including anchor texts within the collections, include a variety of complexity levels appropriate for the grade band.

The following anchor texts represent the quantitative complexity of the collections:

Collection 1: 700 - 1220

  • Anchor Text Short Story, “My Favorite Chaperone” Lexile: 790
  • Anchor Text Memoir, “The Latehomecomer” Lexile: 940

Collection 2: 730- 1270

  • Anchor Text Short Story, "The Tell-Tale Heart" Lexile: 850
  • Anchor Text Literary Criticism, “What is the Horror Genre?” Lexile: 1030

Collection 3: 990 - 1480

  • Anchor Text Autobiography, “From Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass” Lexile: 970
  • Anchor Text Historical fiction, "The Drummer Boy of Shiloh” Lexile: 990

Collection 4: 800- 1440

  • Anchor Text Short Story, "Marigolds" Lexile: 1140 high end
  • Anchor Text Informational text, "When Do Kids Become Adults?" Lexile: 1440

Collection 5: 1020- 1410

  • Anchor Text Play, "The Diary of Anne Frank" (no Lexile level as this is a dramatization)

Collection 6: 790 - 1310

  • Anchor Text Novel excerpt, “The Adventures of Tom Sawyer” Lexile: 1040
  • Anchor Text Poems, “Chicago,” “Find Work,” “My Mother Enters the Work Force”

Collections 1 and 2 show one anchor text in each collection below the quantitative levels for the grade span; yet, the qualitative analysis and the required tasks shows that complexity of these lower level texts is still rigorous. “The Latecomer,” which has a readability level at the beginning of the grade span, requires students to write a research report about the Hmong people after reading the narrative. This task is connected to the topic of the text and requires some complex skills. This would make a slightly less complex text appropriate. In Collection 2, “The Tell-Tale Heart” is also below the quantitative measure, but the performance tasks asks students to write a narrative about the psychiatric state of this narrator. Students analyze the unreliable narrator from this story and complete a relatively challenging task. Another text in this collection, “What is the Horror Genre?” is at the appropriate quantitative complexity and is a literary criticism. This genre of writing may be unfamiliar to students and will add to the complexity. This text shows growing complexity.

Collection 3 shows the rise from the prior two collections in quantitative complexity with five of the seven texts at the required level of quantitative complexity. No texts are below the grade level and two texts are above. The anchor text is an autobiography of Frederick Douglass’s life, and students analyze the author’s craft in this text. Included in this collection are two biographies focusing on the lives of Harriet Tubman and Frederick Douglass. Students analyze the author’s craft and structure in these texts. These three texts demonstrate growing complexity.

Collection 4 includes four texts at the high end of the grade span quantitative complexity which would be appropriate for placement in a collection for this grade level. In addition, tasks in this collection have students reading arguments, debating topics in these arguments, and writing an argument. Complexity in both texts and tasks is evident.

Collections 5 and 6 contain anchor texts with an unquantifiable Lexile level or a Lexile level on the low end of the grade band. The Diary of Anne Frank ranks as more complex in both knowledge demands and levels of meaning/purpose adding to its complexity. Paired with this text is a literary criticism of Frank’s diary which is above the quantitative level. After reading The Diary of Anne Frank, the students will be better prepared to read a more difficult text. Tom Sawyer is also on the low end of the grade span, but it is paired with argument readings above the grade span on the topic of work.

Indicator 1e

2 / 2

Anchor texts and series of texts connected to them are accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 meet the criterion for anchor texts and texts connected to them being accompanied by a text complexity analysis and rationale for purpose and placement in the grade level. The beginning of each text selection in the Teacher’s manual includes the following features:

  • Why This Text?
  • Text Complexity Rubric

The Why This Text? feature includes a brief rationale for the placement of the piece as well as a Key Learning Objective. For example, in Collection 2, “What is the Horror Genre?” explains that this text provides a model of a literary criticism that analyzes literature and includes a breakdown of the analysis. The criticism also encourages students to think beyond whether or not they liked the text.

The Text Complexity Rubric is a graphic that provides an analysis of the qualitative, quantitative, and reader/task considerations for the complexity of each text. The quantitative provides the Lexile level of each selection while the qualitative analysis identifies all four elements that contribute to qualitative complexity: Levels of Meaning/Purpose, Structure, Language Conventionality and Clarity, and Knowledge Demands. The scale moves across the four points from an element of less complexity to an area of more complexity. Reader/Task Considerations indicate that these are teacher-determined and vary by student and text. It also indicates that the user look at the Text X-Ray feature for suggested reader and task considerations. To the left of the Text Complexity Rubric is a list of the core standards covered including, reading, writing, speaking and listening, and language.

The Text X-Ray feature referenced in the Reader/Task Considerations follows the text analysis. This provides additional support for all texts except texts identified as close readers. The Text X-Ray suggests possible supports a teacher could provide within the four areas of qualitative text complexity as well as Reader/Task considerations. For example, in Collection 1, “My Favorite Chaperone” identifies the Level of Meaning being fairly complex with a score of three out of four on the scale. The Text X-Ray suggests that teachers help students understand who characters in a story might be and explain that analyzing these characters can help a reader identify the theme of the short story. Teachers are instructed to tell the students that Maya is the character in this story. After reading the story, students use provided sentence frames to discuss the story. Examples of these sentence frames are included here:

  • Maya changes during the story by _______.
  • By the end of the story, Maya learns _______.
  • From Maya’s experiences, the author wants me to learn ________.

Indicator 1f

1 / 2

Anchor text(s), including support materials, provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading.

The materials for Grade 8 partially meet the criteria for anchor text(s), including support materials, and provide opportunities for students to engage in a range and volume of reading to achieve grade level reading. Over the year, students are provided with a wide variety of texts. The Instructional Overview found at the beginning of each collection clearly identifies the diversity of texts students will be reading within each collection. Below is an example showing the range and volume that can be found from three different collections at this grade level:

  • Collection 1: short stories, poems, essay, research writing, and memoir
  • Collection 3: autobiography, biography, historical fiction, historical writing, poetry, short story, and journal entries
  • Collection 6: novel excerpt, memoir, arguments, poetry, biography, short story, and graphic story

While students read a variety of texts, it is unclear how students are supported towards independence. Instructions within the Teacher’s Edition do not explain how the entirety of a text is to be read: silently, by the teacher, or aloud as a whole class. Therefore, this decision is left up to the teacher with little guidance from the program. Students may never read the texts within the collections independently.

Each collection contains a feature titled Independent Reading that precedes the Performance Tasks at the end of each collection. This feature suggests digital resources students can use to find out more about the theme or topic of the collection. However, little support is provided, and not all suggested tasks may support independence. The following is an example of this:

  • Collection 1 suggests student read “The Law of Life,” by Jack London, then asks the teacher to read the story aloud to students and question the students about the reading.

This page also includes a Creating an Independent Reading Program. This feature suggests ways for teachers to help students increase independent reading, but no system is provided for monitoring students' use of the techniques suggested here. Additionally, a teacher may choose to skip this activity.

Criterion 1.2: Alignment to the Standards with Tasks and Questions Grounded in Evidence

12 / 16

Materials provide opportunities for rich and rigorous evidence-based discussions and writing about texts to build strong literacy skills.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 include some connections between texts and tasks. Some written questions, tasks, and assignments are text-specific and require students to engage with the text directly and to draw on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the texts. This includes writing instruction, which engages students in writing across multiple genres and modes over the course of the school year. Process writing practice and opportunities are embedded in each part of the school year. Although some tasks and questions connect to the texts, the larger culminating tasks inconsistently connect to the preceding question sequences and the texts being studied. On-demand writing opportunities are inconsistently supported over the course of the school year. Speaking and listening activities, while mostly evidence-focused, do not offer comprehensive support for accountability and using academic vocabulary in context. Implementation support for speaking and listening is minimal. Language instruction for grammar and conventions is present and organized, but infrequently embedded in context of the texts or writing being produced.

Indicator 1g

2 / 2

Most questions, tasks, and assignments are text-dependent, requiring students to engage with the text directly (drawing on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text).

The materials reviewed for Grade 8 fully meet the criterion for most questions, tasks, and assignments being text-dependent/specific, requiring students to engage with the text directly and to draw on textual evidence to support both what is explicit as well as valid inferences from the text. The Teacher’s Edition includes text-dependent questions in the margin for the teacher to use with the students. Literature selections ask students text-dependent questions about story elements: plot, character, setting, and conflict motivations. In addition, questions require students to make inferences, analyze language, and determine the theme of the selection. Informational texts include text-dependent questions regarding text structure, text features, and support for authors’ claims. Students are also asked to determine facts and opinions, author’s purpose, and author’s tone.

Examples representing the use of text-dependent questions and activities include but are not limited to the following:

  • In Collection 5, The Diary of Anne Frank: Reread lines 1863-1872. How does the setting of Scene 5 complete the structure of the play? (page 351)
  • In Collection 5, After Auschwitz: Ask students to reread lines 4-6 to identify the repetition. What is the impact of this repetition? (page 380)
  • The Performance Task following the reading of "When Do Kids Become Adults?" from Collection 4 asks students to hold a debate regarding the issues presented in the text. They are to take a stance, make a claim, include evidence from the text and their own research, create visuals, and conduct the debate. Finally, students evaluate the evidence and reasoning presented by each side.
  • The Performance Task following the reading of the drama "The Diary of Anne Frank" from Collection 5 asks students to analyze three characters from the play using references from the text to think deeply about their comparison of characters. (page 354)

The Close Reader offers multiple text-focused tasks. The Reader asks students to write after the reading selection and then engage in a feature called “Dig Deeper," which supports students in revisiting texts.

Indicator 1h

2 / 2

Sets of high-quality sequences of text-dependent questions and tasks build to a culminating task that integrates skills (may be writing, speaking, or a combination).

The instructional materials reviewed for Grade 8 meet the criteria of providing sets of high-quality sequences of text-dependent questions and tasks which build to a culminating task that integrates skills (may be writing, speaking, or a combination). Each collection concludes with culminating tasks called performance tasks. These tasks require students to incorporate reading, writing, and speaking skills to complete the assignment and provide a diverse means of delivery. Each performance task is centered on the topic that students have been reading about in the collection and requires students to use knowledge or information they gained through interacting with those texts.

Throughout Grade 8, the students will complete the following performance tasks:

  • Write informative essays
  • Write narratives
  • Write arguments
  • Create a multimedia campaign
  • Participate in a collaborative discussion

Below are examples of how questions and tasks prior to the culminating activity are coherent and help prepare the student to complete these tasks:

Collection 1

  • Performance Task A asks students to write an informative essay about immigration. The text-dependent questions that accompany the short story “My Favorite Chaperone” contribute to students’ understanding of the immigrant experience. The following questions help students consider how language and cultural differences impact the immigrant experience:
    • Read to identify the difference in customs between Kazakhstan and America that causes a problem. How do you know that Maya and Nurzhan understand this difference better than their mother? (page 14)
    • Have students reread lines 195-210. What conclusions can be drawn from this evidence about immigrants’ attitudes toward language? (page 48)
  • Tasks within this collection also support the culminating activity. Within this collection, students research to discover from where recent immigrants have come, write a short research report about the Hmong people, and work in small groups to create a video of personal stories.

Collection 3

  • Performance Task A asks students to participate in a collaborative discussion to engage in dialogue regarding the ways people responded to the Civil War or the struggle for freedom. Students read a variety of texts about different people’s reactions during this time. These texts include responses by Frederick Douglass, Harriet Tubman, Abraham Lincoln, Jefferson Davis, and Walt Whitman. Activities following these selections ask students to consider reactions. After reading "Harriet Tubman: Conductor on the Underground Railroad," students create a speech that introduces Harriet Tubman into a Hall of Fame. They examine her motivations and personality and consider what characteristics or actions make Tubman a hero. How did she impact the freedom movement? After reading "Bloody Times: The Funeral of Abraham Lincoln and the Manhunt for Jefferson Davis," students compare Abraham Lincoln and Jefferson Davis. They use a Venn Diagram to analyze each individual and write a character sketch of each.

Indicator 1i

1 / 2

Materials provide frequent opportunities and protocols for evidencebased discussions that encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax. (May be small group and all-class.)

The instructional materials for Grade 8 partially meet the criterion that materials provide frequent opportunities and protocols for evidence-based discussions that encourage the modeling and use of academic vocabulary and syntax. The materials provide opportunities for evidence-based discussions with partners and small groups. After each reading within the collection, the student version and Teacher’s Edition include two collaborative discussion prompts. Both require textual evidence to support an opinion; however, minimal teacher support is provided for instruction. Teachers are not provided guidance regarding how to strategically group students nor how to identify struggling students. Each collaborative discussion opportunity concludes by having the teacher ask students to share their conversation with the whole class. No answer key or preferred responses are included. The Close Reader and Analyzing the Text questions include frequent opportunities for evidence-based discussion through the use of text-dependent questions. While possible student responses are provided with these prompts, there are no supports regarding how teachers use these questions to facilitate student discussions. Therefore, teachers might not utilize these as conversation prompts. They may have students respond individually or within writing. Additionally, there are no teacher guidelines on how to monitor these questions to ensure students’ understanding.

The question below is an example of an “Analyzing the Text” question:

  • Reread lines 7-12. Does the speaker share the villagers view that the monster is evil and dangerous? Support your answer with explicit textual evidence.

Discussion opportunities are also structured around academic vocabulary. Academic vocabulary is identified at the beginning of each collection in the “Plan” section. The “Plan” feature identifies opportunities for students to use the targeted vocabulary in Collaborative Discussion activities following each reading selection and Analyzing the Text Questions within the selections. The Think-Pair-Share strategy is regularly involved in the Analyzing the Text Questions. While these provide opportunities to practice the language, implementation of the strategy is not explicitly supported with guidance for misunderstandings nor with accountability. Below are two examples of this activity:

  • Think-Pair-Share - Have students turn to a partner to discuss the following questions. Guide students to include the academic vocabulary words access and demonstrate. Ask volunteers to share their response with the class.
    • Think about the changes that Douglass describes in his mistress. Which of her actions demonstrate how slavery affected her?
    • Discuss the process of Douglass’s self-education. How did having access to certain types of reading materials affect Douglass’s ideas and his development? (page 145)
  • Think-Pair-Share - Have students turn to a partner to discuss the following questions. Guide students to include the academic vocabulary words communicate and liberation in their responses. Ask volunteers to share their response with the class.
    • How do the residents of the Annex feel about their liberation each evening after the workers in the rooms below go home?
    • How does the arrival of evening change the way the “family” members are able to communicate with each other? (page 292)

While the Grade 8 materials provide opportunities for evidence-based discussions and use of academic vocabulary, the materials lack instructional support for implementation protocols, assessment protocols, and ways to identify students struggling with speaking and listening skills.

Indicator 1j

1 / 2

Materials support students' listening and speaking about what they are reading and researching (including presentation opportunities) with relevant follow-up questions and supports.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 partially meet the criteria for materials supporting students’ listening and speaking about what they are reading and researching (including presentation opportunities) with relevant follow-up questions and supports. The instructional materials provide opportunities for students in this grade to practice speaking and listening relating to the topics and texts they are reading and researching within the collections. However, there is a lack of teacher guidance to effectively support the implementation of these skills into the assignments.

Within the collections are repeated opportunities for “Collaborative Discussion.” The general instructions for this activity ask teachers to remind students that in order to discuss topics effectively and make group decisions the following should happen:

  • Students need to be prepared by reading or taking notes.
  • Students should state and support their own opinions and listen and respect others’ claims.
  • Students should ask questions to help connect ideas and answer questions with relevant observations and ideas.
  • Acknowledge and incorporate new ideas and information into the discussion.

While these are good guidelines, there are no models, examples or language frames that might support students' application of these techniques. (page 150a)

Some speaking and listening components within assignments provided in the student and teacher edition include representative examples. In some cases, instruction on classroom implementation is either minimal or absent, and in others, there is a minimal connection to the texts being studied. The following examples are representative of speaking and listening assignments that demonstrate minimal or no instructional supports:

  • The text-based performance task following “The Drummer Boy of Shiloh” asks students to give an informative report after they research the Battle of Shiloh. The task asks students to discover how many people died as well as the significance of the battle today. Then students should discuss how their research impacts their reaction to specific portions of the text. The teacher’s guide suggests working in pairs or small groups, organizing ideas to show connections between the identified parts of the story and the students’ research, and to use eye contact and clear pronunciation. This is minimal guidance for the presentation of research.
  • In Collection 3, Performance Task A requires students to participate in a collaborative panel discussion to discuss ways people responded to the Civil War or the struggle for freedom. Participants are expected to present their own view with support, respond politely to other panel members, evaluate other panel members’ contributions, and offer a summary of the discussion by synthesizing ideas. Many of these skills, such as a synthesis summary, are not explicitly taught within this assignment or collection. Students are not instructed how to evaluate other members’ responses or respectfully provide a differing viewpoint. If students struggle, teachers are asked to give students an opportunity to view a video of a panel discussion. However, no model is provided.
  • Performance Task B requires that students write a literary analysis of “The Drummer Boy of Shiloh.” Students may choose to provide an oral presentation of this analysis as an oral report, but no guidelines or support is provided.

Indicator 1k

1 / 2

Materials include a mix of on-demand and process writing (e.g. multiple drafts, revisions over time) and short, focused projects, incorporating digital resources where appropriate.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 partially meet the criteria for materials including a mix of on-demand and process writing (e.g. multiple drafts, revisions over time) and short, focused projects, incorporating digital resources where appropriate. The Teacher and Student editions include process writing tasks. Only one on-demand writing task is found in the Performance Assessment booklet. Extended writings, found at the end of each collection, ask students to revise and/or edit and provide rubrics and student checklists. The shorter writing opportunities which occur after the readings do not require students to revise and edit and do not provide rubrics or checklists.

In the Performance Assessment booklet students encounter the following writing tasks:

  • Unit 1 Argumentative Essay
  • Unit 2 Informative Essay
  • Unit 3 Literary Analysis
  • Unit 4 Mixed practice with on-demand writing

On-demand writing is found mostly in the Performance Assessment consumable. However, the teacher’s edition of the textbook does not identify how to incorporate the Performance Assessment with the textbook, and the readings do not align with the topics of the collections.

Extended writing opportunities are found at the end of each collection. The following are the types of writing tasks included at this grade level: write an informative essay, write a personal narrative, write an argument, write three literary analyses, and research and write an informative essay. Students write in an organizational structure of Plan, Write, Revise, and Present. Within these Performance Tasks, there are opportunities for students to revise. Below is an example of an opportunity to Revise:

  • In Collection 3, students write a Literary Analysis. They “revise” this by reviewing a chart with a partner or a group of peers and using the chart to review their draft. The chart guides students to check for the following:
    • Clarity of the thesis statement
    • The use of background information
    • Analysis supporting the details
    • Clear organization of ideas
    • A conclusion that summarizes main points and provides insights

Students revise, but there are no opportunities for editing. According to the CCSS, editing for conventions should demonstrate a command of Language standards 1-3 up to and including grade 8. Nowhere in any of the Collections are students asked to edit their writing for conventions.

Smaller writing tasks within the collections range from notes to one to four paragraphs and a couple of pages. Writings include a summary, narratives, explanation, reports, literary analyses, informative report, argument, analyses, and a compare and contrast essay. Minimal support is provided in these activities for both teacher and student. No rubrics or checklists are provided. No model writing is provided. In addition, some of the writings are too unsupported to fully meet the standards. Below are examples that represent this:

  • In Collection 2, after “Tell-Tale Heart,” students write a narrative about the evaluation of the narrator by a mental health expert using details from the text. The teacher’s edition indicates that this meets W.8.9.a. “Analyze character types from myths, traditional stories or religious works … describing how the material is rendered new.” However, the connection here is weak.
  • Collection 3 involves students writing an informative essay and creating a poster that compares and contrasts Lincoln and Davis. Students create a Venn diagram to identify traits and then write a brief character sketch of each man under the identified circle. Standard 8.2 is identified but this activity is too brief and unstructured to be considered an informative essay.

Digital resources are limited within these tasks. The writing activity that follows “The Monkey’s Paw” from Collection 2 is identified as a media activity. Students work with a partner to create a storyboard for a film to retell the story. Although it is identified as a media activity, it does not include any digital resources to complete this task.

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Materials provide opportunities for students to address different text types of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 meet the criteria for materials providing opportunities for students to address different text types of writing that reflect the distribution required by the standards. Materials provide multiple opportunities across the school year for students to write in different genres that reflect the distribution required by the standards. The students write arguments, informative texts, and narratives. Writing opportunities occur within collections in which students write shorter process pieces following texts within the collection and in many of the Performance Tasks at the end of each collection. Most of the writing tasks are connected to texts and text sets.

Examples of different writing opportunities in the materials include:

Shorter Process Writing found at the end of texts within Collections:

  • Summaries
  • Narratives
  • Explanations
  • Reports
  • Literary analyses
  • Informative reports
  • Arguments

Despite a wide range of writing tasks, only two narrative writing opportunities are offered.

Extended writing projects in performance tasks at the end of the Collections include:

  • Informative essays
  • Personal narrative
  • Arguments
  • Literary analyses
  • Research

The extended writings of the collections’ performance tasks are weighted more heavily towards argument with only one narrative included.

While the program does provide opportunities for the students to write to the requirements of the standards, there is little support for teachers or students to monitor their progress. Within the shorter writing tasks, neither teachers nor students are provided with rubrics, checklists, exemplars, or model texts. Culminating Performance Tasks offer a little more support by adding a brief excerpt of a mentor text from the collection, a student checklist, and a rubric. However, teachers would need to implement their own system to help students monitor their growth throughout all writing tasks.

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Materials include frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support careful analyses, well-defended claims, and clear information.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 meet the criterion that materials include frequent opportunities for evidence-based writing to support careful analyses, well-defended claims, and clear information. Materials provide students with sufficient opportunities to learn, practice, and apply writing using evidence. Students are asked to analyze texts, create claims, and include clear information about their writing topics. Materials provide opportunities to build and reinforce students’ writing abilities over the course of the school year.

Directions included with writing tasks require students to use evidence from texts read within the collection as well as texts researched outside of the collections. Application of these skills are required and evident within shorter writing assignments included in the collections as well as in the Performance Tasks at the end of each collection.

Examples include but are not limited to the following:

  • Collection 2: Students write a literary analysis essay about one of the fictional horror stories in the collection and must use the criteria for horror explained in the collection's “What is the Horror Genre,” by Sharon A. Russell.
  • Collection 3: Students write a literary analysis essay that discusses the symbolism in “The Drummer Boy of Shiloh,” from the collection.
  • Collection 4: Students write an argument using evidence from two arguments they read regarding teen driving, “Is 16 Too Young to Drive a Car?” and “Fatal Car Crashes Drop for 16-Year-Olds, Rise for Older Teens."
  • Collection 5: After reading “Anne Frank: The Book, the Life, the Afterlife," students write an analysis where they decide if Prose has made a convincing argument or not. Students must analyze the argument, document Prose’s claims and supporting evidence, determine if the evidence is relevant and sufficient, and write their analysis by stating their view and supporting it with evidence derived from that text.

Overall:

  • Materials provide frequent opportunities across the school year for students to learn, practice, and apply writing using evidence.
  • Writing opportunities are focused on student analyses and claims developed from reading closely and working with sources.
  • Materials provide opportunities that build students’ writing skills over the course of the school year.

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Materials include explicit instruction of the grammar and conventions standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application both in and out of context.

The instructional materials for Grade 8 partially meet the criterion that materials include explicit instruction of the grammar and conventions standards for grade level as applied in increasingly sophisticated contexts, with opportunities for application both in and out of context. Materials include some explicit directions targeted at the instruction of grammar and convention standards; however, instruction around these topics is brief. There is an uneven increase in sophisticated contexts building in the first few collections and then declining in the ending collections.

Conventions and grammar are taught after the readings in a feature called Language Conventions. The text is referenced, and samples from it are included. Language conventions are not addressed during the reading and at the point of contact. No text-dependent questions appear to help students recognize grammatical structures within the context. Within this feature, there are brief opportunities for students to learn and practice grammatical and spelling conventions. Due to the short, random appearance of these activities, it may be unlikely that students will retain any information after the completion of four or five practice sentences.

Below are examples of targeted grammar and conventions from each collection:

  • Collection 1: imperative mood, participles, active and passive voice
  • Collection 2: using dashes, subject-verb agreement, subjunctive mood, and commas
  • Collection 3: conditional mood, indicative mood, and gerunds
  • Collection 4: infinitives, words ending in -ly, shifts in mood and voice, and fragments
  • Collection 5: use of ellipses
  • Collection 6: interrogative mood, semicolons, and run-ons

While Collections 1-3 appears to be building, Collection 4 includes sentence fragments, which should probably appear earlier in the year to support students as they are writing. Collection 5 only includes ellipses, and Collection 6 addresses semicolons and run-on sentences.

Minimal instruction is provided for all of the language conventions above. There is some application during the instruction, but the convention is not mentioned in the numerous writing tasks throughout the collection.